My helpful suggestion:

FINISH IT - THE SKETCH LOOKS GREAT!

Workin' on that.....Just need to figure out the rest of the pic..... 7@=e

Wow! Now this is a delightful surprise! I've been thinking the Taur Dance should be made into a picture someday. But to find that it's being drawn already by a friend is a wonderful and most agreeable surprise.

My great thanks and admiration to you, Lucius! I see Charles Matthias, Garigan, and Brian Avery in this one. This does look great! Is there any way I can help you figure out the rest of the scene?

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Thanks! I've been rereading that story recently, just to get some of the details right. I just have to get the other figures in there, work up the general composition, &c. The hardest part, in the final piece, will be getting the lighting right - all those torches and multiple shadows...... 7@=e

What's a good medieval country dance without torches!

I'm really impressed by your dedication, Lucius. Again, I reiterate, if you want any suggestion or constructive feedback as you work on this, I am your grateful servant.

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