The Space Filling Palkia pt. 1 + Bonus Story
I am so sorry for taking so long on this, i have had a lot of stuff happen and i am sorry. So on the other hand here is Boomheadshot's second suggestion story since nobody else took the slot when it was open. The story at the end was just a small story i wrote while talking with a friend so enjoy both stories. Now onto something i have to ask, are you all still enjoying my stories, if not tell what i should change, if you do tell me in the comments. Also i put up a journal that explains something, pleas take a look at it, if anyone could help that would be great.
Enjoy
Space dimension… Date and time unknown…
“Ugh, why is every day here so boring. There is literally nothing here but a few planets and more food than a all you can eat buffet, though I'm ok with the food.” Wespa said as she flew space poking her fat body. She was a female Palkia who lived in space and also ruled it since it was created. She also was a bit heavier than usual, instead of being around 700 pounds she was at 4.5k pounds.
Her reason, she was always bored, mainly because living for thousands of years and remaining young is not as fun as many Pokemon think. So with her immortality she decided to gain weight for fun, but today was different, she wanted to become more than her 4.5k self, she decided to become a space filler.
1 hour later… Uninhabited planet but has many fruit plants…
Wespa sat on the green grass of a lonely planet that was only about a few thousand miles from her house/planet where she lived. She sat under a large tree that had plenty of an odd red fruit with blue speckles on it. This was also a special fruit since it was very high in calories with each fruit having about 3k calories in each fruit. Plus these fruit and not been touched for months so they were about twice their standard size, making them have around 6.5k calories in each fruit.
Wespa stood up and grabbed her massive basket and flew around the tree, picking fruit and filling her basket. She set her basket down and looked at it, she picked about 35 berries. She smiled and felt her stomach rumble. She looked around and saw many more trees of different fruit, but another tree caught her eye,
She flew over to the tree and grabbed one of the berries. It was all white with a blue stem and was about the size of her claw. She shrugged and ate the berry to the core. She licked her lips and, the fruit was delicious and also had a special effect on Wespa, her body instantly gained 20 pounds. She smiled and slapped her soft belly as she picked about 10 more berries.
Wespa’s planet… 1 hour later…
Wespa sat her table with the pile of berries in front of her. Her chair she sat on creaked under her fat body. She licked her lips and grabbed berry after berry and chowed them down. She smiled when she felt new fat pile onto her body. She finished the berries fairly quickly and was surprised by how little weight she gained, being only 305 pounds.
Wespa frowned on how little she gained. She wanted more fat, and she wanted to get it now. She stood up, relieving the chair from breaking. She pondered on what to do to get the weight she wanted. An idea finally popped into her head, she should stay on the planet where the special fruit are and eat them when she felt like it. She smiled at the idea and flew of for the planet.
The fruit planet…
Wespa landed next to the white fruit tree and looked up at them. She was surprised on how many berries there were, she probably counted hundreds of berries. She smiled and looked at the red and blue fruit tree and again saw hundreds of them. She then flew over to a tree with pink berries. She picked one and chowed it down, tossing the core aside. She smiled as it had a sweet flavor to it and what followed was very surprising.
She felt her body explode with fat as she grew. Her body increasing in size. The swelling soon stopped as her weight had now doubled, bringing her to 9.6k pounds, but only on the tree were 2 more berries, she had to use them wisely to maximize her gaining. Wespa continued looking around the small planet, looking for new fruit to try. Another tree soon caught her eye, it's green and pink fruit drew her towards it.
She picked one of the fruit and bit into it and soon finishing it. The berry had a very bitter taste to it, and it's a effects were also a bit different. Wespa felt a searing pain in her stomach, it felt as if she had not been fed for a millennium. She slowly hobbled her way back to the red and blue berry tree and punched the tree. Around 80 berries fell to the ground as Wespa dug in.
Ten minutes passed and Wespa had eaten every berry to their core, leaving barely any edible fruit on the cores. She still felt as if her stomach was shriveling up, so again she punched the tree and ate more berries, she repeated the same steps again, and again, and again. Soon the tree only had leaves on it and below it sat Wespa now weighing in at 11.3k pounds. She now was decently full and sat under the tree, thinking of what to do next. Until, pop, a new idea appeared, all she needed was a hunger fruit and more gaining berries.
2 hours later… Fruit planet sunset…
Wespa sat in the grassy meadow that was about a mile from all the special trees. The colorful flowers dotted the meadow, and a large lake with a waterfall was only 50 feet away. She also had about 700 berries in from of her. She had the instant weight fruit, some dark blue berry, some white and orange berry, and some shiny silver berry. Each berry had around 150-200 berries in each pile.
