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Kadath, we all know you're a great artist, that much is undisputed. However, the pace of the comic is terrifyingly slow. I'd recommend cutting out some of the fluff, as taking 13 updates to say, "Di picked up her lovable girlfriend Puz as she gets out late from work," is a bit much. I imagine it'll be next year before they get home at this rate. I know this critique probably comes off as terribly rude but that isn't my intention. I'm looking forward to seeing the comic as it continues.
To be honest I was hoping the comic wasn't about sex at all. It seemed like Kadath was interested in having something more regular. Having characters experience interpersonal relations is indeed what I'm hoping for, and having them tied up in doing no actions makes the interaction stale.
Well tbh, I'm heavily considering putting the comic on hiatus and reworking it. I am about to do a cross-country move, and I've got so much on my plate. I was worried the comic was moving too slowly, and I may switch to a full page (instead of half-page) setup (which means we'd be on page 7 now). But yeah, overall I've been feeling pretty down about the comic so far and I'm thinking I need to rework and relaunch it.
Gl on your move, wish you the best Mr. Giraffe. I'm not sure you need to relaunch persay, but perhaps outlining the future of it a little more thoroughly might give you something to work towards? Or they could suddenly get super powers and become a crime fighting duo, vanquishing evil with loving death-hugs?
Not to take anything away from your content, however your pages which only have only two panels are less enjoyable and convey less story, making them less engaging. This also has the problem of slowing down the story of your comic, making it feel like a drag (For lack of better word) to get through that area of the story.
The opposite can be seen with your other pages which contain more panels, this feel fuller in content and thus are more enjoyable, they allow the story to go at a better pace. Look at page 2, 6, 8 and 10, they all have a good pace because multiple panels carry the story and give more to the overall narrative.
My intention for this comment isn't to be rude, however this is something that I feel you need to work on for the sake of your story and possible stagnation.
Look at your adult stories, each panel on each page helps to progress the story at a stable rate (Even if nothing of importance is happening in the panel). This is often because artists want to get to the sex scenes, but this can also be used to establish a pace and keep it.
The opposite can be seen with your other pages which contain more panels, this feel fuller in content and thus are more enjoyable, they allow the story to go at a better pace. Look at page 2, 6, 8 and 10, they all have a good pace because multiple panels carry the story and give more to the overall narrative.
My intention for this comment isn't to be rude, however this is something that I feel you need to work on for the sake of your story and possible stagnation.
Look at your adult stories, each panel on each page helps to progress the story at a stable rate (Even if nothing of importance is happening in the panel). This is often because artists want to get to the sex scenes, but this can also be used to establish a pace and keep it.
Oh I understand. And I agree, too. As I replied to Aimlesswaves above, I feel like the comic is just not very enjoyable to work on right now, and I'm thinking that since I'm about to move cross-country, I may just put the comic on hiatus and rework it into a full-page setup. I'm not feeling it's been very fun or rewarding to work on so far.
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