This here is a 10$ Commission that
LionBreed asked for.
It involves his Lion OC Daxter running into the Zebra leader Thruston (From "The Lion Guard"), and things escalate quickly.
In this thing he actually made something that was a mixture of "Commission" and "Collab" as he asked both me and
CreamsicleCat to work on the same thing.
I made the story, and she in return made a drawing of it. (That I am using parts of as my thumbnail.)
A link to her image can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21930619/
And here is a link to see how Daxter himself looks like: http://daxterd1.deviantart.com/art/.....50-1-367367158
Daxter belongs to
LionBreed
Thurston belongs to Disney.
Wandering across the lands of the savannahs was a lonely lion.
He had no group to be a part of, and just by the looks of him it was really hard to know any kind of lions that would look like him.
His name was Daxter and this young male's most noticeable features was that he had a chain necklace with an small head of a full-grown lion male made in iron, and a blue gemstone placed right between the eyes on his forehead.
He didn't seem to have started his journey with anyone else, but for the moment he looked like he wanted to try and make contact with someone. Anyone.
That's when he heard some voices nearby, and he decided to get down and crawl to sneak up and see who it was.
Hiding in the tall grass on top of a small hill Daxter looked on to see that it was two Zebra's talking to each other.
One seemed to be an average female, but the male seemed to be much more larger then life. (Or at least that was what HE himself was making it sound like, with his very self-confident tone.)
"Oh, come now Muhimu!" The male zebra said as the female one seemed to not be as interested in him. "You know that you would want to be together with the Great Leader of this pack."
"If it wasn't for me already being together with another guy and having a child with him, I still don't think I would be able to get more then 10 feet close to you Thurston." Muhimu said, and this confused the zebra leader named Thurston a lot as he asked back, "What do you mean by that?"
"With your ego taking up so much space I can sadly only meet you at distances." Muhimu said ironically before taking off and playfully shout, "See ya!"
"Well I never..." The disappointed Thurston said to himself. "Would I have to much of an ego? I can't help it that I am the best and bravest zebra leader that they have ever seen!"
Right at that moment Daxter had decided to walk over and talk to the male zebra now when he was alone (Thinking "He would be perfect to help me with my goal."), and he hadn't done more then tap one of his paw against the zebra's flank and say "Excuse me...", before Thurston started to scream in fear!
"AHHH!!! Panic and Run! Panic and Run!" He shouted as he started to run away in a circle pattern (That Zebra herds often did to confuse their enemies.), but given that he was all alone it just made him look like a confused fool as he constantly changed direction in his running.
And things wouldn't be any better then that Thurston in his "Panic and Run" state ended up running straight into Daxter, before falling onto his back helplessly as the weird lion was looking at him.
"Oh please no! Don't eat me!" The freighted zebra was screaming as he was shaking like a leaf.
Daxter on the other hand couldn't help but laugh a little over the situation as he said, "Heheh, no worries for that. In fact, I was wondering if you could be devouring me instead?"
"...Pardon?" Was all the now confused Thurston could say as Daxter lowered his head down to the fallen zebra's level and said, "I would be very happy if you could take in and swallow me whole and alive, and keep me in your belly."
"Are you insane or something?!" Thurston asked as he got back up again and took a few careful steps back from this strange lion that wanted this grass eater to consume him!
"Not really. I just...enjoy getting eaten a lot." Daxter said in the best way he could to try and sound normal. (But it clearly did nothing to change Thurston's view of it.)
"A lot?! You mean you have been eaten by other? How the heck did you survive that?!" Thurston asked as he was highly considering running away before this lion decides to change the roles back to "normal" again.
"That's a pretty long story, but I assure you that I think we both will love it. You get a great big meal to digest, and I get to sleep in a nice warm belly." Daxter said as a way to "Sell" the idea of reverse food chain roles for Thurston.
This time the zebra didn't seem take any more steps back as it seemed that the lion was actually serious about the whole deal, and no matter what Thurston didn't seem likely to end up on this predator's meal at least.
"Let's say that even if I wanted to (Which I would never), how exactly would I be able to fit you inside me to swallow you whole?" Thurston asked as a way to use simple logic to make Daxter stop with his crazy request. (Even if he himself also was wondering if that would even bite on this insane creature.)
"I'm pretty sure that you have never tried just how far those jaws of yours can open up, and what they are capable of swallowing." Daxter said as he slowly got closer to Thurston, before then trying to prove his point and open up the jaws. (Which Thurston quickly backed away from.)
"Get those paws away from my mouth!" He said as he now was starting to lose his patience with this silly lion. "I am still the leader of the zebras on these lands, and I demand to be treated with some levels of respect by everyone else!"
