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Lugia's Kitty Feast (Vore Interactive)
From this point, I'm gonna continue writing the anthro vore and giving myself a break from DA. The reason for this is because my inbox has been hectic once in a while. Most of the time it's fine, but there are times I get a bit emotional when there are people that will criticize me in who I am.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy this long-awaited story that I've made for quite some time. It has been a long ride. I'll probably create a picture version of this just to show the artists. If you can share this piece, it would be everything to me. You'll get a hug from this big dragon. Anyway, I'll write the anthro vore and give myself a break.
Story commissions are still open if you are interested.
I'm sorry for in inconvenience as I need to take a moment to catch my breath. Love you all.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy this long-awaited story that I've made for quite some time. It has been a long ride. I'll probably create a picture version of this just to show the artists. If you can share this piece, it would be everything to me. You'll get a hug from this big dragon. Anyway, I'll write the anthro vore and give myself a break.
Story commissions are still open if you are interested.
I'm sorry for in inconvenience as I need to take a moment to catch my breath. Love you all.
Category Flash / Vore
Species Pokemon
Size 1024 x 768px
File Size 1.06 MB
Listed in Folders
If I may offer a piece of advice: separate your text from your images. In story books, the words almost never overlap over the images, and instead they're either given their own page or have some kind of text bubble. This allows for much easier reading. Unfortunately, while I can see that you changed the text colours to try to make it more visible over the image, not only does this not help, but it also distracts from what's going on in the pictures. It might be good to take that into consideration to improve the readability of your work! Otherwise it can be quite straining on the eyes to try to read it!
The other thing I would suggest is to separate your dialogue in different paragraphs, starting a new paragraph when a different character begins to speak. Doing so will also boost your story's readability, as it should add to the coherency of what's going on.
I'm not trying to be rude, and so I deeply apologise if it sounds like I'm just criticising what you've done! Your story looks like it could be a great one! It's just a little hard to read given the formatting ;;owo
The other thing I would suggest is to separate your dialogue in different paragraphs, starting a new paragraph when a different character begins to speak. Doing so will also boost your story's readability, as it should add to the coherency of what's going on.
I'm not trying to be rude, and so I deeply apologise if it sounds like I'm just criticising what you've done! Your story looks like it could be a great one! It's just a little hard to read given the formatting ;;owo
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