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Commentary:
There's that read text again. I'll let you ponder what that is. This wasn't in the old version, and I feel like it might have dropped the suspense a bit for the ending of the page buuuuut I wanted to introduce it here.

Also sense the battle is over now I may as well talk about how the fight went, artistic-wise. I feel like I did alright for it being my first drawing of a fight scene in a long time. Tried to keep as many full body shots as possible instead of drawings of them from the waist up just punching each other.

It was a bit of a curbstomp, but I honestly think the fight would have gone this way considering Lubo and Dracmore's fighting experience. Rereading the whole fight scene, it might seem like Lubo went down a little quickly, but they could have always been fighting during the pages where they weren't shown. Plus I do NOT intend to drag on fight scenes for as long as they should. I don't want a fight scene taking more than one chapter w/o some side story happening in the background.

Wanted for find a japanese onomatopoeia for "doom/gloom" for panel 5, but couldn't find a fitting one.
シイイイン reads as "shiiiin" and is used for silence.
ドーン reads as "doon" and is used for dramatic impact.
タアアア reads as "taaaa" as is used for dashing/running.