This was the moment when Daxter came up with the perfect idea to make his vorish wishes come true, as he started to act a bit more cocky and ask, "You mean in the same way as that female zebra respected you when she left you all alone?"
"T-That was different! She was already taken, and therefore I saw no reason to try and win her over to me." Thurston tried to excuse himself with, but Daxter saw that this was his key to success as he continued on with more!
"Sure, and that's why she also made sure to make fun of your ego right before she left. Probably wished that everything on the savannah was focusing all it's attention on you..." Daxter said before having Thurston suddenly pound at him with such force that it actually knocked the air out of his lungs for a seconds.
"Stop. It!" Thurston said as he was starting to grow really impatience with Daxter pushing his buttons, and that only encouraged him to go even further.
"Pretty sure you could stop me now if you used that big mouth of yours to swallow me up." Daxter suggested, and it seemed to have finally snapped for the super annoyed zebra as he only shouted "Fine!" before opening up and capturing the lion's entire head in his mouth!
Both Daxter and Thurston was very surprised by what had just happen, and while Daxter was more then ready to get further down it took a few seconds before the zebra decided to continue on with what he had started. (This was the lion that had decided to make fun of him a lot after all.)
As Thurston kept swallowing down his now lion prey he could feel the feline making what seemed like movements of struggle, but in reality it was of Daxter trying to help getting down into the zebra gullet a lot quicker.
Thanks to both of them trying to achieve the same goal Daxter was completely swallowed up in only a few big gulps, and in no time he found himself curled up nicely and relaxed inside of his latest predator.
For Thurston it felt both so weird and wrong in a way as he had just been devouring a lion whole and alive! (And the extended weight from his bloated and hanging gut wasn't making things any better.)
"W-Why...BURP!...on earth did you make me do that?!" Thurston asked as he first practiced on getting his air back, before taking a few careful (and wobbling) steps around with his swaying belly.
"Just thought it would be fun to let you get a chance to taste something else then grass for a change." Daxter said from the inside and added "Don't you agree that I tasted very well?", to which while he couldn't see it Thurston ended up blushing his cheeks a bit and said, "Maybe a little bit, yes."
"Ha, ha, I knew there was a bit of a meat eater in you!" Daxter said as he knocked on the stomach walls for his buddy, making the zebra almost tumble over in the process and shout "Don't do that please!"
"Ops! Sorry." Daxter said as he tried to lay as still as possible for Thurston.
"And what will the others think of me?!" Thurston suddenly asked out loudly, as his nerves started to have him wrapped up again. "If someone figures out I ate a lion the king might have me exiled from Pride Lands! Or even worse, want to punish me the same way back!"
This time it was Daxter time to tell the other one to calm down, as the nervous stepping on the spot was making the whole stomach chamber jiggle and shake like crazy.
"You can just say that you spotted an intruder that was going to be a great danger, and the only way for you to stop it was to simply eat them." Daxter said, to which Thurston nervously asked back, "Are you sure they would believe me?"
"Trust me. If there is anything I can tell you do best it is making lies sound real. That' why you are the leader for the herd." Daxter said playfully, and while not liking the little bit of satire towards his leadership skills it did make Thurston feel a lot more calmer.
"I guess you are right. If I am lucky I might have made my belly shrink in digestion before it looks to big to be suspicious..." Thurston said before realising that he was brining up the eventual fait of the lion he had just ate.
"I'm so sorry! I didn't meant to remind you of that!" Thurston said before having Daxter cut him off and saying that, "I will be fine pal! And if I am able to I will make sure to visit you more times so you can eat me again and again!"
"Really? You would do that for me?" Thurston said with a bit of a tear in his eye (Both for him getting to have a friend, and for getting a chance to have a safe lion meal again) before having reality hit back and ask, "But you will be dead soon! How are you suppose to come back?!"
"Believe me, I have my methods! You just focus now on acting natural and I will do the rest." Daxter said before deciding to take a nap inside.
Thurston still didn't fully understand how this weird lion was going to pull off what he was promising, but since he didn't want any of his fellow zebras (or other animals) to notice anything strange he continued back to just causally eating grass, and hoping that his belly would shrink down a lot soon.
Inside the belly Daxter was not scared at all about what would happen to him, since thanks to his magical gemstone on his head he was soon going to be able to leave this place in a new body in the same lion shape as before, while the old one would be left to digest and become added fat onto the zebra. (Giving the best of both worlds.)
"Thanks to this trusty stone it wont be the last time I am seeing the insides of this zebra's stripes." Daxter said before feeling like falling asleep, as the gemstone in his forehead starts to glow up and prepare him for awakening soon into his next body.