Wespa grabbed a silver berry and ate it, the effect was also different. She felt her psychic powers heighten just ever so slightly, allowing her to lift heavier objects with her levitation. She chowed down the rest of them and felt her powers rise, sadly though the berries did not have many calories in them. Next was the dark blue berry, she ate one and instantly felt like she ate multiple thanksgiving dinners in one sitting, causing her to gain about 550 pounds. She smiled and used her magic to levitate the berries into her mouth.
1 hour later… Fruit planet night time...
Wespa smiled as her body gurgled with fullness. With those berries her weight more than quintupled, bringing her to exactly 57k pounds. She smiled as she felt her claws sink into her flab, but two more piles of berries remained. Next was the white and orange berries, and their effects were more than pleasing. She ate one and felt as if food was rushing down her throat. She tasted cakes, ice cream, pies and much more. She gain 345 pounds just from one berry.
35 minutes later… Night time…
Wespa sighed in relief as her body grumbled and groaned from the amount of berry effects that it felt. She jiggled her now 61.3k pound frame and gave a hearty laugh. She finally spoke to herself, “this is so much fun. I got to find more berries.” She looked at the final pile of berries as she levitated them towards her mouth and quickly finishing them.
She was in pure bliss, but she still was hungry, she wanted more. She looked at the lake and pointed her claw at it. She lifted a small bit of water and swallowed it, and to her surprise it wasn't water, it was soda for some reason. She shrugged and pointed her claw at the lake, and through her increased power, levitated the entire lake towards her without breaking a sweat. She opens her mouth and started drinking.
3 hours later… Sunrise…
Wespa now finished every last drop of soda that even flowed from the waterfall. Her body was all sloshy now and also she could hear the soda fizzing inside her stomach. She smiled as her new body, weighing in at 112.4k pounds, now covered a small part of the meadow. She used her powers to levitate her body, since flying was not even possible anymore, around the planet while also using her powers to grab fruit and eat them.
1 day later… Sunrise…
The planet now was barren, not even a berry in sight, instead sat a 678.7k pound Palkia. Cores piled up to the atmosphere now lied next to her as she slept soundly. While around her neck sat a pouch she made, containing the last two weight doubler berries.
End of Part 1 of 3
Results:
Wespa:
Start: 4k pounds
End: 678.7k pounds
BONUS STORY: Spyro’s Chili Disaster:
Note: this is a short story, it's meant to be really short. Also was made in only a half hour.
Spyro's lied on the roof of his cottage, soaking up the sunlight’s warn rays. The sun shone brightly in the noon sky. Spyro's bathing though was rudely interrupted by his stomach grumbling. Spyro frowned, he was enjoying the sunlight, but when his stomach needs food, he has to eat.
Spyro's flew down from his roof and went inside. He entered his kitchen and was surprised to see a bowl of chili sitting on his counter. He read the note that sat next to it:
Dear Spyro,
Please enjoy this special chili I made for you.
From Eon
Spyro laughed and grabbed the bowl and scarfed down the chili. The chili had a very nice spice to it and gave his stomach a nice warm feeling. Spyro let out a loud burp and sat on his couch. Spyro rubbed his gut as he was not hungry anymore.
After a couple minutes Spyro began to feel a tingling sensation. Spyro put his claw on his stomach in confusion and felt it was surprisingly warmer than usual. Spyro’s face went from showing confusion, to displaying shock. He watched as his stomach began swelling outwards with fire. His stomach swelled and swelled, and soon his gut was the size of a basketball and still growing also giving off a orange and red glow.
Spyro was at a loss for words, he never imagined he would become a Spyro balloon. Spyro continued to grow with no end in sight. He stood up, his belly now almost touching the ground, as he made his way to the door and to the outside. He swung the door open and watched as his stomach now lifted his legs of the ground and also his legs also being absorbed into his growing body.
Spyro now was a balloon of his former self, his legs now at a 45 degree angle and his body now glowed a bright and vibrant orange and his head was now sucked into his body. Spyro was actually happy.
The End
Enjoy
Space dimension… Date and time unknown…
“Ugh, why is every day here so boring. There is literally nothing here but a few planets and more food than a all you can eat buffet, though I'm ok with the food.” Wespa said as she flew space poking her fat body. She was a female Palkia who lived in space and also ruled it since it was created. She also was a bit heavier than usual, instead of being around 700 pounds she was at 4.5k pounds.
