D: That almost made me cry.....

Very well done. ::sniff:: D: I had this ominous feeling from the first page (like something had to go wrong somewhere) and it did... D:

Thank you! I'm glad it could evoke emotion :3

D: you did. And very well... But like... I'm chock full of female hormones so I cry when I see puppies on tv XD But. Still. Awesome.

HAHAHAAA i srsly did LOL

that little dude died?

holy shit.

yah, or he was just knocked out
either way the other kid's reactions and confusion are what's important

Yeah i mean.. its just trippy how a little shorty like that would get creamed out of the blue.

Hits close to home. Very nice dude.

It's the emotions that are important, but a roll like that would maybe break his nose at worst. :P

Excellent work but a tad morbid..

heheh well thanks!

Thats why I like this comic: because someone dies

I'm gonna slap you if you don't deliver me a happy ending this instant.

(naw, I like it, good job.)

hahah i'm sorry! the stories i write don't usually have a happy ending. i like depressing stories :3
thanks man!

Omg, dude, I love your short story/comic things. :O This ones sad though, I mean like, Is Jerry okay? Did he just pass out and will wake up and go home in awhile? Did he DIE?! x___x

You did an amazing job at portraying the feelings and emotion. (I also like how you hold off to submit em till its completed, so someone isn't left hanging for a few days to see the next strip!)

:) Keep up the awesome work man!

Thanks a lot dude!
I'm not sure if Jerry is ok or not! It's up to the viewer, i suppose. :3

He was ok and was just knocked out, however, due to his friends sucking at finding a pulse he was left for death and froze... poor Jerry, he should have found smarter friends.

*duck*

Great comic, this brought up strong emotions and is very well drawn.

heheheh thanks man!

i think he was recovered but got frostbite and permenant injuries and never forgave his dick friends and grew up bitter!

Is this the end? oh...
i'm feeling sorrow...

i'm glad it could evoke emotion! :3
Thanks!

OMG!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO SAD!!!!!!

YAY that's what I was going for! :3

: O I was reading this thinking...

"why would ad do a comic so cute and fluffy? It HAS to get twisted somewhere"

Then I was like "Oh here it is."

That's AD for ya!
*looney_tunes_ending_theme.wav*

I thought the exact same thing :p...poor kid, i hope he was just knocked out :(

Erf.. that one made me cry a bit.. which sux at work..
reminded me of stuff.. growing up on an air base in germany.. :(

I'm glad it was able to evoke an emotional response, sorry that it was at work though! Thanks man!!

I really do have to throw in more praise. You are so able to capture so much feleing with so few words. In your faces, postures, situations and visuals, you tell so much. Masterful word economy, man! Masterful.

Thanks a lot man! That's really kind and flattering. I appreciate it :3

OMG... You got me going from the first page...

I have to comment on your suberb story-telling. I have to ask for more and more till I feel... really... really sad...

Keep it up man! Peace. Seregei

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it :3

That was beautiful in an obtuse way.

Thanks kindly man! Glad you dug it~

I like the way you ended it before the kid tells his mom.

Thanks!

That started off way too cute, by your standards - something just had to go awfully wrong, eventually. :P

Interesting to see some non-adult characters from you.

Well, I do remember a kid from a recent drawing of yours, that also involved a priest... but I digress.

Nice work, yet again!

heheheh well yah i do like depressing stories!
and let's never discuss the priest picture again hahahah
Thanks dude!

Indeed.

...

Now draw one involving the Pope. :D

Ah-..... je...... I wanna... make.... a smart ass comment....... but it's...... sad...... *whines* p_q J-.... Jerry's gonna be all right, right?

I mean, it was just.... a roll down the hill <_<;;;

...... *sniffs* I wanna call all of my friends now....

heheh well i guess it's kinda up to the viewer to decide if he died or if he's just knocked out.
Thanks man!!

Superior work.

Thanks a lot, dude! :3

wow, jeez that was chilling!

well thankya!

thanks kindly! i appreciate it :3

Like others, I had an ominous feeling from the beginning as well. It could have been just the fact that you were drawing kids, which you don't usually do! I think you're on a roll! Keep going! You'll have that anthology in no time. I think the title was what set up for me that it was going to be a sad strip as opposed to any other emotion. Good stuff, do more!