LionBreed asked for.It involves his Lion OC Daxter running into the Zebra leader Thruston (From "The Lion Guard"), and things escalate quickly.
In this thing he actually made something that was a mixture of "Commission" and "Collab" as he asked both me and
CreamsicleCat to work on the same thing.I made the story, and she in return made a drawing of it. (That I am using parts of as my thumbnail.)
A link to her image can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21930619/
And here is a link to see how Daxter himself looks like: http://daxterd1.deviantart.com/art/.....50-1-367367158
Daxter belongs to
LionBreedThurston belongs to Disney.
Wandering across the lands of the savannahs was a lonely lion.
He had no group to be a part of, and just by the looks of him it was really hard to know any kind of lions that would look like him.
His name was Daxter and this young male's most noticeable features was that he had a chain necklace with an small head of a full-grown lion male made in iron, and a blue gemstone placed right between the eyes on his forehead.
He didn't seem to have started his journey with anyone else, but for the moment he looked like he wanted to try and make contact with someone. Anyone.
That's when he heard some voices nearby, and he decided to get down and crawl to sneak up and see who it was.
Hiding in the tall grass on top of a small hill Daxter looked on to see that it was two Zebra's talking to each other.
One seemed to be an average female, but the male seemed to be much more larger then life. (Or at least that was what HE himself was making it sound like, with his very self-confident tone.)
"Oh, come now Muhimu!" The male zebra said as the female one seemed to not be as interested in him. "You know that you would want to be together with the Great Leader of this pack."
"If it wasn't for me already being together with another guy and having a child with him, I still don't think I would be able to get more then 10 feet close to you Thurston." Muhimu said, and this confused the zebra leader named Thurston a lot as he asked back, "What do you mean by that?"
"With your ego taking up so much space I can sadly only meet you at distances." Muhimu said ironically before taking off and playfully shout, "See ya!"
"Well I never..." The disappointed Thurston said to himself. "Would I have to much of an ego? I can't help it that I am the best and bravest zebra leader that they have ever seen!"
Right at that moment Daxter had decided to walk over and talk to the male zebra now when he was alone (Thinking "He would be perfect to help me with my goal."), and he hadn't done more then tap one of his paw against the zebra's flank and say "Excuse me...", before Thurston started to scream in fear!
"AHHH!!! Panic and Run! Panic and Run!" He shouted as he started to run away in a circle pattern (That Zebra herds often did to confuse their enemies.), but given that he was all alone it just made him look like a confused fool as he constantly changed direction in his running.
And things wouldn't be any better then that Thurston in his "Panic and Run" state ended up running straight into Daxter, before falling onto his back helplessly as the weird lion was looking at him.
"Oh please no! Don't eat me!" The freighted zebra was screaming as he was shaking like a leaf.
Daxter on the other hand couldn't help but laugh a little over the situation as he said, "Heheh, no worries for that. In fact, I was wondering if you could be devouring me instead?"
"...Pardon?" Was all the now confused Thurston could say as Daxter lowered his head down to the fallen zebra's level and said, "I would be very happy if you could take in and swallow me whole and alive, and keep me in your belly."
"Are you insane or something?!" Thurston asked as he got back up again and took a few careful steps back from this strange lion that wanted this grass eater to consume him!
"Not really. I just...enjoy getting eaten a lot." Daxter said in the best way he could to try and sound normal. (But it clearly did nothing to change Thurston's view of it.)
"A lot?! You mean you have been eaten by other? How the heck did you survive that?!" Thurston asked as he was highly considering running away before this lion decides to change the roles back to "normal" again.
"That's a pretty long story, but I assure you that I think we both will love it. You get a great big meal to digest, and I get to sleep in a nice warm belly." Daxter said as a way to "Sell" the idea of reverse food chain roles for Thurston.
This time the zebra didn't seem take any more steps back as it seemed that the lion was actually serious about the whole deal, and no matter what Thurston didn't seem likely to end up on this predator's meal at least.
"Let's say that even if I wanted to (Which I would never), how exactly would I be able to fit you inside me to swallow you whole?" Thurston asked as a way to use simple logic to make Daxter stop with his crazy request. (Even if he himself also was wondering if that would even bite on this insane creature.)
"I'm pretty sure that you have never tried just how far those jaws of yours can open up, and what they are capable of swallowing." Daxter said as he slowly got closer to Thurston, before then trying to prove his point and open up the jaws. (Which Thurston quickly backed away from.)
"Get those paws away from my mouth!" He said as he now was starting to lose his patience with this silly lion. "I am still the leader of the zebras on these lands, and I demand to be treated with some levels of respect by everyone else!"
