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Original Sketch (C) 
over here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/541594/
I did this pic as I wanted something to show off how I do my inking and coloring now that everything is done in illustrator. This actually only took 1 hour to create... and I am working on getting the video uploaded now ^_^ when I do I'll post it for you to see!
UPDATE: The Video is available now! Download it here: http://www.quiet269.com/KissyKissy.mov
over here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/541594/I did this pic as I wanted something to show off how I do my inking and coloring now that everything is done in illustrator. This actually only took 1 hour to create... and I am working on getting the video uploaded now ^_^ when I do I'll post it for you to see!
UPDATE: The Video is available now! Download it here: http://www.quiet269.com/KissyKissy.mov
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File Size 1.05 MB
hehe I will be
I learn something new with every pic so I'm glad to keep working on them
I do have a question for you, I can swap out color mods when selecting really easy... but the only way I've found to use an eye dropper is to hit the live paint bucket.... which doesn't work so well... do you know where the eye dropper tool is?
I learn something new with every pic so I'm glad to keep working on them
I do have a question for you, I can swap out color mods when selecting really easy... but the only way I've found to use an eye dropper is to hit the live paint bucket.... which doesn't work so well... do you know where the eye dropper tool is?
Critique hammer time. Put on your seat belts, it might get rough.
One thing that is fine, but should probably be adjusted, is that isn't their color scheme. This is a minimal issue, and I wentforever before being informed that there even was one.
Example: http://www.spottedbunny.com/comics/.....uction_rs1.png
Also, you missed certain areas of colour. For example, Mitche's tummy fur is a separate color, and SB has a third spot on the left side of his face (Our right) Also, the highlighted area above Mitch's left eye is well done, but doesn't really exist.
The ends of some of the lines (see details in Mitch's ears) seem too have hooks on them. I could guess why, but no need to do that here. That is the only immediate issue I see with linework, and you make it smooth like it should be. Expert usage of the pen tool, I give you a golden star!
The bottom of SB's eyes are difficult to pull off, and you did a fine job, but his right eye is displaying a trim line of white below the iris that needs to be hidden.
That 'saliva' is very well blended, but with that color it doesn't quite seem to be saliva that they were kissing around *Is naughty* For saliva I suggest a mild cyan (or yellow) tinting. You can even use that same color and change the hue too something like 180 and the saturation too 5% or less. (Play with it and find what you like. B:100% of course)
Shading isn't brought into play here, and I almost never use shading myself, but you might give it a shot. When it works it really works, and when it doesn't, it just doesn't, so it takes a fair amount of time and tweaking to get it right. I'd suggest getting all your other tools and steps down before you ever concern yourself with this.
I know this wasn't concerning backgrounds, but they are really good for making an image seem completed. (especially when you don't have any shading). For Amarimasi's work there isn't ever a background, so I find that a simple repetitive pattern and/or lighting works well. Of course, this part is optional, and you can find tutorials on this all over the place.
And... Ummm... That is my critique, as general as the last half may have been. You asked for it ^__^
RATING: 3/4 paws up
One thing that is fine, but should probably be adjusted, is that isn't their color scheme. This is a minimal issue, and I wentforever before being informed that there even was one.
Example: http://www.spottedbunny.com/comics/.....uction_rs1.png
Also, you missed certain areas of colour. For example, Mitche's tummy fur is a separate color, and SB has a third spot on the left side of his face (Our right) Also, the highlighted area above Mitch's left eye is well done, but doesn't really exist.
The ends of some of the lines (see details in Mitch's ears) seem too have hooks on them. I could guess why, but no need to do that here. That is the only immediate issue I see with linework, and you make it smooth like it should be. Expert usage of the pen tool, I give you a golden star!
The bottom of SB's eyes are difficult to pull off, and you did a fine job, but his right eye is displaying a trim line of white below the iris that needs to be hidden.
