this pic this is a practice for a new pen configuration, so everything is different and I'm lost even doing the most little line, but I like the new possibilities so I'm training with it.

I established a way to do lighting faster and do line art a little bit faster and with more detail.

I really like some specific things in this picture but I see so many errors that I need to work on XD. With this draw I learn a lot of things ^^!

I'll probably make another render like this while im finishing with the college stuff (And finish the Lili comic's prologue).

So guys!, what errors (or things that bother you) can spot in the pic? XD I call her right eye that I screw the perspective and the hair in her shoulder that looks weird. I still have 5 more!

(This is important, with this I can see in what to focus first in fixing ; )