Ah, this is great. I love the cigar and the little detail of the smoke curling out of the sergal's nostrils, and the determined set of their mouth and jaw. "Tired, but I'll still mess you up" is absolutely conveyed.

Just the tiniest critique, I think that the torso might be a bit too long. I think that the square ammo pouches across their chest might have accidentally caused you to elongate the torso, because where the hips and groin seem to be placed VS where the rest of the armor sits on the body is disconnected. There's the lower abdominal plates, the middle 'gut' plate, and then the ammo packs, and then the upper chest plate. If you scooched everything up so that middle 'gut' plate was hidden beneath the ammo packs, I think this would look way more anatomically correct. Unless sergal torsos are longer than I remember???

I LOVE the armor you draw and the style that you bring, with these very emotive characters that convey feeling really exceptionally. It's always a treat to see your sketches! Your characters have such personality.

I thought the same for the torso myself but decided to change up the armor a bit to make it seem like that. Look at where his tail is and that is where or around where his torso should end I just haven't fixed the cup or armor around his crotch yet

And thank you

Ah ha! Yeah, I totally see it, now. Paying more attention to where the tail is set totally helped inform the rest of the anatomy so I could visualize it better. And you're very welcome!