Looks real nice, she's very beautiful. But can I offer one little critique?

Sure--go right ahead.

Her mouth seems a little misplaced. It almost seems to be on her neck. I think it might look a bit better on the side of her face like on her cheek. Other than that it's perfect. =D

Heh--you should see the original. This drawing was heavily "tweaked" in Photoshop after I scanned it, and the main character's mouth, neck and scarf were a real challenge to get looking just right. In fact, I was still a little unhappy with her mouth, so I followed up on your suggestion and moved it just a little (you may have to reload your browser a few times before the latest version appears). And I think it looks a little better now. Thanks!

(Sorry for the repost -- I hate the fact that I can't edit/delete replies on FA...)

Hey man it's no problem. Trust me when I say my art has more than a couple errors here and there that need to be tweaked. XD But I feel like part of the point of these sites is to help each other out and critiquing is a part of that.

Heh--you should see the original. This drawing was heavily "tweaked" in Photoshop after I scanned it, and the main character's mouth, neck and scarf were a real challenge to get looking just right. In fact, I was still a little unhappy with her mouth, so I followed up on your suggestion and moved it just a little (you may have to reload your browser a few times before the latest version appears). And I think it looks a little better now. Thanks!

Jeff Wood loves bunny girls. you might send this one to him.... #

You've always had a clean and well-defined sense of character design. :)

Very slick, Mr. Tim!

She looks kinda like Minerva Mink to me.

Minerva was definitely on my mind when I did this drawing. But because it was originally intended for publication I had to avoid any potential copyright issues. So I created a Minerva that wasn't really Minerva (much like THIS DRAWING, which features two "Lolas" who aren't Lola Bunny).