This is a cool comic, but the hand in the fourth panel doesn't look quite right. The lines for the fingers shouldn't cause an abrupt stop where they meet the top of the hand, and the thumb looks broken into two segments. At that angle, the fingers should connect to the rest of the hand. Just two quick random photostock pieces for reference.

I am not saying this to be a dick, because I like your art! I've really liked your posework and the way you do body forms (especially your traditional work), and God knows you draw hands better than me. Just a slight observation/critique on the rest of the good art on the other pages and panels!

Thanks for the critique; I see what you mean. I've been trying to square up my fingers lately, style-wise and make them look more blocky, as they read better with shadow, but maybe I'm over-doing it. I'll keep it in mind! XD

TF trigger: Paper-doinks.