Her reason, she was always bored, mainly because living for thousands of years and remaining young is not as fun as many Pokemon think. So with her immortality she decided to gain weight for fun, but today was different, she wanted to become more than her 4.5k self, she decided to become a space filler.
1 hour later… Uninhabited planet but has many fruit plants…
Wespa sat on the green grass of a lonely planet that was only about a few thousand miles from her house/planet where she lived. She sat under a large tree that had plenty of an odd red fruit with blue speckles on it. This was also a special fruit since it was very high in calories with each fruit having about 3k calories in each fruit. Plus these fruit and not been touched for months so they were about twice their standard size, making them have around 6.5k calories in each fruit.
Wespa stood up and grabbed her massive basket and flew around the tree, picking fruit and filling her basket. She set her basket down and looked at it, she picked about 35 berries. She smiled and felt her stomach rumble. She looked around and saw many more trees of different fruit, but another tree caught her eye,
She flew over to the tree and grabbed one of the berries. It was all white with a blue stem and was about the size of her claw. She shrugged and ate the berry to the core. She licked her lips and, the fruit was delicious and also had a special effect on Wespa, her body instantly gained 20 pounds. She smiled and slapped her soft belly as she picked about 10 more berries.
Wespa’s planet… 1 hour later…
Wespa sat her table with the pile of berries in front of her. Her chair she sat on creaked under her fat body. She licked her lips and grabbed berry after berry and chowed them down. She smiled when she felt new fat pile onto her body. She finished the berries fairly quickly and was surprised by how little weight she gained, being only 305 pounds.
Wespa frowned on how little she gained. She wanted more fat, and she wanted to get it now. She stood up, relieving the chair from breaking. She pondered on what to do to get the weight she wanted. An idea finally popped into her head, she should stay on the planet where the special fruit are and eat them when she felt like it. She smiled at the idea and flew of for the planet.
The fruit planet…
Wespa landed next to the white fruit tree and looked up at them. She was surprised on how many berries there were, she probably counted hundreds of berries. She smiled and looked at the red and blue fruit tree and again saw hundreds of them. She then flew over to a tree with pink berries. She picked one and chowed it down, tossing the core aside. She smiled as it had a sweet flavor to it and what followed was very surprising.
She felt her body explode with fat as she grew. Her body increasing in size. The swelling soon stopped as her weight had now doubled, bringing her to 9.6k pounds, but only on the tree were 2 more berries, she had to use them wisely to maximize her gaining. Wespa continued looking around the small planet, looking for new fruit to try. Another tree soon caught her eye, it's green and pink fruit drew her towards it.
She picked one of the fruit and bit into it and soon finishing it. The berry had a very bitter taste to it, and it's a effects were also a bit different. Wespa felt a searing pain in her stomach, it felt as if she had not been fed for a millennium. She slowly hobbled her way back to the red and blue berry tree and punched the tree. Around 80 berries fell to the ground as Wespa dug in.
Ten minutes passed and Wespa had eaten every berry to their core, leaving barely any edible fruit on the cores. She still felt as if her stomach was shriveling up, so again she punched the tree and ate more berries, she repeated the same steps again, and again, and again. Soon the tree only had leaves on it and below it sat Wespa now weighing in at 11.3k pounds. She now was decently full and sat under the tree, thinking of what to do next. Until, pop, a new idea appeared, all she needed was a hunger fruit and more gaining berries.
2 hours later… Fruit planet sunset…
Wespa sat in the grassy meadow that was about a mile from all the special trees. The colorful flowers dotted the meadow, and a large lake with a waterfall was only 50 feet away. She also had about 700 berries in from of her. She had the instant weight fruit, some dark blue berry, some white and orange berry, and some shiny silver berry. Each berry had around 150-200 berries in each pile.
Wespa grabbed a silver berry and ate it, the effect was also different. She felt her psychic powers heighten just ever so slightly, allowing her to lift heavier objects with her levitation. She chowed down the rest of them and felt her powers rise, sadly though the berries did not have many calories in them. Next was the dark blue berry, she ate one and instantly felt like she ate multiple thanksgiving dinners in one sitting, causing her to gain about 550 pounds. She smiled and used her magic to levitate the berries into her mouth.
1 hour later… Fruit planet night time...
