Another commission for
nosferatu16 once again featuring
Xiardoruzo!
And as many of you might have expected, it features Oceana once more! this time being taken out for dinner by her Friend Rosa, who seems to have been practicing her culinary skills, which one could assume by comparing her waistline with that in the previous pic, can't trust a skinny cook after all~
This is definitely one of the biggest sizes i've done, i'm pretty happy with how drawing her belly on the table turned out, that took so many retries though ^^;;
I tried out new stuff with reflection from windows as well, though be honest with me here, when you first saw that right window, did you recognize the circles as light reflecting, or did they look more like ufos? x3
Enjoy! thanks so much for commissioning me~
Art is © mine
Characters belong to respective owners
nosferatu16 once again featuring
Xiardoruzo!And as many of you might have expected, it features Oceana once more! this time being taken out for dinner by her Friend Rosa, who seems to have been practicing her culinary skills, which one could assume by comparing her waistline with that in the previous pic, can't trust a skinny cook after all~
This is definitely one of the biggest sizes i've done, i'm pretty happy with how drawing her belly on the table turned out, that took so many retries though ^^;;
I tried out new stuff with reflection from windows as well, though be honest with me here, when you first saw that right window, did you recognize the circles as light reflecting, or did they look more like ufos? x3
Enjoy! thanks so much for commissioning me~
Art is © mine
Characters belong to respective owners
Category All / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 897px
File Size 129.6 kB
It's a nice attempt/ idea to have the reflection of the lights, but the problem is how much they stand out.
If you had more detail to the actual lights, like drawing a bulb part or something rather than just a white disc, then it could help. But it should've have been just the lights. Maybe add a tiny bit of the ceiling where the lights are, maybe a very tiny bit Oceana reflected in some way on the widow.
It just comes down to if a person didn't know that was supposed to be a reflection of the lights, it would be confusing or it looks out of place.
But reflections are some of the hardest things to do, so I won't say you completely botched it up. Also I'm not an artist what so ever if my user page is any indication, so I could be saying complete nonsense to this.
If you had more detail to the actual lights, like drawing a bulb part or something rather than just a white disc, then it could help. But it should've have been just the lights. Maybe add a tiny bit of the ceiling where the lights are, maybe a very tiny bit Oceana reflected in some way on the widow.
It just comes down to if a person didn't know that was supposed to be a reflection of the lights, it would be confusing or it looks out of place.
But reflections are some of the hardest things to do, so I won't say you completely botched it up. Also I'm not an artist what so ever if my user page is any indication, so I could be saying complete nonsense to this.
Thanks alot! i do absolutely agree with you that the lights stand out alot, i'll try applying your tips next time if i draw a similar scenario and see how it turns out~ ^^
And you can always give tips and critique no matter if you're an artist or not, the fact that you know that reflections are hard to do correctly convinces me more than enough that you know what you're talking about
And you can always give tips and critique no matter if you're an artist or not, the fact that you know that reflections are hard to do correctly convinces me more than enough that you know what you're talking about
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