This was the moment when Daxter came up with the perfect idea to make his vorish wishes come true, as he started to act a bit more cocky and ask, "You mean in the same way as that female zebra respected you when she left you all alone?"
"T-That was different! She was already taken, and therefore I saw no reason to try and win her over to me." Thurston tried to excuse himself with, but Daxter saw that this was his key to success as he continued on with more!
"Sure, and that's why she also made sure to make fun of your ego right before she left. Probably wished that everything on the savannah was focusing all it's attention on you..." Daxter said before having Thurston suddenly pound at him with such force that it actually knocked the air out of his lungs for a seconds.
"Stop. It!" Thurston said as he was starting to grow really impatience with Daxter pushing his buttons, and that only encouraged him to go even further.
"Pretty sure you could stop me now if you used that big mouth of yours to swallow me up." Daxter suggested, and it seemed to have finally snapped for the super annoyed zebra as he only shouted "Fine!" before opening up and capturing the lion's entire head in his mouth!
Both Daxter and Thurston was very surprised by what had just happen, and while Daxter was more then ready to get further down it took a few seconds before the zebra decided to continue on with what he had started. (This was the lion that had decided to make fun of him a lot after all.)
As Thurston kept swallowing down his now lion prey he could feel the feline making what seemed like movements of struggle, but in reality it was of Daxter trying to help getting down into the zebra gullet a lot quicker.
Thanks to both of them trying to achieve the same goal Daxter was completely swallowed up in only a few big gulps, and in no time he found himself curled up nicely and relaxed inside of his latest predator.
For Thurston it felt both so weird and wrong in a way as he had just been devouring a lion whole and alive! (And the extended weight from his bloated and hanging gut wasn't making things any better.)
"W-Why...BURP!...on earth did you make me do that?!" Thurston asked as he first practiced on getting his air back, before taking a few careful (and wobbling) steps around with his swaying belly.
"Just thought it would be fun to let you get a chance to taste something else then grass for a change." Daxter said from the inside and added "Don't you agree that I tasted very well?", to which while he couldn't see it Thurston ended up blushing his cheeks a bit and said, "Maybe a little bit, yes."
"Ha, ha, I knew there was a bit of a meat eater in you!" Daxter said as he knocked on the stomach walls for his buddy, making the zebra almost tumble over in the process and shout "Don't do that please!"
"Ops! Sorry." Daxter said as he tried to lay as still as possible for Thurston.
"And what will the others think of me?!" Thurston suddenly asked out loudly, as his nerves started to have him wrapped up again. "If someone figures out I ate a lion the king might have me exiled from Pride Lands! Or even worse, want to punish me the same way back!"
This time it was Daxter time to tell the other one to calm down, as the nervous stepping on the spot was making the whole stomach chamber jiggle and shake like crazy.
"You can just say that you spotted an intruder that was going to be a great danger, and the only way for you to stop it was to simply eat them." Daxter said, to which Thurston nervously asked back, "Are you sure they would believe me?"
"Trust me. If there is anything I can tell you do best it is making lies sound real. That' why you are the leader for the herd." Daxter said playfully, and while not liking the little bit of satire towards his leadership skills it did make Thurston feel a lot more calmer.
"I guess you are right. If I am lucky I might have made my belly shrink in digestion before it looks to big to be suspicious..." Thurston said before realising that he was brining up the eventual fait of the lion he had just ate.
"I'm so sorry! I didn't meant to remind you of that!" Thurston said before having Daxter cut him off and saying that, "I will be fine pal! And if I am able to I will make sure to visit you more times so you can eat me again and again!"
"Really? You would do that for me?" Thurston said with a bit of a tear in his eye (Both for him getting to have a friend, and for getting a chance to have a safe lion meal again) before having reality hit back and ask, "But you will be dead soon! How are you suppose to come back?!"
"Believe me, I have my methods! You just focus now on acting natural and I will do the rest." Daxter said before deciding to take a nap inside.
Thurston still didn't fully understand how this weird lion was going to pull off what he was promising, but since he didn't want any of his fellow zebras (or other animals) to notice anything strange he continued back to just causally eating grass, and hoping that his belly would shrink down a lot soon.
Inside the belly Daxter was not scared at all about what would happen to him, since thanks to his magical gemstone on his head he was soon going to be able to leave this place in a new body in the same lion shape as before, while the old one would be left to digest and become added fat onto the zebra. (Giving the best of both worlds.)
"Thanks to this trusty stone it wont be the last time I am seeing the insides of this zebra's stripes." Daxter said before feeling like falling asleep, as the gemstone in his forehead starts to glow up and prepare him for awakening soon into his next body.
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