I enjoyed your work over at DA, since I was at DA before here, you one the first people doing tfs that I graviated to. You have good setups and good transformation scenes, I do have one critism, though it is more so a personal preference and I can't quite put it into words. It almost feels like the victims are just there to describe the tf and I don't know, it feels mechanical.

Oh bummer. So you'd like to see more character development of the characters? I can see it really helping some stories. I always love the detail of the transformation so that's probably why you get that feelings of it being the focus!

It took me awhile to figure out what my problem is, but I think I figured it out. Usually, transformation stories use the actual transformation to do something else, at least here on ta, it can range from a whole load of things, so when I go back and see the more deviantart style where it is more vanilla it feels weird and incomplete. This is completely my taste but the ends can seem abrupt where as soon as the transformation is over, the story is personal over.

Personally, I like to see what happens to them after they transform, and their mental state of being somewhere in limbo bewteen animal and human.

It is your art, so you should make it how you want, but this is just how I feel. I think character devolpment can really help espiecally if it ties into the transformation like how they change (to clarify since "change" can mean a lot things in this context, like how they change mentally due to the transformation, which in order to see, you kind of need a before and after) or if their is something karmic about them changing. I also think see the personality of the person causing it can add to the experience because they can be the most interesting character.

That was a nice transformation story, each of the changes were nicely detailed.