That 'saliva' is very well blended, but with that color it doesn't quite seem to be saliva that they were kissing around *Is naughty* For saliva I suggest a mild cyan (or yellow) tinting. You can even use that same color and change the hue too something like 180 and the saturation too 5% or less. (Play with it and find what you like. B:100% of course)
Shading isn't brought into play here, and I almost never use shading myself, but you might give it a shot. When it works it really works, and when it doesn't, it just doesn't, so it takes a fair amount of time and tweaking to get it right. I'd suggest getting all your other tools and steps down before you ever concern yourself with this.
I know this wasn't concerning backgrounds, but they are really good for making an image seem completed. (especially when you don't have any shading). For Amarimasi's work there isn't ever a background, so I find that a simple repetitive pattern and/or lighting works well. Of course, this part is optional, and you can find tutorials on this all over the place.
And... Ummm... That is my critique, as general as the last half may have been. You asked for it ^__^
RATING: 3/4 paws up
Critique hammer time. Put on your seat belts, it might get rough.Ok! Lets see what you got ^_^
But first... >.> I just realized this was the same piccy you did lol! I forgot to even check...
Example: http://www.spottedbunny.com/comics/.....uction_rs1.png
Also, you missed certain areas of colour. For example, Mitche's tummy fur is a separate color, and SB has a third spot on the left side of his face (Our right) Also, the highlighted area above Mitch's left eye is well done, but doesn't really exist. yeah, I knew they had color schemes, but it seems I pulled up one of her raccoons that wasn't Mitch... I thought he needed a lighter fur on the tummy, but just went with the color scheme I had in the pic I used for a reference hehe... as for the Spots on SB I noticed the 2 on the right side of his face, but didn't notice I needed to add in the spot on the left, it also looks like I may have to remove a spot too based on the Bunny Gots A Raddle pic... The Eye thing makes sense, I couldn't think of what to do with it, I'll fill it in with black ^_^
The ends of some of the lines (see details in Mitch's ears) seem too have hooks on them. I could guess why, but no need to do that here. That is the only immediate issue I see with linework, and you make it smooth like it should be. Expert usage of the pen tool, I give you a golden star! The hooks are something I'm still struggling with. see what I try to do is taper the linework, and I can do this by using the Miter Limit to my advantage and doubling back on the linework, unfortunately sometimes it creates that hook effect, I just need to continue playing with the settings until I find one that gets me close enough to the line t remove the hook while still giving me the taper effect... and Thank-you
The bottom of SB's eyes are difficult to pull off, and you did a fine job, but his right eye is displaying a trim line of white below the iris that needs to be hidden.
That 'saliva' is very well blended, but with that color it doesn't quite seem to be saliva that they were kissing around *Is naughty* For saliva I suggest a mild cyan (or yellow) tinting. You can even use that same color and change the hue too something like 180 and the saturation too 5% or less. (Play with it and find what you like. B:100% of course) hmm, yeah right now I am using solid white with 75% Opacity to show through a bit on the colors behind it. I never thought to give it as light tent, but that does make sense ^_^ You lost me on the "B:100%" thing though hehe...
Shading isn't brought into play here, and I almost never use shading myself, but you might give it a shot. When it works it really works, and when it doesn't, it just doesn't, so it takes a fair amount of time and tweaking to get it right. I'd suggest getting all your other tools and steps down before you ever concern yourself with this. Yeah, I'd love to do shading, but I just have no idea what should and shouldn't be shaded hehe... I have trouble understanding the 3d aspect of it... I have some ideas on how to learn, but still a ways away from implementing that I do want to do it eventually, but I need to learn what should and shouldn't be shaded first
I know this wasn't concerning backgrounds, but they are really good for making an image seem completed. (especially when you don't have any shading). For Amarimasi's work there isn't ever a background, so I find that a simple repetitive pattern and/or lighting works well. Of course, this part is optional, and you can find tutorials on this all over the place. I do like to add a background when I can, but I wasn't really sure what to do with something like this hehe... I dunno if they are expected, or if just a plain white background is better? I'll try a simple background on the next one ^_^
And... Ummm... That is my critique, as general as the last half may have been. You asked for it ^__^
RATING: 3/4 paws up
Thank-you very much! I learned a bunch working with pics and listening to your tips ^_^ I've only started using Illustrator a little bit ago (With this pic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1871221 ) *Checks* Ok... A Month ago tomorrow night so I'm still learning a lot of stuff hehe.