Thanks!! glad to know the title hinted at something bad happening, i didn't want the reader to be too terribly shocked and i also didn't want the title to mock the incident in any way
anyhow, thanks a lot man!!

tis very moving again, tho I felt it could have used the information knowing what had happened to sam. Feels like its been left on the edge a little with no realy conclusion.

Thanks! yah i like to leave a lot unresolved to emphasize the aspects of the story that are portayed

Finally something with substance around here. Well done.

Thanks man! yeh, it's like, porno is fun or whatev, but sometimes my brain needs something to munch on, i hope this fits the bill!

*plays the violin* god that was shad

nonetheless, very nice comic, the emotions are fantastic !!

thanks, i appreciate it!

what can i say, i like tragedies!
what do you suggest i persue, storywise? i'm always open to exploring new avenues!

I think the thing here is its not your average, got murdered with a knife and/or cut myself emo-style tragedy.

Its simple, accidental, tragedy. Something that happens everyday, every hour, every second even. Sometimes folks encouter it, others go their entire lives without something like this happening. Sometimes its just a broken toy, other times its...well, a friend/family member. This particular case hits home b/c it reminds me of my own sister's death, which happened just as suddenly n' out of the blue.

Kudos to you, artdecade. More moving of a piece/series than I think you realize.

hey, i appreciate that man :3 thank you!

ahaaa hahaha lol XD

these were fun to make, i forgot about them
wow the art is terrible though

D:

That was probably the best comic I've seen on this site, and I don't mean that because a kid got seriously injured/hurt. That was probably the second one I've seen that made me cry ;;

Thanks man! I appreciate it and am glad it moved you :3

Well you do a good job at it, keep up the work! :D

I knew it, from the begining, I knew it!

heheh well there are only so many things that can happen in a setting like that
i hope that the reactions of the children weren't terribly predictable

The children's reactions were perfect, but I knew someone was gonna die as soon as there was snow and children...I admit, I was expecting the mom though, not someone so young T_T

I feel cold. Hopefully this won't give me nightmares.

oh, i hope not as well!

When I saw the 1st part I was like "cool, artdecade does something cute for a change". Then I see page 7...I should've known better. You're a mystery wrapped in an enigma.

The mom only ask for the hat and not of where are his friends? anwyay it's a really good comic, I luv your style, keep it work ^^

Thanks man! heheh well, the hat is like a metaphor (albeit a pretty easy one hehehe)

I had a feeling something would go wrong. AD, I just love your short story comics. They're so interesting to read.

:D thanks kindly!

I like it more when funny stories make you think, but those are mostly sad themeselves or don't make you think...
But this is great work, it had so many aspects I thought about and I appreciate this.

I really appreciate that! :3

sweet, thanks brah!

"Drr drrr."

I dunno dude.

I don't think this was the "same angsty crap" that "furries always come up with."

I really liked it, especially when I realized it was about how kids deal with the unknown... The language especially -- I loved how you showed the simple mechanic children have to speech and perception (they aren't all geniuses or midget adults).

Incidentally, I didn't think the kid died. I thought he was just knocked out... I like how everyone rushed to the immediate conclusion though: "OHNOES!111 SOBSOBSOBSOB!1"

This felt like a piece I'd find published by ONI or Fantagraphics. So, don't let that one dude get on your case. Typical furry drama BS is some guy who's totally homo but his parent's pet gerbil is a right winger militia nazi and someone has aids and everyone has butt sex.

*laugh* Agreed on that. I didn't think it was too clich� or predictable, at all. Original enough for me. :U

RIGHT on the SCRILLA son, I'm so glad you got this one and that I succeeded in doing it. Thanks a lot man

thank you for drawing it.
i want to do a pin-up for the eventual collected release of all this shaz.

I don't see how the roll in the snow would even knock him out. o_o

freak accident i guess :3

Wow, this comic is kind of pessimistic; first though would probably be death. I'm betting he wakes up a paraplegic. :P

"Joking to try not to tear up" aside, I love these emotional trips into the depths of strange occurences in life.

heheh well thanks kindly~

That was a hell of a thing, dude.

