The only tip I have is the cheeks should reach around to the muzzle
like in this one wip you had https://www.instagram.com/p/BEOpqrD.....-by=dominobear
But make sure it lines up with the lines you made for the eyes
Also not sure if you know about it but this is a nice tutorial https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ntf5o3qYw-4

I would also say only put the eyes in after your done carving the face.
You never know if you might change the shape. Also try making the bridge between
the eyes less cut at the top.
Also to make the cuts in the foamy smoother for the pupils use a piece of sand paper!

Other wise can't wait to see how this comes out!
I wish you luck :D

Thank you very much for the advice! I thought about re-making the cheeks because they looked really off to me.

Also I never considered using sandpaper to smooth things out until now. Again thanks a lot! c:

Yeah no problem :D
I'm always happy to help!