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Commentary:
They first thing you might have noticed is that blue speech bubble in panel 1. I decided to have all Kuganan speaking in this comic. My other option was to putaround the text. But I decided it would be easier and save more space this way. Even without reading this commentary, it should be obvious as to why the speech bubble is blue when the next page is read. Hopefully anyone colorblind can tell the difference.

I also tried some other things with the speech bubbles in this page. Panel 9 has to bubbles touching to save space as well as keep the text broken up to keep it easy to read. Panel 2 has overlapping speech bubbles used as an interrupt which is something I had already planned for the next page, but chose to do it here as well at the last second. Speaking of last second decisions, I also put in that "Lopu, stop!" quote. It took up a bit more space, but it was worth it.

Also give yourself a pat on the back if you guessed that Dracmore was in the same group that Lopu and Olaf were in. I didn't realize until just now, but the cover for this chapter was probably a huge give away. Oh well.