for more examples of this look at angry people complaining about artist work

awrr
*reach the grapes and give to the little fox" take it X3

mawrr

grrrrrrrrreat work

at first it is hard playing with vectors. but if you already get used too, you will fall in love with it xp.

I've actually always had regard for this peom, and I think your version is just as good as the original. :3

Very cute and very polished. <3 If you want it to look like a children's book, you've certainly got the style down.
If you want it to read like one, though, that text could take a whole lot more refinement, but that would depend entirely on your target audience. Lets say if it were for ages 4-5, they'd not only have a hard time reading it, but some of those words they just wouldn't know from hearing them. (Though if it were read aloud from a parent, they could certainly explain it to them. Ex: Strolling. Quoth. Drawing. Paces. Avail. Beguile. Despise),
This I can say from personal experience. However, if we move the age range up a little, they'll try pretty hard to understand it on their own. This is where my experience would end and my theories begin: Around 7-10, a child would be able to totally read this on their own and get meaning from it.
The problem with my theory: a difference in years at a smaller age is a lot more critical than a difference is older age.

But this project isn't really about the text, is it? Because otherwise, it's spot on with what you're trying to do.

"This is Aesop's 'The Fox and The Grapes'."

Well then you can dismiss my commentary on the text. |3 I completely missed that line in your comment.

do moar vectors.. XD

but its pretty neat, the outcome.. X3

wow! AMAZing ^.=.^ i like it, good job

it looks really cool and cutesy tho maybe you should practice with it more then

I love it! XD

awww, the poor fox ^^ very cute, and nicely done