Oh man I remember this one now. I actually still enjoy it as a comedy bit.

Nah, it doesn't come across as having EDGY!! syndrome, there's not enough jabs at tumblr or lazy jokes about trigger warnings for that.

You are, however, correct on some of the jokes hitting well. Particularly the build up to Rolf/Ralph (I can't recall if you ever established if one was correct over the other, or maybe there's a Cheryl/Carol thing going on) drinking the urine - I can practically "hear" the delivery, and it's great. If I wasn't certain my voice is totally wrong for it, this (and a few others actually) would be really fun to try recording some voice acting for, but I won't embarrass myself by doing that. It's pretty great on its own though so no big loss to the world!

Yeah rereading it, I was pretty happy with this one for it's pace on the Biff/Rolf joke. My original idea was Rolf was in clean comics, and Ralph was his slightly better adjusted version for relationship/sex comics. Cheer up Rolf! Rolf does not seem like he is ready for a relationship, ask Twiggy.

This one certainly has a better pace and feel to it than te earlier ones-- much more Ren And Stimpy sort of feel than Hot Topic. Haha.

I'm fond of the tail-swipe gag onthe first page.