I honestly like it
its got the right beat more or less

If you're going hardstyle, i suggest you get softer, more pumpier kicks, something that reeeeeally makes your ground vibrate when you crank up the bass switch x3~ here's a nice example in the beginning http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yXamGOxsyaU&feature=channel_page

If you're going hardcore..theeen..hmm..more tempo, more glitchynes and..well...go apeshit with your imagination :D ...example..maybe.. o.=.o http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-zbuYETcDg

Wellh, nice job anyways