You could quite seriously make a career out of this shit (or could one say that you do already...?). The simplicity of the setting, the negative space, the dramatic, pulp fiction dotty shading (i'm sure there's a technical term for it, but fuck that shit i'm all sad and shit), all of it created this whole... i dunno, trying not to use a clichéd word like "atmosphere", but the overall feel of it aesthetically didn't necessarily accentuate the mood of the over all comic, but rather... i dunno, accompanied it seamlessly i suppose. the art was second to the story, not in quality, but in noticeability - and i really miss old anthology comics of yore that used that formula rather than intricate masterpieces that, oh yeah, have text bubbles. Anywho, ramblerambleramble fantastic work as always, dude.

lol it's difficult to try to seem articulate and intelligent in your comments with this icon XD

AWESOME man i really REALLY appreciate that!! <3

Very well dne! I love seeing these comics from you. You have a great talent for storytelling that it's really nice to see come out in sequential art like this. Kudos for a great comic with intense emotinal weight to it! I look forward to seeing more!

Thanks a lot man :3 that's great to hear!

nice, nice work expressing feelings.
grat work, it is clean and simple , enough for me for a short comic story.

thanks! i'm glad the minimalism didn't take away from it

Awww, so sad. I like how simple the lines were using the snow as (appropriately enough) white space.

Thanks! I was kind of afraid it might have been TOO simple heh

Not too simple, not at all. Growing up in Canada, I'm used to seeing a lot of snow, and this really camptured it.

This made me sad, in a good way.
I guess we all have as kids felt the fear and desperation when something went wrong, and the grown up misunderstands it. A happy day can quickly transform to a day full of demonic fear.

Excellent work. The comic really woke up those fealings I had as a kid.

thanks! that's awesome to hear!!

it's cool how you framed this last page so the mother's head is out of view. it would have lost so much impact if you could see her reaction! way to leave the cool stuff up to the imagination (where everything should be!)

thanks man! glad the effect worked
playing with crop is fun

it's a cute story..i love how you indulged in the happy moments and then abruptly whammed the sad part on the kids. Maybe the rabbit guy overreacted a bit and too fast, and they were all too much friendly, often when there's three kids two of them picks on the third ..or maybe that's how it was my childhood and i'm saying a lot of crap XD it's just i think kids are often depicted as innocent when in reality they are quite mischievous.

but anyways ,i enjoyed this, keep them coming dad! X3

heheh that is true! in fact i have a story kind of like that i might draw later heh
but i have to figure out a way to present it that isn't terrible!!

oh goddd (and of course it's the blaque one that got hurt/left behind, is this some subtle commentary on american history??????? lol)

hahaha it is now
my next comic is 'american history xxx' and it wicked gay yiffy

I kind of expected something bad to happen, so I wasn't that surprised.

word, yeah, it's called 'A Cold Day' for god's sake hahahah
i hope that the more important part of the story is the children's reactions to the event

Yeah, it was more important >.> if I was that bear and lived, I'd tear the shit outta the other two for leaving me like that.

Really awesome. I don't think it's that morbid.. I mean, it's SAD as hell, but it's done so damn realistically. Like, that's exactly how little kids would react to something like that. I really like it.

THANKS man that's exactly what i was trying to do, kinda show that confusion that a kid would have
awesome, thanks

I remember when my friend died like that. It's weird how deaths fade from memory. I mean, you'll think about the person or about how you miss them, but the actual death fades from thought. Who knows, maybe its just me supressing it.

heh well i tend to think they fade

OH MY GOD YOU BASTARD BASTARD!!

I can't tell if he's dead or not....
These comics are amazing!! I didn't expect you to make another 12 page on so fast! MAN such awesome work! I mean the art is great on every page, just quickly done but you worked a story out.

I'll fav the first page representing the entire comic!

heheheh thanks a lot dude, i really appreciate it! :3

You know what's funny is I didn't expect anything bad :D

This hit me pretty hard. I should've expected something dark, but the quick randomness of the accident still got me.

Good job with the kids anfd their expressions, showing their playfulness and wide-eyed exhuberence at first, then their sadness and confusion at the end. Damn the kids were really cute playing in the beginning, then it was hearbreaking aftewards.

The dropped hat, like the spilled life savers in the first story, is an obvious metaphor, but effective.

