i was recently going through some of my old stories, and i came across one that fasinated me, it was the first story i ever wrote, "the golden warrior".
it was a story with a very special type of magic, "flow" magic, that moves like wind moves though the flute, this magic was used before the stone-age, where many civilisations used the magic, but as will all things, some one started using it for evil....real evil, so, a group of users sealed all abilities to use flow magic from mankind, effectively plunging them into the stone-age.
the year is now 2122, and man kind is at one of its highest peaks, and there is news of the first alien encounter. greggory gallenger was enjoying his life, no worries, no pain, just a good honest life, til the aliens came, and for unknown reasons started wiping out cities, soon whole countries were falling, and rapidly fear filled the world, as everyone ran.
greggory was running for his life, when "it" happened, seeing the aliens wipe out people he knew, he kept on running, running faster ad faster, until he found himself in building, he hid behind a desk, and could hear the aliens getting closer, and closer, their strange language filled the air, as he could feel his heart ready to explode, he closed his eyes, and then the aliens started yelling in fear. slowly gregg opened his eyes and saw before him, an orb...or a flame dancing before him, muttering words
Ori ill cani
ori ill cani
mass auro erroko canti,
trust me
trust me
its with in you, let me in
slowly he looked round, the aliens were behind a feild of light, unable to get closer.
"should i trust you..you could be a trick, a glimmer of hope they are giving me, to watch me squirm!" he answered
orro el canti, massi moroki el kiggara, yu killga unng wegil
who else can you trust, even if i am a trick, what other hope do you have?
gregg could now see the field was fading, the orb mustn't of had a lot of power, and was risking a lot by talking to him
"alright, i accept" he grabbed the orb and pulled it tight into him, the light seemed to burst, but inside him something else bursted, it felt like, something old was awakened inside him, power...no...talent...no thats not the word...more like a natural ablity that had been locked away,
"Ill carrocko massimo allergro ril incero!" he hear his own voice say these words, then, like a puppet he uttered
"give me light, to ignite this eternal night!"
......
......
Nothing happened, the field faded, and the aliens got closer, guns at the ready, then...light filled the building every alien was burnt away, like a statue of dust in a tornado, gregg never seen anything like it, this light, he made it happen, his fears faded and was rplaced by hope, and determination!
wow, i do write some weird stuff,
still, enjoy, til next time
it was a story with a very special type of magic, "flow" magic, that moves like wind moves though the flute, this magic was used before the stone-age, where many civilisations used the magic, but as will all things, some one started using it for evil....real evil, so, a group of users sealed all abilities to use flow magic from mankind, effectively plunging them into the stone-age.
the year is now 2122, and man kind is at one of its highest peaks, and there is news of the first alien encounter. greggory gallenger was enjoying his life, no worries, no pain, just a good honest life, til the aliens came, and for unknown reasons started wiping out cities, soon whole countries were falling, and rapidly fear filled the world, as everyone ran.
greggory was running for his life, when "it" happened, seeing the aliens wipe out people he knew, he kept on running, running faster ad faster, until he found himself in building, he hid behind a desk, and could hear the aliens getting closer, and closer, their strange language filled the air, as he could feel his heart ready to explode, he closed his eyes, and then the aliens started yelling in fear. slowly gregg opened his eyes and saw before him, an orb...or a flame dancing before him, muttering words
Ori ill cani
ori ill cani
mass auro erroko canti,
trust me
trust me
its with in you, let me in
slowly he looked round, the aliens were behind a feild of light, unable to get closer.
"should i trust you..you could be a trick, a glimmer of hope they are giving me, to watch me squirm!" he answered
orro el canti, massi moroki el kiggara, yu killga unng wegil
who else can you trust, even if i am a trick, what other hope do you have?
gregg could now see the field was fading, the orb mustn't of had a lot of power, and was risking a lot by talking to him
"alright, i accept" he grabbed the orb and pulled it tight into him, the light seemed to burst, but inside him something else bursted, it felt like, something old was awakened inside him, power...no...talent...no thats not the word...more like a natural ablity that had been locked away,
"Ill carrocko massimo allergro ril incero!" he hear his own voice say these words, then, like a puppet he uttered
"give me light, to ignite this eternal night!"
......
......
Nothing happened, the field faded, and the aliens got closer, guns at the ready, then...light filled the building every alien was burnt away, like a statue of dust in a tornado, gregg never seen anything like it, this light, he made it happen, his fears faded and was rplaced by hope, and determination!
wow, i do write some weird stuff,
still, enjoy, til next time
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