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the first scene in my Otto animation, all colored c:
LICK LICK
LICK LICK
LICK LICK
LICK LICK
LICK LICK
LICK LICK
Category Flash / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 550 x 400px
File Size 325.2 kB
The lick seems a biiiit scratchy for a lollipop, and I wonder if the 'pop' wouldn't sound better if you took it into an audio editor and reversed it.
Also, I think you'd get a better *shoved into mouth* effect, if instead of opening the mouth, he just pushed it against his lips and it went *poP!* into his mouth, in the same number of frames, rather than opening his mouth. Instead of squash-and-stretch on the mouth, you just have a little *nom*, which doesn't really work with the sound effect. :p
But otherwise, looks good! :)
Also, I think you'd get a better *shoved into mouth* effect, if instead of opening the mouth, he just pushed it against his lips and it went *poP!* into his mouth, in the same number of frames, rather than opening his mouth. Instead of squash-and-stretch on the mouth, you just have a little *nom*, which doesn't really work with the sound effect. :p
But otherwise, looks good! :)
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