Thanks dude! that's great to hear! :3

:( damn it i hate that... lets just say hes knocked out grrr... *damn emotions*

yeh it very well could be the case :3

Lack of catharsis for the win.

you KNOW it!

this was very depressing ;_; *sniff* i have a short story posted but no one's read it so far....its a lil dark (sad) and deep, and if the reader cant read between the lines then they shouldnt read it :p

i'll check it out when i get some free time! :3

hey thnx! :D

The sadness was overwhelming!
thank god over the years of trying to be the strong one for my friends and family i forgot how to cry!
But that still made me so sad!

thanks man! i appreciate that :3

heheh BUT, you assumed he is dead. he might be or might not be :3

only if i was paid to do it :3

o_o

Omg....now I'm worried for poor Jerry. =(

This is a really awesome comic, dude. =D

thanks man!!

very cool man :) i particularly like your scenes where the characters are dwarfed by the snowscape.

Thanks! those were fun to draw :)

Ya know...

I'm actually waiting to see your next story now.

This is a very unique change to see on this site.

Kudos to ye for this. :3

-Jiry

thanks, that's great to hear, man!!

These are really good. I was expecting crazy cub porn in the middle, but I'm glad that didn't come up. I haven't seen snow in a while; really reminded me of the old days. Also, GET A PUBLISHER. NOW.

thanks!! i'm going to try to get it a publication soon!!!

Seriously, it'd be too fucking badass not to buy. You bring hope to the furry fandom.

Wow.. I feel really bad after watching that. Like I need to go help someone... o.o

cool comment, thanks!

Expressed a kid's reaction very well, between "it was not my fault it was his", "Is he playing? cuz its not funny", "What can I do to reverse it?".
Cery well done, emotive and realistic, even if the kid is dead or not, quite an emotive comic.

awesome, that's great to hear!! :3

Awesome story. In 12 pages you made me fall in love with the characters and feel bad about Jerry's accident.

You rock, my dear sir :)

thanks dude!! i appreciate it :3

You make it easy to relate to the characters. So much that you could see it happen in real life somewhere, as disturbing as that is.

cool, thanks man!

When he was in the way I was like, "AAHHH!!!", but when the other kid fell off I was like, "EEEEHH OOOH!!...", What a twist!... But that's so sad...

heheh thanks man :3

I read this page first on accident and expected something completely different. Very nice, efficient storytelling with a great deal of empathy for the characters.

glad you dig it, man!

Good GRAVY are you good with pacing and layouts.

thanks!! yeah i think pacing is very important!! i'm glad it came out well

that made me laugh... am I emotionaly disturbed?

hahaha um maybe? it could be seen as funny, i guess, heh!

*sniffs* That's so sad...I'M GONNA KILL YOU FOR MAKING ME SAD! D:<

.....Great job! That was awesome!

Nicely done x_x

Pulled off the emotion nicely, I almost cried x3

you r0x

Totaly saw it coming! Although I thought it would be a whole lot more tradgic. Like one of them would get lost or something like that. But I guess you could interpret it as he's just unconcious. But I got an impending sence of doom early on.

You can normaly tell something bad is supposed to happen based on the scenerey. Also if there is no apparent conflict somethings bound to come up. So it just incites anticipation on the reader because they want to know what the problem is in the story.

Really well done though. Amaizing you did it all in only three days. X3 I'm lucky to do 1 picture a day. X3

Thanks man :3 Yeah, you have some good points here!!

Bear kid needs new friends. Very nice work.

it's scairy how easily some deaths can happen among children.

great work! in add, this one is pretty different compared with the other one you did some days ago (for ideas, and facts).

i like how you tell stories but i don't like much the last 5 panels, there's something with storytelling that does not works. but my opinions are always wrong, so...

=)

much envy for you!

thanks man!! hehe the last few panels are not very dynamic heheheh, i think because i think of it like a movie when i draw it

whats need is jerry waking up, but to later get hit by a direct avalanche ( sort of south partk vs kenny lol )

i like how everyone seems to assume that Jerry's dead. [giggles]

I liked this one, even though I found it a bit predicatble somehow. Knowing your tastes, I pretty much expected this to happen. Mind you, that didn't take away from the heartachey bit where Sean is yelling at Jerry. Very poingiant!

Snow is easy to draw, huh? :P

heheh actually, some stuff is kind of hard to get right
the snow angel took me forever!
thanks man :3

[goes and checks out page 4] Hmmm... point made. I've never thought to try drawing a snow angel before. It seems like making comics end up pushing you to draw much more difficult things than you would draw otherwise. Is that true for you?

