That's a thick magazine for only .38. I still want one, though. :D

thanks i just liked the way they were shaped, it is a bit large for a 38 i understand but the technology i assumed would be from several thousand years from now.

Hello, Mericus. I do hope you do not mind a critique upon the design...
As the design is an SMG, thus using a pistol cartridge, the clip IS a bit to long. Not as in capacity, but front-to-back, especially for the cartridge. You may also decide to go with a caseless as opposed to a cased design. Limiting it to a 6 round burst is reasonable. The feed angle strikes me as a bit sharp, though, causing problems when the rounds reach the feed ramp. The space given between the magazine and the handgrip seems insufficient to get fingers through, and the thumbhole needs enlargement, too, if it is to be utilized by human/anthro hands. The cyclic rate also seems extremely low, even for a closed-bolt design (as this seems more lika a closed-bolt as opposed to open-bolt design. If it IS open-bolt, then the cyclic rate seems VERY low. The point of a high cyclic rate combined with a limited burst mode is to get rounds out of the gun before recoil can travel enough to be felt or muzzle flip come into play.
Despite this critique, I think the design is quite decent, with a lot of potential. Please keep it up!

Yours,
Mika Kyubi
Kitsune-at-Large

each Rhiaxian bullet has a smart missile telescan guidance pin in the tip which adds to the length of the cartridge. this means even if someone runs around the corner the bullet will follow them!

I did not reveal this years ago because I put it inside my game to be discovered by players. The Zorg weapon in the Fifth Element used three of the design ideas I came up with in 1986, but since I did not publish back then; I can't sue them.

well thanks, im ahh just conceptual with some knowledge of machines. I'll try some adjustments. It is a slow fire weapon not as slow as a 'potatoe digger' a early 1890's machine gun design used on the indians at the first wounded knee massacre, (of defenseless indians that time). Oh thanks for being polite, i do appreciate it, thankyou.:)

umm you used that one already, not the nun thingie but the previous, but there are no evil kittens, only if you used a nun's garmet in such a dirty enterprise, all you would get is a bad habit.