Girls of SGP: Champ Tay

I avoided doing any kind of correction on these so far, partly because the means I had to do physical corrections have largely dried up by this point (most of my pens are at least 14 years old!), but there's a spot where my hand slipped a little too far this time. I mention this because it's been pulling teeth getting these inks done as it is without worrying about fixing anything--I'm taking the NaNoWriMo approach to this and just getting the gist of it out so I can Lucas everything later.

My problem is the pens I use are SO GARBAGE that I cannot draw a single line once: I have to go over every line at least THREE TIMES to get a smooth look. As I believe I mentioned once before but cannot be bothered to look up where, I nevertheless liked these pens because the ink doesn't bleed regardless of paper quality.

White pens were great for BLENDING ink, though! ...kind of a headache when doing perfect binary black-and-white-no-greys corrections, though. PROTIP: Draw the new lines first and erase any pencils, THEN white out the wrong ones (that is, avoid ever drawing over a corrected area).

Anyway, I think her name's properly Tay by this point, but I haven't decided. Maybe I can argue a translation issue... I do feel like I have too many characters with "secret" names (which is to say, almost none of them should--it'd be like you having a completely different name on your birth certificate from the ones on all your other documents).