GOD yes it is true
backgrounds can be so brutal
and then you have to deal with how little space is in each panel, and how the panels interact, and how they are layed out etc
it's more work than people think sometimes!!

I can only imagine! One trick you used that I really thought was cool was how you alternated between medium shots and extra-hyper-super long-shots. It was really effective at communicating a sense of space, bigness, and all of that, within the restrictions of the small frames. Very kewl. :3

its a very good story but uber sad I wanna cry cause I really dont wanna think whats going to happen to Jerry or if he already is dead TT.TT

heh thanks man!

OH I get it, "A cold day" cuz he's dead.
nice job again AD.

thanks man! then again he might not be dead
it is interesting that you assume he is dead :3

.... that was kinda .. dark..


o.O

cool, thanks!

Simple, bleak, and very, very emotional. Yet again, I am highly impressed at the amount of emotion you can evoke from such short, simple stories. Great work.

i really appreciate that, thanks man~

@_@ wow. now that's a twist.

Nice comic! ^_^

wow great job really =^.^= *gigles* kind of a calvin and hobbes deepness there

This is actually a pretty good story, its short and sweet(In a twisty way).

I like how it was pretty obvious that something was bad to happen, but what happened was something we didnt expect, I assumed the main kid would be the one to get injured or something worse, but instead out of the blue his friend gets knocked out!(Or could be comatose, or dead) Then of course the reaction of the kids, not knowing how to handle the situation and thinking the wors ebecause their friend didnt get up immediatly. You handled their emotions pretty damn well, just what I'd expect from kids their age.

I can't wait to see another one from ya! BTW how the hell did you get manga studio to install? @_@ I failed so many times...

So many typo's, sorry XD

great comments man, thanks kindly!
i heard somewhere for manga studio
you have to use some imaging software, and if that doesn't work then ????

oh well, I was hoping for a decapitation, but I guess that this will have to work...
nah, it's awesome

how come falling in the snow can make him died, beside he's a bear,

the situation would be happened to everychild, found they friend uncoinciousness, and they runs to their home. Poor bear, he will found nobody there when he wake up.

Theres a lot of emotional moment on this comic, Awesome.

But once again, why must Bear??

thanks man
heh i dunno, it just happened that way :3

YAAAAAY, you did a comic again!

Oh wait! *sob*

Seriously, it's all been said, but good work on the expressions and reactions of the characters, and the very minimalist setting for the backgrounds. Not only does it match the tone of the story and the temperature of the day, but it helps the reader really focus on the characters themselves, not a lot of cluttered extraneous detail ....

great comments man! thank you :)

O.O

That's all what I can say... O.O

Very emotionally provoking. This
takes me back to reading things
like 'All Summer in a Day' type
short stories.

You drew the mother well. Im sure now you will have more requests for females porns.


not from me tho. This lizard likes his cloacas occupied. >..>;;







On the comic, tho, its cute.... and sad, but he aint dead. Unless he gets hypothermia.

The narrative in this piece works a lot better than the previous one which had too much stuff (characters, dangling threads) for a very short comic. Concise and good emotional impact!

cool thanks! i'm glad to hear the story styles were distinctly different, i want to mix that up so they don't all feel the same

Yeow. o_o

A big hug and smooch on a job well done! A fantastic comic. You rock!

:D tee hee tee hee !!

You're probly tired of reading comments now but I wanted to say I really liked it... you're really good at comics!

no, i appreciate it! thank man :)

YOU MADE ME SAD
I'M TELLING ON YOU
or can i just kick you in the balls and we can call it even

NO i need those balls for SEX!!

its fun being the greatest artist ever isn't it? great job, dude. i'm like totally jea-louse of your thinking mind.

HAhah i guess it's not bad HA!

really cool! The contrast was enjoyable (chidren vs death(?). Their reactions made it real and personal to whom ever veiwed it (ASSUMING MOST PEOPLE HAVE SYMPATHY??).
THESES DRAMAS ARE QUITE FUN, KEEP THEM UP, cause they are better.cooler then 99% of the furry comics out there.
PS this death theme rocks cause death is cool like that...same with the endings..cause they dont give you a sense of wholeness .

skizYEAH!!

cool thanks man! yeh death is kinda like, THE theme of themes to play with.

It is rather amusing that everyone automatically assumes he's abandoned and dead.

