I am not known for my writing, but I made a promise to myself. If-and-when I managed to acquire the fox mount (Lothien Prowler) in WoW, I would use that as inspiration to create a sneeze story. I thought long and hard about what the content would be, and while many of you might find it to be a little non-standard, I wrote this story with the care of a real story, not just a fetish quick-fic.
Basically, it's not written explicitly as a sneeze story. It's actually meant to be a good story and adventure in its own right! It just happens to contain a moderate amount of sneezing. :P I've always felt this is the best way to write a fetish story, as it is. Start with a strong core idea, and then let the story flow on its own.
When I started this out, I only had a really vague idea of how it would play out. I knew a few key moments I wanted to include, but how I was going to reach them wasn't something I had worked out before hand. Once I started writing, however, I was able to use my memories from playing the game to create a vivid mental image of what was happening, and from that, I was able to guide the story to where it hit all of the goals without the characters taking any action that felt awkward or sudden. I also consider it to be good writing to include random remarks that make the reader smile, even if they aren't explicitly part of the plot itself.
I hope my writing here can be a good lesson to others for the stories they craft. Overall, it took about 3 hours to write once I sat down to work. I made sure to keep focused until I was done, too. As I do not typically (ever? XD) take the time to write, I hope I will at least get a few comments to let me know what others thought.
For those that know very little about World of Warcraft, you can use these links to feel more involved in the story:
Volpin - Male fox - http://www.wowhead.com/npc=112443/volpin / http://www.wowhead.com/spell=171850.....delviewer:10+0
'Shelly' - Female Worgen - http://www.wowhead.com/worgen / http://www.wowhead.com/transmog-set.....delviewer:22+1
Emerald Dream - http://www.wowhead.com/zone=7979/em.....hots:id=542139
Faerie Dragon - http://www.wowhead.com/npc=39921/fa.....delviewer:10+0
Basically, it's not written explicitly as a sneeze story. It's actually meant to be a good story and adventure in its own right! It just happens to contain a moderate amount of sneezing. :P I've always felt this is the best way to write a fetish story, as it is. Start with a strong core idea, and then let the story flow on its own.
When I started this out, I only had a really vague idea of how it would play out. I knew a few key moments I wanted to include, but how I was going to reach them wasn't something I had worked out before hand. Once I started writing, however, I was able to use my memories from playing the game to create a vivid mental image of what was happening, and from that, I was able to guide the story to where it hit all of the goals without the characters taking any action that felt awkward or sudden. I also consider it to be good writing to include random remarks that make the reader smile, even if they aren't explicitly part of the plot itself.
I hope my writing here can be a good lesson to others for the stories they craft. Overall, it took about 3 hours to write once I sat down to work. I made sure to keep focused until I was done, too. As I do not typically (ever? XD) take the time to write, I hope I will at least get a few comments to let me know what others thought.
For those that know very little about World of Warcraft, you can use these links to feel more involved in the story:
Volpin - Male fox - http://www.wowhead.com/npc=112443/volpin / http://www.wowhead.com/spell=171850.....delviewer:10+0
'Shelly' - Female Worgen - http://www.wowhead.com/worgen / http://www.wowhead.com/transmog-set.....delviewer:22+1
Emerald Dream - http://www.wowhead.com/zone=7979/em.....hots:id=542139
Faerie Dragon - http://www.wowhead.com/npc=39921/fa.....delviewer:10+0
Category Story / Fetish Other
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 112 x 112px
File Size 16 kB
Very nice! I'm not familiar with WoW, but I still got the gist of what was happening.
I really like you're approach of writing a good story overall that just so happens to also have some good sneezing. :)
Poor Volpin. Happy that Shelly was able to help her sweet foxy friend in the end. Great job! ^^
I really like you're approach of writing a good story overall that just so happens to also have some good sneezing. :)
Poor Volpin. Happy that Shelly was able to help her sweet foxy friend in the end. Great job! ^^
---I wrote this story with the care of a real story, not just a fetish quick-fic. ...Start with a strong core idea, and then let the story flow on its own.--- THIS. Thank you for taking time writing the description after the story. What you said here makes a lot of sense to me. This kind of story on any forum is rare. Even more rare recently X_X I enjoyed this story you wrote =) The sneezing was fun to read, but it was the overall story itself that made me want to explore and learn more about WofW. I know next to nothing about WofW besides the different colored skin elves and a few races. I am glad that you introduced me to new species I've never seen before with the writing and the links at the end. Having the links at the end gave my mind a good way to visualize more of what was happening in the story.
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