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(All this copied from Deviatart over here -> http://carbondragon1093.deviantart.com/ )
No, I didn't proofread this too well so I anticipate alot of mistakes...ignore them please.
Anywhoo, I really like this story. Its something that I literally wrote on a whim recently and it will be the thing I do for my 10K. I think its my best yet. Honestly, I think this could be made into a book if I tried hard enough, maybe even a movie. Its my version of how the world will be in a couple hundred years. Well, this is how I wish things were. Obviously I ain't in college, and I sure ain't no herpetologist. There will be a sequel, but it will only happen once saphire gets back and can help me write it since he's in there somewhere. SURPRISE SAPH!!
All © stuff is © to the owners (if i used any).
Juan Garcia is © to ~saphire-dragon
Lee Meeks is and is © to me (or would it be my parents?)
This story inspired by
ben300 for some odd reason.
If you need any of the stuff here explained, feel free to ask 'cause I ain't you and I don't know how your mind functions.
No, I didn't proofread this too well so I anticipate alot of mistakes...ignore them please.
Anywhoo, I really like this story. Its something that I literally wrote on a whim recently and it will be the thing I do for my 10K. I think its my best yet. Honestly, I think this could be made into a book if I tried hard enough, maybe even a movie. Its my version of how the world will be in a couple hundred years. Well, this is how I wish things were. Obviously I ain't in college, and I sure ain't no herpetologist. There will be a sequel, but it will only happen once saphire gets back and can help me write it since he's in there somewhere. SURPRISE SAPH!!
All © stuff is © to the owners (if i used any).
Juan Garcia is © to ~saphire-dragon
Lee Meeks is and is © to me (or would it be my parents?)
This story inspired by
ben300 for some odd reason.If you need any of the stuff here explained, feel free to ask 'cause I ain't you and I don't know how your mind functions.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Lizard
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 60 kB
Wow! Love the story! My favourite is step-by-step changing into a furry, and you showed it out very well. I'd love to hear when you do the sequel, and if it's not too much to ask, maybe do a few aside stories as well? I'm sure it would be fun to write from the SOA's point of view (second to original anthro).
Other than that, your writing style is clear and concise, but it seems maybe just a bit too much down to earth to me. I don't mean to put frills everywhere, but I don't know, maybe a few scenes showing the transformee in embarassing/accidental situations?
I'd also like it very much if you could rate what I've wrote so far. Thanks!
Other than that, your writing style is clear and concise, but it seems maybe just a bit too much down to earth to me. I don't mean to put frills everywhere, but I don't know, maybe a few scenes showing the transformee in embarassing/accidental situations?
I'd also like it very much if you could rate what I've wrote so far. Thanks!
Uuh, Second to Original Anthro? Sorry, I'm kinda new to internet/FA speak (which/whatever that might be)...sorry.
I've kinda noticed my style isn't exactly what 'fantasy' stories typically have. I plan to rewrite alot of my better works at some point now that I'm a bit better on details and such. I doubt there's gonna be a sequel to this ones unfortunately. I've fallen out of contact with nearly everyone in it (RL friends) and they did a good piece as far as helping me write it.
As far as embarrassing situations, I saw that you commented on my TND series (haven't read it as of this moment). There's more of those in there, but they're in the really early, scrappy parts of the story, so they're probably not exactly what you mean.
I've kinda noticed my style isn't exactly what 'fantasy' stories typically have. I plan to rewrite alot of my better works at some point now that I'm a bit better on details and such. I doubt there's gonna be a sequel to this ones unfortunately. I've fallen out of contact with nearly everyone in it (RL friends) and they did a good piece as far as helping me write it.
As far as embarrassing situations, I saw that you commented on my TND series (haven't read it as of this moment). There's more of those in there, but they're in the really early, scrappy parts of the story, so they're probably not exactly what you mean.
Ooooh wow I'm dense. Anyway, that's actually not where I was going with the sequel. I was thinking more of genetic experiment 2.0, combining more than 2 (human and species X) species' genes and then an assault on government places. (Heh, you can tell how long it's been since I wrote this ^.-.^; cause that may've been in the story.) And then I had planned for someone to come back as a major threat, but that won't happen thanks to him being a douschebag to me a few months after this was written.
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