But first... >.> I just realized this was the same piccy you did lol! I forgot to even check...
Example: http://www.spottedbunny.com/comics/.....uction_rs1.png
Also, you missed certain areas of colour. For example, Mitche's tummy fur is a separate color, and SB has a third spot on the left side of his face (Our right) Also, the highlighted area above Mitch's left eye is well done, but doesn't really exist. yeah, I knew they had color schemes, but it seems I pulled up one of her raccoons that wasn't Mitch... I thought he needed a lighter fur on the tummy, but just went with the color scheme I had in the pic I used for a reference hehe... as for the Spots on SB I noticed the 2 on the right side of his face, but didn't notice I needed to add in the spot on the left, it also looks like I may have to remove a spot too based on the Bunny Gots A Raddle pic... The Eye thing makes sense, I couldn't think of what to do with it, I'll fill it in with black ^_^
The ends of some of the lines (see details in Mitch's ears) seem too have hooks on them. I could guess why, but no need to do that here. That is the only immediate issue I see with linework, and you make it smooth like it should be. Expert usage of the pen tool, I give you a golden star! The hooks are something I'm still struggling with. see what I try to do is taper the linework, and I can do this by using the Miter Limit to my advantage and doubling back on the linework, unfortunately sometimes it creates that hook effect, I just need to continue playing with the settings until I find one that gets me close enough to the line t remove the hook while still giving me the taper effect... and Thank-you
The bottom of SB's eyes are difficult to pull off, and you did a fine job, but his right eye is displaying a trim line of white below the iris that needs to be hidden.
That 'saliva' is very well blended, but with that color it doesn't quite seem to be saliva that they were kissing around *Is naughty* For saliva I suggest a mild cyan (or yellow) tinting. You can even use that same color and change the hue too something like 180 and the saturation too 5% or less. (Play with it and find what you like. B:100% of course) hmm, yeah right now I am using solid white with 75% Opacity to show through a bit on the colors behind it. I never thought to give it as light tent, but that does make sense ^_^ You lost me on the "B:100%" thing though hehe...
Shading isn't brought into play here, and I almost never use shading myself, but you might give it a shot. When it works it really works, and when it doesn't, it just doesn't, so it takes a fair amount of time and tweaking to get it right. I'd suggest getting all your other tools and steps down before you ever concern yourself with this. Yeah, I'd love to do shading, but I just have no idea what should and shouldn't be shaded hehe... I have trouble understanding the 3d aspect of it... I have some ideas on how to learn, but still a ways away from implementing that I do want to do it eventually, but I need to learn what should and shouldn't be shaded first
I know this wasn't concerning backgrounds, but they are really good for making an image seem completed. (especially when you don't have any shading). For Amarimasi's work there isn't ever a background, so I find that a simple repetitive pattern and/or lighting works well. Of course, this part is optional, and you can find tutorials on this all over the place. I do like to add a background when I can, but I wasn't really sure what to do with something like this hehe... I dunno if they are expected, or if just a plain white background is better? I'll try a simple background on the next one ^_^
And... Ummm... That is my critique, as general as the last half may have been. You asked for it ^__^
RATING: 3/4 paws up
Thank-you very much! I learned a bunch working with pics and listening to your tips ^_^ I've only started using Illustrator a little bit ago (With this pic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1871221 ) *Checks* Ok... A Month ago tomorrow night so I'm still learning a lot of stuff hehe.
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