Wespa smiled as her body gurgled with fullness. With those berries her weight more than quintupled, bringing her to exactly 57k pounds. She smiled as she felt her claws sink into her flab, but two more piles of berries remained. Next was the white and orange berries, and their effects were more than pleasing. She ate one and felt as if food was rushing down her throat. She tasted cakes, ice cream, pies and much more. She gain 345 pounds just from one berry.
35 minutes later… Night time…
Wespa sighed in relief as her body grumbled and groaned from the amount of berry effects that it felt. She jiggled her now 61.3k pound frame and gave a hearty laugh. She finally spoke to herself, “this is so much fun. I got to find more berries.” She looked at the final pile of berries as she levitated them towards her mouth and quickly finishing them.
She was in pure bliss, but she still was hungry, she wanted more. She looked at the lake and pointed her claw at it. She lifted a small bit of water and swallowed it, and to her surprise it wasn't water, it was soda for some reason. She shrugged and pointed her claw at the lake, and through her increased power, levitated the entire lake towards her without breaking a sweat. She opens her mouth and started drinking.
3 hours later… Sunrise…
Wespa now finished every last drop of soda that even flowed from the waterfall. Her body was all sloshy now and also she could hear the soda fizzing inside her stomach. She smiled as her new body, weighing in at 112.4k pounds, now covered a small part of the meadow. She used her powers to levitate her body, since flying was not even possible anymore, around the planet while also using her powers to grab fruit and eat them.
1 day later… Sunrise…
The planet now was barren, not even a berry in sight, instead sat a 678.7k pound Palkia. Cores piled up to the atmosphere now lied next to her as she slept soundly. While around her neck sat a pouch she made, containing the last two weight doubler berries.
End of Part 1 of 3
Results:
Wespa:
Start: 4k pounds
End: 678.7k pounds
BONUS STORY: Spyro’s Chili Disaster:
Note: this is a short story, it's meant to be really short. Also was made in only a half hour.
Spyro's lied on the roof of his cottage, soaking up the sunlight’s warn rays. The sun shone brightly in the noon sky. Spyro's bathing though was rudely interrupted by his stomach grumbling. Spyro frowned, he was enjoying the sunlight, but when his stomach needs food, he has to eat.
Spyro's flew down from his roof and went inside. He entered his kitchen and was surprised to see a bowl of chili sitting on his counter. He read the note that sat next to it:
Dear Spyro,
Please enjoy this special chili I made for you.
From Eon
Spyro laughed and grabbed the bowl and scarfed down the chili. The chili had a very nice spice to it and gave his stomach a nice warm feeling. Spyro let out a loud burp and sat on his couch. Spyro rubbed his gut as he was not hungry anymore.
After a couple minutes Spyro began to feel a tingling sensation. Spyro put his claw on his stomach in confusion and felt it was surprisingly warmer than usual. Spyro’s face went from showing confusion, to displaying shock. He watched as his stomach began swelling outwards with fire. His stomach swelled and swelled, and soon his gut was the size of a basketball and still growing also giving off a orange and red glow.
Spyro was at a loss for words, he never imagined he would become a Spyro balloon. Spyro continued to grow with no end in sight. He stood up, his belly now almost touching the ground, as he made his way to the door and to the outside. He swung the door open and watched as his stomach now lifted his legs of the ground and also his legs also being absorbed into his growing body.
Spyro now was a balloon of his former self, his legs now at a 45 degree angle and his body now glowed a bright and vibrant orange and his head was now sucked into his body. Spyro was actually happy.
The End
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I really enjoyed this one. This is going to be awesome!
Them two instant doubler berries tho. My suggestions for them She could end up with a much better idea. She could plant one of them or both berries that doubled her weight in a super fertilizer patch. She would of course care for the new two weight doubler plants and wait. It would take a day or two. But in the end. She knew It will be totally worth the weight in fat.
when the newly grown weight doubler trees are finished. they start to sport loads and loads of berries. Making it Ideal for the Female Palkia to keep on making more and eating many of them as well.
What do you think pal? I think that will help her get to the Mega weights.
Them two instant doubler berries tho. My suggestions for them She could end up with a much better idea. She could plant one of them or both berries that doubled her weight in a super fertilizer patch. She would of course care for the new two weight doubler plants and wait. It would take a day or two. But in the end. She knew It will be totally worth the weight in fat.
when the newly grown weight doubler trees are finished. they start to sport loads and loads of berries. Making it Ideal for the Female Palkia to keep on making more and eating many of them as well.
What do you think pal? I think that will help her get to the Mega weights.
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