This is a pretty personal piece that I wrote in a very tender moment of my life. It was when I realized that I felt something toward someone that I deeply cared for to this day, even though I knew deep down in my heart that they would never feel that same way toward me. But the fact that we are still best friends keeps me comforted. Oh, only if you were my tiger...
Category Poetry / All
Species Tiger
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 26.5 kB
This poem is very sweet, and has a wonderful sense of tranquility. =3
In truth, I'm not all that fond of MOST free verse poems; however, the subject and word execution of this piece is EXCELLENT. =O
My favorite lines are:
"The tender nudge you place on my cheek,
So soft and warm,
Making me mellow from the frantic world of whimsy and woe."
It portrays serenity and has some nice alliteration at the very end "world...whimsy...woe." =P
I really do look forward to more of your work! ;D
In truth, I'm not all that fond of MOST free verse poems; however, the subject and word execution of this piece is EXCELLENT. =O
My favorite lines are:
"The tender nudge you place on my cheek,
So soft and warm,
Making me mellow from the frantic world of whimsy and woe."
It portrays serenity and has some nice alliteration at the very end "world...whimsy...woe." =P
I really do look forward to more of your work! ;D
well... i'm new on here and this is the very first poem i've read on here
man it was great poem, the 5 minutes it took me to read it were greath
i don't have words to describe how i feel cuz i also pray to someday find that protector
really great poem
i now that what a rookie like me says is not so good but i just couldn't help myself not saying how beautiful this poem is
great job mister tiger
man it was great poem, the 5 minutes it took me to read it were greath
i don't have words to describe how i feel cuz i also pray to someday find that protector
really great poem
i now that what a rookie like me says is not so good but i just couldn't help myself not saying how beautiful this poem is
great job mister tiger
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