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Surely enough it was INDEED a trap! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xK9xMMxJpdw :lol: little surprice there^^
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Uugh the colour scheme has been a really tough deal for me on this page, sicne I still feel that the background colours I've used for panel 2-4 are too dark. Green is after all compliment colour to red but still... I can't shake the feeling it makes the hole page feel too dark and unplesant to look at.. I don't know
I would love to get opinion on this as I've never been very good at picking the right colours.
Surely enough it was INDEED a trap! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xK9xMMxJpdw :lol: little surprice there^^
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Uugh the colour scheme has been a really tough deal for me on this page, sicne I still feel that the background colours I've used for panel 2-4 are too dark. Green is after all compliment colour to red but still... I can't shake the feeling it makes the hole page feel too dark and unplesant to look at.. I don't know
I would love to get opinion on this as I've never been very good at picking the right colours.
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I've read articles about colour, and it says that a good way to make a page vibrant is by choosing colours with little tints of grey for the background, and make the characters pop up with more pure colours. Also, for a scene like this, you cold have probably played with a little more intesity on the light source, given that is night and that lamp is the most direct illumination source.
Just some thoughts. Looking really great
Just some thoughts. Looking really great
I wouldn´t say that this coloring would look unpleasent to look at.
Maybe the light sources like the lanterns could be more bright to give it a more intense feeling of being a night scenario
But anything else, I think looks super awesome.
You did a very good job with the lineart and inking. It hardly can be seen by now that my sketches are below them, the pages now really look like they are out of your hands.
Maybe the light sources like the lanterns could be more bright to give it a more intense feeling of being a night scenario
But anything else, I think looks super awesome.
You did a very good job with the lineart and inking. It hardly can be seen by now that my sketches are below them, the pages now really look like they are out of your hands.
hmmm yea, I could and should make it more contrasted but I'll see if I bother going back and editing later^^
and thanks, I would have never managed to get the comic even close to this good looking wihtout your help so I need to start planning that epic birthday gift sooner than later ;)
and thanks, I would have never managed to get the comic even close to this good looking wihtout your help so I need to start planning that epic birthday gift sooner than later ;)
wow thanks mate! that means alot to hear from you!^^ and yea Levi is kinda adorable, in that unpreditable Stockholmsyndrom way^^
this is much thanks to
eternal.knot who sketched up the comic layouts and more for all 9 pages, since that's what I struggle the most when it comes to comics. but yea I hope to post one page every weekend which reminds me I need to get working on the next one^^
this is much thanks to
eternal.knot who sketched up the comic layouts and more for all 9 pages, since that's what I struggle the most when it comes to comics. but yea I hope to post one page every weekend which reminds me I need to get working on the next one^^
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