Should Garo try to fly although his life is put in danger? Who was right? Kaaliiz? Garo? Neither? Both? Should one play it safe or live it up? Is Kaaliiz correct to make the bold claim that anybody can achieve confidence and success, or are some in fact simply doomed to despair and failure?
This story was focused on the prospect of dragons and flight; however, the moral of the story is intended to apply to any sort of innate natural struggle.
Please feel free to agree, disagree, or comment in any form or fashion. Constructive criticism is always welcome whether it be based on content or structure. I look forward to reading your comments.
Wow, about time I finally finished this. It's been over two months since I said I would write this dialogue. Admittedly, it took more effort than I anticipated and classes kept me quite busy. I hope it was worth the wait though ^.=.^
This was inspired by Socratic dialogues; however, if it was a true dialogue, there would be no description or emoting of any kind. It would be just straight up conversation. That felt a little too bland to me though, so I added a little bit of description and emoting nonetheless.
Unfortunately, it's unlikely that I will write more of these. It took more time and effort than I would have liked. It was an interesting experience nonetheless though, and I hope to continue it in the comments :D
Have a wonderful night, everyone!
This story was focused on the prospect of dragons and flight; however, the moral of the story is intended to apply to any sort of innate natural struggle.
Please feel free to agree, disagree, or comment in any form or fashion. Constructive criticism is always welcome whether it be based on content or structure. I look forward to reading your comments.
Wow, about time I finally finished this. It's been over two months since I said I would write this dialogue. Admittedly, it took more effort than I anticipated and classes kept me quite busy. I hope it was worth the wait though ^.=.^
This was inspired by Socratic dialogues; however, if it was a true dialogue, there would be no description or emoting of any kind. It would be just straight up conversation. That felt a little too bland to me though, so I added a little bit of description and emoting nonetheless.
Unfortunately, it's unlikely that I will write more of these. It took more time and effort than I would have liked. It was an interesting experience nonetheless though, and I hope to continue it in the comments :D
Have a wonderful night, everyone!
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Western Dragon
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Thanks for reading! Yeah, sometimes we just gotta push on through ^.=.^
But yes, I see. I might have pretty much zero experience with art, but it does seem to take a tremendous amount of effort and practice to excel at. I have no doubt that's very difficult, and I wish you the best of luck.
As for whether or not it's a wasted effort, that will be for you to decide. I can't tell you what you should be focusing your efforts into: what's a waste and what isn't. The answer isn't the same for everyone.
What I can say is that whatever you feel truly is your dream: whatever you ultimately decide to push yourself to pursue, I'm sure you can pull it off if you keep it it! :D
But yes, I see. I might have pretty much zero experience with art, but it does seem to take a tremendous amount of effort and practice to excel at. I have no doubt that's very difficult, and I wish you the best of luck.
As for whether or not it's a wasted effort, that will be for you to decide. I can't tell you what you should be focusing your efforts into: what's a waste and what isn't. The answer isn't the same for everyone.
What I can say is that whatever you feel truly is your dream: whatever you ultimately decide to push yourself to pursue, I'm sure you can pull it off if you keep it it! :D
I agree. decided that if I want to get anywhere I need to manage my time better, so now I'm using time managent software to track when I change activites. I think reviewing not so great weeks will help me focus my time better. It is a way of breaking bad habits for me.
I can feel my emotional state deteriorating for various reasons. I think the best way to keep it up is to remain productive and active probably. I love making art that people love, and that takes time. If that is what it takes though, it is time well spent.
I have long since realized there are issues that I can't solve, even with people I know personally. I have personal problems that there may not be an answer to. In some situations, the best thing I can do is to provide ears to listen and a shoulder to cry on. Sometimes that is all that is needed for a friendship.
I can feel my emotional state deteriorating for various reasons. I think the best way to keep it up is to remain productive and active probably. I love making art that people love, and that takes time. If that is what it takes though, it is time well spent.
I have long since realized there are issues that I can't solve, even with people I know personally. I have personal problems that there may not be an answer to. In some situations, the best thing I can do is to provide ears to listen and a shoulder to cry on. Sometimes that is all that is needed for a friendship.
Oh thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it inspirational. That really means a lot ^.=.^
Yeah, you're probably right. It felt a bit clunky, but at the same time I worried things would get mixed up whenever I did the little emotes inbetween the dialogue.
And well, I'm glad some, like you, enjoyed it. At times I've thought of writing more... I may reconsider it sometime, but I'm not sure.
But seriously, thank you again. I really appreciate it
Yeah, you're probably right. It felt a bit clunky, but at the same time I worried things would get mixed up whenever I did the little emotes inbetween the dialogue.
And well, I'm glad some, like you, enjoyed it. At times I've thought of writing more... I may reconsider it sometime, but I'm not sure.
But seriously, thank you again. I really appreciate it
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