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A simple solution to an aggravating problem. (diaper story)
THIS IS NOT MY STORY. THIS IS HALF OF AN ART TRADE THAT WAS WRITTEN BY 
Shadow1023
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/shadow1023/
Visit his page please! He's an amazing writer!
This story is about an eevee, a sylveon, an umbreon and an espeon who all share one space, and must cope every day with the struggles of waiting for each to finish using the bathroom for their own individual purposes. Sylveon has had enough, and decided to propose a simple solution; padding.
Please, although Shadow will not post this to his page, go give him a watch and check out his stuff!
Shadow1023https://www.furaffinity.net/user/shadow1023/
Visit his page please! He's an amazing writer!
This story is about an eevee, a sylveon, an umbreon and an espeon who all share one space, and must cope every day with the struggles of waiting for each to finish using the bathroom for their own individual purposes. Sylveon has had enough, and decided to propose a simple solution; padding.
Please, although Shadow will not post this to his page, go give him a watch and check out his stuff!
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 12.3 kB
Actually, I do like it. The plot has a great idea, and I do like how they're gradually accepting it..and even enjoying it. However, I do kind of agree that it was a tad too fast. You could just expand a bit...like have it be the next day and pretty much have it become normal for them to just go whenever they feel it. However, for what it is...it's a cute little read, well done.
maybe I could give ya a hand. I've actually got a few ideas, Like how about a continuation of the next day. Like...at frist Espeon hates them...but the next day each of them start using it like it's natural...and start getting into other AB things..like baby clothes or things like that.
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