now he's a really cat. yay.

You're so good at cats, I really like the design! The mask marking is a really cute idea

Would you be open to a small critique? Feel free to say no! Either way it still looks great, hope you draw more of him

Thank you!

And I can't really take that much credit for the design. I was mostly following the description from the fan fic. ^^; Did take some liberties with the ears though since they didn't specify if they were supposed to be gold or black. ^^;

And sure I'm down for a little critique. I know there's a bunch of mistakes here and there. I just didn't wanna stress over them. ^^;

The cute kitty face is entirely yours though XD I wish I could draw feline faces that well

I understand! It's not a huge critique - I just think the greyish tint to the yellow makes both the yellow and the dark grey look somewhat green and I feel like it gives the image a sort of sickly appearance. I thought maybe if you brightened the yellow slightly and maybe a tiny bit of blue to the grey it might look more pleasant. But it's also okay if you prefer it as you did it, it's just an opinion, apologies if I offended at all!

The yellow I can see. I actually did initially use a brighter/lighter yellow, but I ended up liking this one better. ^^;

As for the grey, it doesn't look greenish to me. Especially since I made sure to not use one with any sort of other color in it. It just looks dark grey to me. I dunno. Maybe it's differences in monitor settings?

Ah sorry maybe I said it poorly! I didn't mean the grey itself was green, but actually that entire lack of saturation when next to the other picture elements I felt it adds to the unpleasant colour I was trying to describe

But art is subjective so if you prefer it how it is please disregard me!

Ah, okay!

And you didn't say anything wrong. You have good points. I just ended up liking that yellow a bit better. And honestly the shading color is weird and probably makes everything look odd. I just didn't feel like changing it. ^^;