Sitting birb-sona.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Avian (Other)
Size 721 x 680px
File Size 298.3 kB
This is seriously one of my favorite art pieces you've ever done :0
I keep staring at it and noticing new things - like the dotted highlights on the cheek. Little details like that make this whole piece come together. Also, I notice when I look at it, there is no obvious "focal point" where my eyes want to rest. Without a focal point, it leaves the viewer staring for longer (imo at least). And to make this piece more fantastic, the anatomy looks REALLY on point (not that I am a super anatomy guru, but holy poop, everything looks so deliberate in shape and I don't see any obvious guess-work on your line placement).
The /only/ thing I could suggest is to improve on color saturation. There is some contrast between the bright red chair and the rest of the picture, which makes me (as a viewer) wonder about why the chair is so highlighted. Then again, I don't think the art would stand out as much without the bright red. I might suggest adding some saturation to the rest of the piece (namely hair) but I can't guarantee that would be the best approach. It's ultimately your decision.
I hope I'm not over-stepping boundaries here with my analyzing, considering your art is MUCH more advanced than mine (especially comparing FA galleries, holy poop). I just am seeing a lot of skills in your art that my previous art professors would /love/. Consider yourself talented. Whoop. -ending the lengthy message here before I keep on rambling-
I keep staring at it and noticing new things - like the dotted highlights on the cheek. Little details like that make this whole piece come together. Also, I notice when I look at it, there is no obvious "focal point" where my eyes want to rest. Without a focal point, it leaves the viewer staring for longer (imo at least). And to make this piece more fantastic, the anatomy looks REALLY on point (not that I am a super anatomy guru, but holy poop, everything looks so deliberate in shape and I don't see any obvious guess-work on your line placement).
The /only/ thing I could suggest is to improve on color saturation. There is some contrast between the bright red chair and the rest of the picture, which makes me (as a viewer) wonder about why the chair is so highlighted. Then again, I don't think the art would stand out as much without the bright red. I might suggest adding some saturation to the rest of the piece (namely hair) but I can't guarantee that would be the best approach. It's ultimately your decision.
I hope I'm not over-stepping boundaries here with my analyzing, considering your art is MUCH more advanced than mine (especially comparing FA galleries, holy poop). I just am seeing a lot of skills in your art that my previous art professors would /love/. Consider yourself talented. Whoop. -ending the lengthy message here before I keep on rambling-
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