I wrote this in about... let's see... six hours in total? Took me all day from when I got home.
A little children's story about hard working little mice, dangerous beasts, unexpected friends, slumbering kings, and horrid little thieves, all in a world of dreams, hidden in the day, protecting you while you sleep...
[edit] oh man I totally looked at this while at work and there were a couple of spelling errors, some glaring grammar mistakes, and some awful continuity problems. Not to mention I used the wrong words once in a while. Curse my staying up until midnight to complete it. Ah well, uploaded the proof-read version now. :D Nothing's changed story wise, just one or two minor words. ^^
A little children's story about hard working little mice, dangerous beasts, unexpected friends, slumbering kings, and horrid little thieves, all in a world of dreams, hidden in the day, protecting you while you sleep...
[edit] oh man I totally looked at this while at work and there were a couple of spelling errors, some glaring grammar mistakes, and some awful continuity problems. Not to mention I used the wrong words once in a while. Curse my staying up until midnight to complete it. Ah well, uploaded the proof-read version now. :D Nothing's changed story wise, just one or two minor words. ^^
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 26.2 kB
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