Wow this is.....WOW! Pretty powerful stuff, but I loved it.

Who knows something like this could happen in a sequel?

Doubt it. It's much too dark.

You're probably right, though I did say 'something' like this, but who knows for sure? The sequel could very well focus on the other residents of the city with Nick and Judy only providing a cameo? Next time they could focus on Finnick or Clawhauser, heck Gideon copuld get his own movie. The possibilities seem endless with this movie.

and the comic strips that are being done could resemble a zootopia series, and a thought crossed my mind today, what if zootopia was a kingdom hearts world in later games? That would be something id love to see. an anthro Sora

LOL anthro Sora, but still who knows? It could happen, but Zootopia is going to be a part of Disney Infinity.

Pleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssse! *gives you the puppy dog eyes *

Oh, I'm writing more fanfic, don't worry. We were talking specifically of Disney using it in a sequel.

lol. okies. I truly think there's a lot of potential story here and am excited to see where you take this.

Yes, doubt something this much aimed at families would ever go this dark with having a death in the cartoon. Not to say it doesn't happen in Nick and Judy's line of work; I believe it is only assumed they would run into death eventually. In the movie, they had a animal being loaded into an ambulance without showing blood and gore.

Yes please do more. It was so sweet

meanwhile all I could think of for a fanfic was this
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19440089/

Wow, that was..... wow.

Very well done!!

Thank you!

Very well done Max. While I do have my own ideas of a fan fic of Zootopia; I think I want to leave the main characters out of it and create a character of my own. It does make one wonder where Nick's father was during his youth when he was rejected by the Junior Ranger Scouts and how he turned to hustling to make a buck. The movie does hint as Nick being raised by only his mother.

And I took a cue from the directors. They decided to have Nick's father absent because fox kits are usually raised only by the mother in the wild, much like many other mammals.

The theme here being that you can fight your natural instincts, just as the predators did years before.

This was pretty good. It's like you added your own elements, while staying true to the original source material!

Good fan fiction does that.

Nice story!

Very well written. This definitely is a heart warmer.

The story was pretty good, but you do need to reread your work once you're done. There's a few errors on there that break immersion. Also you might want to expand the ending a bit. All in all very good though

By errors, do you mean spelling? I've seen those. If not, point them out to me.

spelling and a few grammar tense agreement errors.

Ah, can you list them for me, so I can correct and re-upload?

Later today I will hop on my PC and make a Word document I can send it to you on telegram afterwards with some corrections for you. I'll highlight it for you so you can see where i make any changes

I love the ending because it's true that Judy gave Nick the chance to step away from his own heritage when she asked him to become a cop.
My grandpa was a con artist and a really sneaky type too. The type that the IRS wouldnt talk to over the radio shows. I never knew my blood grandpa in person, but I think I was spared by a thousand miles between us and Christian friends. You can fight your own heritage to become someone so much greater... perhaps not as wealthy, but certainly more stable, content, wise, loving, and faithful.

Great story, Max!