The way you do expressions is wonderful. The pacing of each panel is really good too. Very well done indeed!

<3<3<3<3<3

Thank you :D Im very glad you like it. I was rather nervous about the whole thing. :'D
So much darkness and keeping expressions clear was a hell of a challenge :'D

THIS IS INCREDIBLE @w@!! ~<3

Thank you! Im glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you reading / commenting! :D

Great expressions, frames and play around light and darknesses. Very cinematographic and very very moody. There's also T and V in it : D

What's not to love?

A few pillows would be nice (!?!!?!)
Thank you so much for the feedback and the long talk we had about this <3

ooooooooh! LOTS Of art here, and lots of coolness! And CHARACTER MOMENTS! Much approval! This was a fun read. Good to know they can be tolerable sometimes. Hahaha

And Varik does techy stuff?! Other than fly?
...I know so little about everyone's OCs. D:

Tolerable at certain time intervals, I assure you!
Glad you like it :3
And well, pilots do learn a lot of physics, mathematics, trigonometry on top of engineering to understand what they do so... yeah. :'D he does know about engineering and techy things! (considering we already established he did mod his car too) <<

Amazing work! love the use of lighting in every frame!

Thanks! The dialogs were tricky but fun too

this is freaking fantastic! Like out of nowhere. The pacing and framing of the story was pro tier.

Thank you! It was very interesting to work on it and, perhaps a bit taxing since it was a lot of work in a little amount of time. So glad you liked it! Thank you for the comment!

HOLYDONUT
Okay, so, here we are, with the comic, with the aweshoomness! What a nice surprise omg <3
I absolutely dig the rough transition between the darkness of the mid-part of the comic and the luminosity of p. 36/37, it really is a great passage and it gives a lot of air at the narration. Lighting in general is great in there, but I would haven't expected anything different since you're the best at atmospheres <3
Characters' expressivity is great as well, I so love its development in each panel, it never is static even when you repeat the same scene in different ones. Both characters are so well placed and developed here, consequently the reader doesn't necessary have to know them beforehand to frame their personalities properly. Oh, Varik <3 bless your heart and presence!
You worked so hard on this, your passion and love for the narration and characters themselves is shown in the best way here and I'm smiling so bad because everything is greatly developed, truly! Thanks for sharing a slice of their stories, and thank you for being such amazing at everything you do <3
#omgsforever

... and here I am, being all smiles and teary eye because of this wonderful comment. ;;
I know Bgs could have used a lot more time but, I figure it was good practice and way of telling something. Thank you for reading it and the wonderful feedback.
thank you for your constant support, you amazing lady you!

Wow this is pretty damn amazing!
Frames and scenes are set up here perfectly. Love the banter between the two, you know they're good friends even if they annoy each other :3

I'm quite intrigued to what's going on here ,':)

*deep breaths*

(omg so, like, I was busy doing research when I first saw this and couldn't really leave a comment then, and it was... a bit of a bad week for leaving a comment last week but now... I think I can formulate something adequate XD )

Pally, oh my goodness, I'm reading this for, like, the fiftieth time now and there are still moments in it where I just need to take a moment and recover. :*) This is so great. Really, believe it. This is just so great. So very, very great.

For one thing, it's just so beautifully cinematic. As someone who considers themselves something of a "cinematic" storyteller, I just can't help but to imagine it as a full-fledged animation. Your work absolutely deserves an animated adaptation, you know, but I digress! The choice of perspective for each and every panel is so absolutely RIGHT. Whether it's the focus on their faces (that set of four side-by-side panels "I did work in logistics for six months, remember?" are just getting me every single time - I find it hard to take my eyes off of them. ) or the panels that are just nothing but the environment, everything is paced perfectly and everything seems used in just the right way to keep things going while always enhancing the mood. It's just so cured and stylized in a way that's clearly done with intention and not just random choice. It's so cinematic... it flows so well and all is done with stylistic flair of just the right sort. I can't get over it. ^w^ ^w^ ^w^

And that dialogue? Oh my goodness, you are just a master of making realistic characters. I read this and can't help but to imagine their voices, just as I would while reading a particularly good book. <3 Virtually all of the dialogue seems like something the characters would actually say, from what I know of them, and the personality differences are clear. I feel that, if I were to just type it all in a document without the accompanying comic, I'd still be easily able to tell who is who without even having any context beforehand. That's something that's an absolute necessity in writing and I JUST LOVE SO MUCH THAT YOU'RE GOOD AT IT!!!

And it's so emotionally impactful too. The parallels, Pally? THE PARALLELS?! HOOOOOOOBOY!!! As a writer, I'm all about parallels. I've yet to upload anything with -quite- that much complexity, but I've a good idea of how to do it, and I feel that (in my humble opinion, of course) your parallels here are just spectacular. The thing that hits me the most is that panel with T (in? ...into this mess?), just that bit of dialogue and what's being illustrated there says so, so much about T and... his pain. And it can resonate so strongly with a reader of any sort, I think. <3 It "hurts so good," and there's so much said through everything, it makes the weight of the parallelism and the context here so full and real, and we don't even have to know all the info to feel T's pain (the room and T as analogy works perfectly... so much of the past just... sitting there, not being used and in comes Varik and... he just... helps to clean it up, bring it to light. <3 <3 <3 )

Bringing it all together is your unique, stylized approach to the art itself, which as you know, I always always ALWAYS adore! I think you nailed everyone's expressions, they all look totally legitimate, and the background work is so stylish and inky and I love it. So many little details to look at! It's just pure eye candy. I love all the little bits and pieces of the place and T's "office;" everything there has a little story. Really though? Every single panel featuring the chars seems to have an expression I'm in love with. Those four near the top have still captured my heart fully, and that one panel with T (into this mess? <3 <3 <3 he makes my heart ache uhnf) along with the three after "yeah I can fix it" just carry so much emotion and tiredness and just...

...it's so great, Pally, so very very great. <3 I'm in love.

Okay, I know this is kind of a weird comment and that it's super duper long, but I've left long comments before and this one just... uhnf, it absolutely deserves it. I hope it's not an issue or anything, but I just really feel like this deserves, like, a full review or something else I can't provide. XD I really wanted to leave something good and to go over absolutely everything so... yeah. Hope it doesn't look too ridiculous. :/

That being said, please have all the confidence in this; it's just so lovely. It's like... you ever felt like someone made a thing and it felt like it was made just for you, according to your tastes and sensibilities, but you know it really wasn't? Yeah, that's how I feel looking at this. ^w^

Much love Pally! I'll never not adore this. <3 ;)