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This one's a bit late, due to me working (and mostly finishing) my upcoming winter story in the middle of this one. Though Anthem still doesn't have any Adultery in it, I'm planning several scenes in a separate part. Said part might not get done until quite a bit later, but it should be done before Xmas.
Anyway, I finally got this one done and out of the way. I'm still not sure what will finish between Anthem and Fear/Weakness, but regardless, they won't be done until 2017. Unless I bail on NaNoWriMo, which I'm still in debate about.
Whatever. There's not much to say about this Act. There's a little bit of everything in it, and I'm just... Content with it all. A little irked, because during my spellcheck, the program decided to freeze during saving and I had to redo it. Could be worse, I know, but damn is it ever tedious.
I won't spoil anything though, let you take it as it is. Until then, enjoy your Halloween everyone. I need a break to recharge.
Anthem Of The Lonely © Nine Lashes
End Of All Days © 30 Seconds To Mars
Edit: Maybe it's due to some kind of new windows update or something, but I find it's been 'blocking' a picture at the very end of this act. What you are supposed to see is (Spoilers) https://www.weasyl.com/~bartan/subm.....ay-of-the-dead So if the very end doesn't make any sense, that's why. It was just something new I was trying, but it's just not functioning correctly, and I'm getting irked attempting to fix it over and over again. So... Yeah.
Anyway, I finally got this one done and out of the way. I'm still not sure what will finish between Anthem and Fear/Weakness, but regardless, they won't be done until 2017. Unless I bail on NaNoWriMo, which I'm still in debate about.
Whatever. There's not much to say about this Act. There's a little bit of everything in it, and I'm just... Content with it all. A little irked, because during my spellcheck, the program decided to freeze during saving and I had to redo it. Could be worse, I know, but damn is it ever tedious.
I won't spoil anything though, let you take it as it is. Until then, enjoy your Halloween everyone. I need a break to recharge.
Anthem Of The Lonely © Nine Lashes
End Of All Days © 30 Seconds To Mars
Edit: Maybe it's due to some kind of new windows update or something, but I find it's been 'blocking' a picture at the very end of this act. What you are supposed to see is (Spoilers) https://www.weasyl.com/~bartan/subm.....ay-of-the-dead So if the very end doesn't make any sense, that's why. It was just something new I was trying, but it's just not functioning correctly, and I'm getting irked attempting to fix it over and over again. So... Yeah.
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Hi Bartan,
Yes a year late with reading this! Sorry for the delay, between the previous comment. Mostly due procrastination and my first job (which I like so far).
But onto the story, it is indeed getting a lot more interesting with each added chapter. This part was also quite funny with Dia speaking nonsense. But I also liked the more serious side of it, and I thought you explained a bit of the history between Ricon & Roe as well. The story content seemed quite balanced like that; just enough explanation, humor and serious business .
It is a bit of funny how you set up the situation for Zeltra, always wanting to fight Roe even if she can not really win. The determinism is there, which I think says the most about her. It is quite nice to put a bit of conflicting characters together.
I am also quite curious about what Dia has in mind, it seems some unknown knowledge was restored and I am curious what he has exactly in mind.
I will try to read somewhat more, as I have quite some material to go through. But with some more family around as usual, we will see. At the very least, have very nice holidays, merry Christmas and a happy new year!
Best wishes,
Silent Moonlight Dragon
Yes a year late with reading this! Sorry for the delay, between the previous comment. Mostly due procrastination and my first job (which I like so far).
But onto the story, it is indeed getting a lot more interesting with each added chapter. This part was also quite funny with Dia speaking nonsense. But I also liked the more serious side of it, and I thought you explained a bit of the history between Ricon & Roe as well. The story content seemed quite balanced like that; just enough explanation, humor and serious business .
It is a bit of funny how you set up the situation for Zeltra, always wanting to fight Roe even if she can not really win. The determinism is there, which I think says the most about her. It is quite nice to put a bit of conflicting characters together.
I am also quite curious about what Dia has in mind, it seems some unknown knowledge was restored and I am curious what he has exactly in mind.
I will try to read somewhat more, as I have quite some material to go through. But with some more family around as usual, we will see. At the very least, have very nice holidays, merry Christmas and a happy new year!
Best wishes,
Silent Moonlight Dragon
Hey Silent!
It's great to hear from you again, and good to hear that things are going well for you I know how busy things can get around this time of year, let alone how much time it takes to go through these things. So, feel free to take your time on them! Though, I still stand by on saying that the next act (Day Of The Dead) was the best thing I wrote this year, so look forward to that!
The 'Thea speaking nonsense' (Don't feel bad, I honestly didn't catch it the first time either xP) thing was mostly just me having fun. I think the first draft was him just losing his voice entirely aside from grunts and growls. Though it could set up a few jokes, I felt him speaking gibberish was far more entertaining. There is more to it all, but I'll wait for you to finish act 4 before saying too much
Speaking of which, I just noticed with this one that I was getting some sort of error message when attempting to download the file. Something about Windows blocking 'content', which all that was different about this document is the fact it had the thumbnail to Act 4 at the very end (when Zelly and Thea met up in the lab again). So, when you were reading the very final line "Better Run, Here We Come, It's The..." you were supposed to see this: https://www.weasyl.com/%7Ebartan/su.....ay-of-the-dead Not really a jumpscare, but more of just a surprise/something to look forward to. I remember testing it before, and it seemed to work perfectly fine, but now... I donno what happened. Windows 10 updates maybe?
Still, have a wonderful holiday, Silent And bring tissues for the next act! You might need them
~Bartan
It's great to hear from you again, and good to hear that things are going well for you I know how busy things can get around this time of year, let alone how much time it takes to go through these things. So, feel free to take your time on them! Though, I still stand by on saying that the next act (Day Of The Dead) was the best thing I wrote this year, so look forward to that!
The 'Thea speaking nonsense' (Don't feel bad, I honestly didn't catch it the first time either xP) thing was mostly just me having fun. I think the first draft was him just losing his voice entirely aside from grunts and growls. Though it could set up a few jokes, I felt him speaking gibberish was far more entertaining. There is more to it all, but I'll wait for you to finish act 4 before saying too much
Speaking of which, I just noticed with this one that I was getting some sort of error message when attempting to download the file. Something about Windows blocking 'content', which all that was different about this document is the fact it had the thumbnail to Act 4 at the very end (when Zelly and Thea met up in the lab again). So, when you were reading the very final line "Better Run, Here We Come, It's The..." you were supposed to see this: https://www.weasyl.com/%7Ebartan/su.....ay-of-the-dead Not really a jumpscare, but more of just a surprise/something to look forward to. I remember testing it before, and it seemed to work perfectly fine, but now... I donno what happened. Windows 10 updates maybe?
Still, have a wonderful holiday, Silent And bring tissues for the next act! You might need them
~Bartan
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