Another page, sorry about the delay, several issues happened and I ended with a massive artistic block, unfortunatelly it is still there, however I hope that working on something that I already had written I can go out of it.
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Western Dragon
Size 905 x 1280px
File Size 326.7 kB
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While not the best in terms of art or writing, I really like the storyline you've developed. Dagur is such a twisted and character, yet putting him through the wringer is both satisifying and sad. He's sure lucky he has that Terrible Terror to mentor him. But I do wonder...
Either way, can't wait to see more.
Either way, can't wait to see more.
First of all thank you for your kind comment, I completely agree with you, I know that I have a lot to learn in terms of art and writting, however knowing that people are enjoying it despite all the flaws it has makes me happy, also it makes me want to keep going, for now I can only promise to keep improving so one day I can fully put my ideas on the paper so you can enjoy this story.
Finally thanks a lot for the Watch, it really means a lot to me .
Finally thanks a lot for the Watch, it really means a lot to me .
You are very welcome. The Dragons franchise is a ton of fun all around, and interesting fanfics and fancomic like yours are always a treat to read. (And funnily enough, happened to rewatch the first episode with Changewings this morning.) :>
If I can suggest anything to improve the comic, it would be to have the dialogue and captions proofread by a native English speaker. Your English is fairly good, but it is a bit stilted and awkward to read at points, and could benefit from a second set of eyes to catch and iron out the mistakes. As someone with a basic knowledge of Spanish, I understand the struggle.
If I can suggest anything to improve the comic, it would be to have the dialogue and captions proofread by a native English speaker. Your English is fairly good, but it is a bit stilted and awkward to read at points, and could benefit from a second set of eyes to catch and iron out the mistakes. As someone with a basic knowledge of Spanish, I understand the struggle.
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