heya, comics eh? it's hard to understand it, i can see the progression by dint of the arrows... one of the hardest parts of comics is intuition, they need to have a lot of details to convey a message or tell a story, I think this needs more depth. also motive is always nice. all i see is you attacking some macro maybe a glib comment in the last penel would be good for this a well

That's why its in scraps... Its for the little Art War in Dragonien's forum... it,s not supposed to make sense...
But whe I do make a comic and I probably will, I will remember your advice

that's all that counts. I was wondering why it wasn't in the submission folder... was looking for the reply I saw you made on my comment. hmmmm oh well