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you tried emily, but momma cat has made her choice. also cute little wink wink to who suggested the babying ;3
(keep in mind the straightjacket is jsut a kind of connector, she WONT be wearing it!)(refresh for right file, uploaded the non fixed line one!!)
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patrons also get access to full rez of most images =3
(keep in mind the straightjacket is jsut a kind of connector, she WONT be wearing it!)(refresh for right file, uploaded the non fixed line one!!)
https://www.patreon.com/paddedulf support if you can :D as low as 6 gives access to all early works and exclusives :D. plus every 10 subs, adds 1 more chance for someone to win a free colored sketch 8D
patrons also get access to full rez of most images =3
Category Artwork (Digital) / Baby fur
Species Housecat
Size 2497 x 3409px
File Size 4.44 MB
Just for a bit of critique:
- Even with the dialogue bubbles pointing to who's saying what, it's still pretty tough to determine WHEN it's being said. While you haven't drawn conventional panels, and I think that's a neat artistic choice, next time I would suggest making things a little less crowded so as to clearly define what is part of each scene. Maybe it's just me having a bit of trouble putting each panel together, but having it like this does make it kinda blend together in a jumbled way.
- Perhaps not so much criticism as confusion here. Why does the denim outfit go from being snapped shut over her tail in one panel, to then unsnapped and missing the hole that was there?
That stuff aside, this looks really good! Nice job on it! Looking forward to the next page.
- Even with the dialogue bubbles pointing to who's saying what, it's still pretty tough to determine WHEN it's being said. While you haven't drawn conventional panels, and I think that's a neat artistic choice, next time I would suggest making things a little less crowded so as to clearly define what is part of each scene. Maybe it's just me having a bit of trouble putting each panel together, but having it like this does make it kinda blend together in a jumbled way.
- Perhaps not so much criticism as confusion here. Why does the denim outfit go from being snapped shut over her tail in one panel, to then unsnapped and missing the hole that was there?
That stuff aside, this looks really good! Nice job on it! Looking forward to the next page.
you do me way too much kindess <3 your sketchwork is beatiful, im so envious <3 im not talented, i just try really hard ;u;
i wanted to go with a unique style of boaderless, something that would kinda create a flow, still working it out ;u;
seriously, thank you so much. im really glad you like what you see, i will work very hard to do my best on it ;u;
i wanted to go with a unique style of boaderless, something that would kinda create a flow, still working it out ;u;
seriously, thank you so much. im really glad you like what you see, i will work very hard to do my best on it ;u;
I love the general direction of where this is going, but the page layout is kinda confusing.
I suggest making the "pop-outs" (parts of the frame that go outside the frame) a bit smaller so that the frames are separated a bit more clearly, and arrows between frames to indicate the correct order.
I suggest making the "pop-outs" (parts of the frame that go outside the frame) a bit smaller so that the frames are separated a bit more clearly, and arrows between frames to indicate the correct order.
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