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Okey Okey. I want to say this for a long time now and i say it now:
I love this comic. It's really happy and funny. BUT. But i have a little problem with this series but i think i am alone with this. My only problem is: This comic is TOO HAPPY! And most of the characters are so irreal happy and funny too.
Okey i explain: I know this comic is basicly a comedy one with a big slice-of-life feeling but some page's are full of emotion's (like the Seth and Alex talking page) and some page' have a big potential of a deeper message but that things are not developed! But not any, the story of James and her problem has been doing well,i talking conflicts like this.......
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20258683/
That page's have a big potential to showed up an other side of Alex but this is not happenend. Okey i know the ignoring is a good choice in a situation like this but this have could played too:
-Trey: What are u doing here? Get out in here, u dont get my ass!
- Alex: Trey FUCK U
-Trey: What did u just say?
-Alex:I said FUCK U Trey! I am not vorse than u just because i am gay! I get a shower now with u guys and if u dont like it then go away!
Yeah Alex it's showed her angry side! Or an other idea: Loose one game and everyboody blame everybody after that! And thats what i talked about. A little character drama and conflicts between of the characters and then this comic is get a little plus. I know the Summer part is have a pair of this but Autumn is needed too not just always the ' I am so happy as hell" thing. I just cant belive this characters has not have any problems of his life's !
Sorry if i hurt u Alejandro i really dont want it but i needed to write this thing! I hope u are not angry........
I love this comic. It's really happy and funny. BUT. But i have a little problem with this series but i think i am alone with this. My only problem is: This comic is TOO HAPPY! And most of the characters are so irreal happy and funny too.
Okey i explain: I know this comic is basicly a comedy one with a big slice-of-life feeling but some page's are full of emotion's (like the Seth and Alex talking page) and some page' have a big potential of a deeper message but that things are not developed! But not any, the story of James and her problem has been doing well,i talking conflicts like this.......
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20258683/
That page's have a big potential to showed up an other side of Alex but this is not happenend. Okey i know the ignoring is a good choice in a situation like this but this have could played too:
-Trey: What are u doing here? Get out in here, u dont get my ass!
- Alex: Trey FUCK U
-Trey: What did u just say?
-Alex:I said FUCK U Trey! I am not vorse than u just because i am gay! I get a shower now with u guys and if u dont like it then go away!
Yeah Alex it's showed her angry side! Or an other idea: Loose one game and everyboody blame everybody after that! And thats what i talked about. A little character drama and conflicts between of the characters and then this comic is get a little plus. I know the Summer part is have a pair of this but Autumn is needed too not just always the ' I am so happy as hell" thing. I just cant belive this characters has not have any problems of his life's !
Sorry if i hurt u Alejandro i really dont want it but i needed to write this thing! I hope u are not angry........
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