An old, old story I've never posted on FA, but it came up in conversation yesterday and I thought I really should put it up here for people to read, and maybe even finish it some time! I wrote the first 2000 words or so in November 2008, another 4000 a fortnight later in December, then the next 4000 in April 2009, came back to it in April 2011 with another 2500, and that's as far as it ever went. And we're still not even at lunchtime! ^.^
Guest-starring in order of appearance:
Raikan belongs to
Raikan
Sirius belongs to
Sirius_Babyhound
Warren and Lig belong to
Lig
Prav belongs to
Prav
Xenon belongs to
Twilight_Prophet
Sierra belongs to
Sierra the baby kitty princess
Kaffre belongs to
Kaffre
Jerry belongs to
JerryTehMunk
Ozzie belongs to
OzzieKitSkunk
Cuddy belongs to
knuffwolf
Mentioned but not seen (yet)

Guest-starring in order of appearance:
Raikan belongs to
RaikanSirius belongs to
Sirius_BabyhoundWarren and Lig belong to
LigPrav belongs to
PravXenon belongs to
Twilight_ProphetSierra belongs to
Sierra the baby kitty princessKaffre belongs to
KaffreJerry belongs to
JerryTehMunkOzzie belongs to
OzzieKitSkunkCuddy belongs to
Mentioned but not seen (yet)


Category Story / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 103px
File Size 69.6 kB
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Hehe, nice story Zee-Zee! I'm a little surprised we didn't see Friendly or Timothy in this story (but I guess we could say they live off the route to the daycare that Zee-Zee normally takes. *giggle*)
Looking forward to seeing more! *picks up the clever little squirrel and gently nuzzles him*
Looking forward to seeing more! *picks up the clever little squirrel and gently nuzzles him*
(Stupid early here too, so totally relevant to the story).
Yeah, maybe. I didn't realize this was an older creation...
I read it with plush Timothy in my arms this morning and I'm sure I heard him say " I wish I could wake up dry like Zee-Zee" - poor little guy totally soaked his nighttime pull-ups. I've got him wearing cool glow-in-the-dark blue Cars pull-ups which are more absorbent than his red learning designs ones.
Alas although Timothy may conquer the potty in the daytime... every morning his trainers will be wet.
Yeah, maybe. I didn't realize this was an older creation...
I read it with plush Timothy in my arms this morning and I'm sure I heard him say " I wish I could wake up dry like Zee-Zee" - poor little guy totally soaked his nighttime pull-ups. I've got him wearing cool glow-in-the-dark blue Cars pull-ups which are more absorbent than his red learning designs ones.
Alas although Timothy may conquer the potty in the daytime... every morning his trainers will be wet.
Ooh I've read the first quarter or so of this story a long time ago (I think you PM'd it to me), but had no idea you'd made so much progress on it in the interim!
Anyway, it sounds like this will be a long, difficult, day for Zoomy, but potentially a rewarding one too!
*practices being cute*
Anyway, it sounds like this will be a long, difficult, day for Zoomy, but potentially a rewarding one too!
*practices being cute*
Maggie: Um...I believe you when you say you woke up dry, Zee-Zee.
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I just finished reading the whole thing. Love it so far! Zee-Zee's trying his best to keep himself from having an accident. I hope it lasts, he's not wearing his Pull-Ups anymore!
I'm glad you mentioned Josh but didn't show him in the story. Maybe he's coming later? Or is that wishful thinking? By the way, his sister Cari is only two years older than him, making her four, so if you want to add her in the mix, go ahead.
Can't wait to see what will pop up in the next part.
I'm glad you mentioned Josh but didn't show him in the story. Maybe he's coming later? Or is that wishful thinking? By the way, his sister Cari is only two years older than him, making her four, so if you want to add her in the mix, go ahead.
Can't wait to see what will pop up in the next part.
This is a really great story Zee-Zee. I love the dialogue and the plot! The beginning of the story where we wake up to the sound of a car crash was an interesting and eye-catching way to start us off! Zee-Zee always behaves like a believable almost-a-big-boy. I sure can empathize with his excitement about keeping his pull-up dry for all those hours! Tacki would certainly be impressed. He certainly couldn't keep anything he's wearing dry on purpose for so long.
I do hope you continue the story. I'm definitely going to be wondering if you'll be able to keep you're new awesome borrowed-big-kid undies dry all day. Not that there should be any doubt that you will keep them dry, being such a clever, big-boy squirrel and all. Maybe this is Zee-Zee's origin story for how he finally stopped wearing pull-ups for good?!
Anyways, thanks for posting this story! It was both adorable and cleverly written, and I liked it a lot!
I do hope you continue the story. I'm definitely going to be wondering if you'll be able to keep you're new awesome borrowed-big-kid undies dry all day. Not that there should be any doubt that you will keep them dry, being such a clever, big-boy squirrel and all. Maybe this is Zee-Zee's origin story for how he finally stopped wearing pull-ups for good?!
Anyways, thanks for posting this story! It was both adorable and cleverly written, and I liked it a lot!
You know what? You should make a TV show starring Zee-Zee and submit it to PBS Kids or Nick Jr. or whatever. It has the same basic formula as shows like Caillou and Peppa Pig, and you have the potential to make it better. I mean, lots of parents complain about those shows, saying that the main character is a bad influence on their kids; Zee-Zee could be an actual good role model for young children while still acting like a real kid.
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