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and the LAST page of chapter 1 of this story
I am drain and I really want to continue this but will anyone help me? ^^;
anyway Trinity control trying to go into Ray but it turn Ray's core on max and overdrive and her Rage mode is actervated and well as you all know this make her core eat away at her faster.
What will happen next? HELP ME to continue this ^^
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and the LAST page of chapter 1 of this story
I am drain and I really want to continue this but will anyone help me? ^^;
anyway Trinity control trying to go into Ray but it turn Ray's core on max and overdrive and her Rage mode is actervated and well as you all know this make her core eat away at her faster.
What will happen next? HELP ME to continue this ^^
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 875 x 1280px
File Size 272.4 kB
They tampered with her hardware, and made it unstable, huh?
I think that, you should have the scene, where, Dr. White tells Beck, that's what caused her hardware, to become unstable; meaning that, they gave too much of that energy towards her, at once.
And that's also where you should introduce Richard, of whom is trying to fix this problem, and later on, befriend Ray, at the end of this comic. (Who knows? Maybe at the end of the comic, Richard and Raychel would become best friends!)
I think that, you should have the scene, where, Dr. White tells Beck, that's what caused her hardware, to become unstable; meaning that, they gave too much of that energy towards her, at once.
And that's also where you should introduce Richard, of whom is trying to fix this problem, and later on, befriend Ray, at the end of this comic. (Who knows? Maybe at the end of the comic, Richard and Raychel would become best friends!)
it wasn't them it wass Trinity when she went out of control, she infected Ray and others, causeing Ray to attack and attack, not caring to feed, until her own core begin to feed on herself too much that it began to feed alot more and the hunger grow so she needd to keep feeding
and the one trying to fix her is in the future, if I can get around to continuing this story then hoping it get to that part where they meet
and the one trying to fix her is in the future, if I can get around to continuing this story then hoping it get to that part where they meet
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