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This is my first poem! I would love some feedback about it please! Enjoy the read. :)
Dimming in the night
Its flame dying out
A simple candlelight
Faded into eternity
The shadow once there
Its meager blaze gone
You could no longer stare
At the great stone wall
Why do they vanish
Such brief existence
For only them can banish
The darkest nightfall
Everything is now so dark
I can no longer see ahead
Through the obscure park
You hold my hand forever
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Vaagur
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For Amy.
Phtalo
Dimming in the night
Its flame dying out
A simple candlelight
Faded into eternity
The shadow once there
Its meager blaze gone
You could no longer stare
At the great stone wall
Why do they vanish
Such brief existence
For only them can banish
The darkest nightfall
Everything is now so dark
I can no longer see ahead
Through the obscure park
You hold my hand forever
Written by
VaagurCopyright @ Vaagur for the entire poem and the thumbnail.
For Amy.
Phtalo
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 433 B
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