I can see this being really awesome, but I think the vocals still need some work. You need to mix them or EQ them or something; the quality is far, far below that of the music itself, and they kind of overwhelm the song. The "aaa" part isn't the best, either, you should consider rethinking how that fits into everything. It sounds flat and could use some emotion.

i'm gonna buy a new mic as soon as possible

That will no doubt help. :D

I agree the vocals do need a little more work. The sound is a little scratchy. I like the aaa part in the beggining. Its kinda like a soft warm up to get your attention. As for the cutting in and out of it later on has to be fixed. It seems very out of place and thrown over top of everything. If you faded it in and out that might sound better. And maybe drop the level of it so its more behind the music. Other than that the rest is nice. Deffinatly something I would listen too.

thank you =) i need a new mic

the vocals are a bit better in this.

thank you =) but need a new mic

yeah. You should try radio shack if there is one near you. They have mics for like 10$ and up. I had the 10$ one once. It wasn't too bad actually.