It's a given though that the wolf kid told his mom and brought back help. Wolves are cool like that. ^^

This ones pretty heavy too heavy! It is a well illustrated story and its the first time I think you have done a female :P At least that I remember. Poor kid though.

...Jesus, ouch. Curse your story telling. :<

Great work though, yeah. :D

Anticlimax.

Huzzah, you're posting moar! This made me pretty sad. Like, the other one brought me down, but this one just made me flat out sad, I'd like to think that he was just knocked out, but the confusion, fear, and near-helplessness of the whole situation. They didn't know what to do. ;-; I hope he's alright.

This is playing on our (my) wants for the kid to be dead! NOT COOL

innocence is so terrible

Awww.. so sweet, yet sad...
Hope the little tyke is ok,
I really didn't see it coming.

Your short stories are amazingly cool though! Such cool messages with so little dialouge

Well drawn. Loving yer comics yer doing lately even if so far both have been a.....shall we say. Bit depressing and sad :P.

Very clever, I like the spin you put in that writing. Fun day in the snow then that.

I aprove!

it made me cry TT.TT
youre so evil :P

*sniffles* That made me cry too. I was thinking it would be a nice cute story, and then O_o the lil fur dies. *sniffles* It was good, just really really sad.

.....I need a hug. ... v_v

heh glad it evoke such a response! the kind might be alive too, just knocked out :3

I'd hate you for making me sad if like, I didn't like the whole pathos thing myself sometimes. :p

Goddamn good job.

:'(

*crawls slowly into his rabbit hole and closes the lid...*

It's like a coherent Kafka.

HA haaa thanks man

I'm gonna have to ponder this for a bit. Overall, thumb's up once more, my man. Something's eating me about the end, however, and I'm not clear on what it is. I'll try and mull it over so's I can give you some sort of useful feedback.

Thanks man! lemme know what's bothering you about it too, if you pinpoint it

You stories always manage to cheer me up, except in a really depressing way. ._. Like the first guy said, though, it was very emotional - and cute!

heh, thanks man!

so we're not going to find out what happens to the bear cub!? T_T

no, it's completely up to viewer interpretation! so whatever you first imagined happened, is what happened
or not

*writes the ending out*
Bear: *stands up and dusts some snow off*
Hm....? where'd everyone go... and why does my head hurt? oh well. Mom! I want some soup! ^.^

"Mom, I want some soup!...

...And, why am I naked?"

wow. just wow. It was so sad, but good, but sad. Lovely artwork too.

i appreciate that :3

You have exceptional talent for being an amazing storyteller. Just the way that you simply convey every day situations is amazing. Very good work indeed, ArtD

cool, thanks man, :3 that's great to hear!

Very sad. A lot of emotion in it and very well told. A little depressing but I like the way you told the story. Good job!

thanks man! i appreciate it :3

I really enjoyed that. It's nice to see a furry comic that isn't just "Hey random stranger, let's fuck!" but actually has a bit of emotional involvement. Or something.

thanks! that's good to hear :3

Hmm, interesting approach to the situation with the little kids. It's very sad, and I think it's a fair interpretation of how a young kid might handle it.
Very sad, but good storytelling.

thanks kindly! yeah, the story wasn't about the accident so much as the kid's reaction to it
so thanks!!

Very well done, gent, especially the way you characterized the kids--adults tend to forget that children look at things from an entirely different perspective.

thanks! yeah, that's definitely what i was going for, so it's cool to hear that comes across
i appreciate it!

WHAT!!!!!!! ... ok now that I've regained composure, let me just say WHAT!!!!!!! no seriously this comic has a really interesting element to it, like "what the hell just happend?" I love the fact that you left us hanging at the end and reading alot of the responses, it seems that people brought over from your last comic the notion that this was a depressing story as well. If it was meant to be... I guess you succeded becuase you made alot of people sad. I on the other hand while understanding the kids reactions, I was dumbfounded by thier response. Your friend is not responding to you... well he just wiped out on a snow sled! You feel sad and leave his carcass in the snow... Garrrr YOU PICK HIM UP AND DRAG HISS ASS TO A HOSPITAL!
So envoking this type of reaction from me I thank you and think its great!

AWESOME man, that's great to hear! HEH! i'm pleased these comics are doing well, and that they're getting a response from viewers
hope they do as well once i stop giving them out for free hahahaa

*faved all 12 panels*

All in all, a good story, and nicely drawn.

