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Schwarzpelz - Chapter 2 - Part 12
Birdy got nommed~
I'm a bit more explicit here with the vore scene than I'll probably be in the future, like with the... inside shots and the chewing and this and that and throat bulges and bla bla bleh. I just really wanted to draw some vore with this
character at that time x3 Already cut out two entire pages for another vore sequence cause it just started seeming too much to me, but I already talked about that.
And yeah if I actually show it I don't want anything to be fatal, so I have some cheek-squishies here instead of chewing teeth, but I do have a few bruises here and there and feathers falling out OuOb So... best of both worlds? xd I don't know~
Anyway, enjoy the mouf~
Art, Schwarzpelz © me
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I'm a bit more explicit here with the vore scene than I'll probably be in the future, like with the... inside shots and the chewing and this and that and throat bulges and bla bla bleh. I just really wanted to draw some vore with this
character at that time x3 Already cut out two entire pages for another vore sequence cause it just started seeming too much to me, but I already talked about that.
And yeah if I actually show it I don't want anything to be fatal, so I have some cheek-squishies here instead of chewing teeth, but I do have a few bruises here and there and feathers falling out OuOb So... best of both worlds? xd I don't know~
Anyway, enjoy the mouf~
Art, Schwarzpelz © me
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Macro / Micro
Species Wolf
Size 1100 x 1375px
File Size 704.5 kB
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I can sympathize with not wanting to go too far with making anything violent, since that's also my preference when it comes to vore. But since you want to make it clear that this is supposed to be lethal and terrifying, there's ways to do that without being graphic. First thing that came to mind was the simple idea of swapping the order of panels 3 and 4, and adding a tiny 'crunch' sound effect...
So a random bird she grabbed turns out to be an intelligent person? Wasn't expecting that at all! If she goes back to her original personality, that's going to be painful for her to deal with.
...And she was still amazingly cute while munching her innocent victim.
So a random bird she grabbed turns out to be an intelligent person? Wasn't expecting that at all! If she goes back to her original personality, that's going to be painful for her to deal with.
...And she was still amazingly cute while munching her innocent victim.
I like this, I can still take it seriously. The chewing panel is pleasant even if it's probably just tree being chewed. I don't want you to have to worry about displeasing watchers, I think art is allowed to be most interesting when it's from the specific mind of only the artist, without worry or second thought. But, I'm a watcher too. Subtle possibilities, leaving things to the imagination and keeping the camera on the outside, these can be very hot and cool tools for pleasing two sides at once and also allowing the much darker of us to imagine even grimmer outcomes than you might have considered. You don't need to be worried about including an inner-mouth shot here and there though, your shadowy teeth cages look awesome.
i do love it when prey is treated as such. No unnecessary mental torment, yet no pity either. they are just part of the food chain.
Now i understand you didn't want to show it due to the graphic nature, but i think chewing would have worked well here. it would really have shown her indifference and lack of current remorse for what she is doing.
Anyway cant wait to continue reading :)
Now i understand you didn't want to show it due to the graphic nature, but i think chewing would have worked well here. it would really have shown her indifference and lack of current remorse for what she is doing.
Anyway cant wait to continue reading :)
...Maybe I shouldn't be because this is meant to be vore... but I'm both sad... and a little angry. Yeah, I know, food chain, whatever... but that doesn't mean I have to enjoy it all the time.
I should clarify, none of my anger is at you. I just get too involved in fantasy stuff and it gets me in trouble. I may delete this comment later
I should clarify, none of my anger is at you. I just get too involved in fantasy stuff and it gets me in trouble. I may delete this comment later
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