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The 24th, Bonus page. This is the one page that kinda tips the scale, but I'm going to power through it.

So that is the new and hopefully improved Aura Phase Chapter 1. I believe it provides a better structure than the last one, and was improved in at least a few places. I'm hoping that maybe I can will myself to continue working on it. The long term project I conceived at some point in 2013 only has one chapter to show for it...If I can get over this regret then I would really like to continue this and other projects. It certainly isn't the first time I've said that, but...again, it's regret that I would like to move past.

So if you have feedback I would like it. The next chapter will follow roughly some events of the old chapter 2, and by the time chapter 3 comes the story will match up as I had always imagined it.