Keep it up !

thanks man! i appreciate it :3

No problem.

On a side note, I have to say that I already lived a situation like that one. We were lucky to have adults around to help us then.

I just got through finisheing and like many others, I like this comic.Hope too see more sometime.

thanks kindly :3

It's really awesome to see something like this from you :D! Mooooorrrrre~

thanks man!! hopefully soon :3

Cool comic there. I think that if those short films on IFC were good, and furry comics, they would be like this.

hahaaa! thanks man!!

Noo~! I HAVE to know what happened to the uncouncious kid ;O;

NEVER!

You are evil :P

this was a great story and it almost made me cry as well. I know that he's going to b e ok since I too had something similar like that happen PLUS I slammed into a large evergreen head first X_@. I was more than ok with a bruised cranium and pants filled with da white shtuff (snow that is >.>;;))

again great, i really love the way you show how much more complex "human" emotion is and how usually unequipt we are to accept it or are made aware of it. i love it, like the last one only someone with a grasp on reality can truely savor something like this.

awesome, that's really great to hear! thanks dude

HAHAHAHA ITS HILAROUS

what the fuck when i started seeing the kids having fun i was like "god i want them to die or something"

and one of them did and i just about squealed mid giggles

HAHA ok i guess that this is either a tragedy, a 'slice of life', a horror or a comedy
i have heard all four now

Loved the art, as usual. Especially the shots of the snowmen and the snow angel, the far out bleak shot of Jerry. Really awesome, set the tone for both halves of the story.

I actually want you to draw more non-porn in the future, but please don't think less of my libido for it.

HEH well I'll try and do both
see i'm a libra so i'm obsessed with balance....

And they say you will only get a lot of comments and +fav on this place by drawing smut. You definitely proofed them wrong :D
I have to say this is an outstanding short story you created there. You did an incredbile job with those clear pictures, I can't remember when I last saw someone using so few textures and shadows and still get such an amazing result.

As for the content...well. Depressing. Sad. But I suppose that's just what you wanted to create with that. And listening to depressive french music doesn't help either *snickers*

+fav in place for all 12 pages. Hope you'll be finding someone to publish this stuff soon, I'm sure it would sell like crazy.

thanks a LOT for your comments man, REALLY! :3 Really to hear that kind stuff

It's ... just .. well hard to explain, so easy for me to get into the kind of situation, it's just so... traceable.

You did a great job with the artwork itself too. *bows*

thank you! i appreciate it. :3

Its sad but is a good comic. I really enjoyed the artwork. :)

thanks dude! :3

that's hard ... and very disturbing my mind, that's strand because, i dowlloaded all the pages to read it on my computer ... you almost forgot the wold and the music around you and at the end i had a messy brain...

good to hear it had an effect :3

Whoa... very sad ending for just a beautiful start.

You definitely conveyed the emotions and also the kid's behaviours.

I think the boys just grew up a little.

pg. 2 - "it's really cold out there"



seriously man. awesome work.
hope to see more comics from you.

YAY thanks so much!!! :3 :3 :3 :3

artdecade is the winner.

I remember being scared like that... really weird feeling. Cool how it wen't from innocent to absolutely disturbing really fast, like most things do in real life. Great work and I can't wait to see your next one! You inspire!

HEY i really appreciate that!

I'm just curious, does this comic have some inner relation with your first comic, sir?

nope! :3

*cries* TT__TT

Damn, I dunno what exactly is it with these little comics of yours, but they touch me in a way rarely other things do. Like "I'm Not Strong Enough", the subtle non-themed tone is wonderfully done, and deep. I could feel it. It kinda reminds me of the pointless scenes in Gainax animes, which can't get any deeper than that.

Good work, man, keep ot up. B3

i appreciate that! thanks a lot BRUDDAH!!!

CLIFFHANGER. :o

Anyway, this was incredible. It truly did capture the sense of a small, frightened child..

!!! I knew I shouldn't have read this till the end x.x

I just remembered my past.

x.x something like this, xcept my friend fell from the cliffside down to the river. All coz of stupid me getting too careless x.x *sob*

just part of growing up, I guess

Quite true. Life has ups and downs wherever it leads.

CRIES OUT LOUD!!!!!!!!!

awesome ^^
its very melancholic

thanks kindly :]

I just NOW got around to reading this. Well done! It kept me interested at all times.