This was the cover for a project but the client didn't like it, so I'm working on a new one. The pose of the lizard is not very good and there are some problems with the colors too. Also the title will go on the bottom instead of the top as i had originally planed.
I guess that's back to work now.
I guess that's back to work now.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 743px
File Size 197.4 kB
I don't think its a bad image. However, the elements do seem to be competing with one another for attention but none of them is competing aggressively...if that makes any sense. The distribution of elements makes it kind of flat. Nothing jumps out.
Mostly its the composition that's not letting it shine. Other than that, its a great drawing.
Mostly its the composition that's not letting it shine. Other than that, its a great drawing.
Thanks for a sincere critique! I understand what you mean. I didn't like the result from the beginning, but it's hard to put a finger on what's wrong with the composition.
I had tried to fix it, but since I have new specifications now, I'll start a new one from scratch.
I had tried to fix it, but since I have new specifications now, I'll start a new one from scratch.
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