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My second story is already out! This time the star of this story is Ritch. The Fursona of my best irl friend! 
Ritch desperatly needs money and accept to be the test subject of a shrinking experiment
Enjoy and comments will be hugely appreciated!
Ritch desperatly needs money and accept to be the test subject of a shrinking experiment
Enjoy and comments will be hugely appreciated!
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 29 kB
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i thought the story was a bit rushed and there were some parts that could have had more detail. for instance, when he called the doc, you could have went into the phone conversation and find out more of the doc's personality. in the later parts of the story, the doc had a violent temper against his test subject which came out as a surprise to me because i didn't get the details of the doc's personality. the part with the lightsabers came out as a haphazard event to me; it felt random and comedian-like. if the story was meant to be a comedy, then i had a good laugh out of it!
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