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Species Wolf
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ahhh Captain I've missed this big ol' puppy TwT he was the first OC I ever made haha so he's older than Poppy because I made her after him OwO what the heckkkkk anyway haha I usually sketch out what I draw before I take it to the computer because I don;t have a tablet and it's easier to get exactly what I want out of a picture when I do it by hand instead of using a mouse y'know?
I would love some gentle criticism on this tho because I've never done male anatomy like this before so I used a lot of references and any tips would be awesome c:
If you can't read his bio because my hand writing sucks here ya go:
Very serious but is actually a huge teddy bear with kids and anything smol.
Has a gruff nature but tries to not be too intimidating.
Rough, deep voice, polite, likes beer.
Usually wears V-necks with denim or leather jacket and fitted jeans.
Insecure about his smile (and laugh!) so doesn't do that much lol.
Anything else that's written up there is just little things about him haha so they're not too important. I do plan on drawing this digitally sooner or later so yea. :3
art and Captain by me!
I would love some gentle criticism on this tho because I've never done male anatomy like this before so I used a lot of references and any tips would be awesome c:
If you can't read his bio because my hand writing sucks here ya go:
Very serious but is actually a huge teddy bear with kids and anything smol.
Has a gruff nature but tries to not be too intimidating.
Rough, deep voice, polite, likes beer.
Usually wears V-necks with denim or leather jacket and fitted jeans.
Insecure about his smile (and laugh!) so doesn't do that much lol.
Anything else that's written up there is just little things about him haha so they're not too important. I do plan on drawing this digitally sooner or later so yea. :3
art and Captain by me!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 1129 x 613px
File Size 487 kB
Listed in Folders
Okie dokie! First off, I love this character and can't wait to see him colored and awesome and everything! Will probably do a fan art as soon as I can too xD
Onto helping you with anatomy because I know the struggles, they're real. lol.
You actually got an amazing amount of detail down and right. The only thing I'd suggest is is make things a bit more, curved. Like the neck muscles, you got the awesome "arching" but it's still sharp/flat. So a little curved when approaching the neck's good. :>
And speaking of the neck, make it a wee bit thicker. I mean that's a subjective idea. It can remain as is.
The last thing I'd mention is that his pectorals are a bit too spread out near the base of them. Like I've seen some who have that, like this dude: http://www.esteticaycirugias.com/im.....ctorales-2.jpg
But he's not as ripped.
This man: http://img.aws.livestrongcdn.com/ls.....1634505_XS.jpg is also not as ripped but more heavier than the first one I linked and his chesticles are "connected". So it's up to you! You can make the distance between them at the base of the pecs shorter or leave as is.
ALSO, I'M SORRY IF THIS COMES OFF HARSH, I DON'T MEAN IT THAT WAY, I'M SO SORRY AND I LOVE YOU.
I HAVE THIS TROUBLE TOO.
Onto helping you with anatomy because I know the struggles, they're real. lol.
You actually got an amazing amount of detail down and right. The only thing I'd suggest is is make things a bit more, curved. Like the neck muscles, you got the awesome "arching" but it's still sharp/flat. So a little curved when approaching the neck's good. :>
And speaking of the neck, make it a wee bit thicker. I mean that's a subjective idea. It can remain as is.
The last thing I'd mention is that his pectorals are a bit too spread out near the base of them. Like I've seen some who have that, like this dude: http://www.esteticaycirugias.com/im.....ctorales-2.jpg
But he's not as ripped.
This man: http://img.aws.livestrongcdn.com/ls.....1634505_XS.jpg is also not as ripped but more heavier than the first one I linked and his chesticles are "connected". So it's up to you! You can make the distance between them at the base of the pecs shorter or leave as is.
ALSO, I'M SORRY IF THIS COMES OFF HARSH, I DON'T MEAN IT THAT WAY, I'M SO SORRY AND I LOVE YOU.
I HAVE THIS TROUBLE TOO.
Awesome!!! Thanks so much I will definitely apply those to the next one :D and yea I agree with like, all of that haha xD the pecs were so hard like I couldn't understand haha and the abs omg I was like crying for help xDDD: ah but it didn't sound harsh at all thank you so much!! And yes the struggles are real lol
I'm glad to hear it! Anatomy in general is such a pain. But the best part is we learn from it and move on! Just.. don't let anatomy absorb you. I'm struggling right now with not letting anatomy consume me. I become so focused on it it drops me out of wanting to draw... So, yeah, in doses and stride! :D
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