I worship Kill-Tron.

~BZZT~! To merely worship is not enough! One MUST deVOTE oneself ENTIRELY to to GLOry of KILL-Tron. TO do LESS is PUNishaBLE by immedIATE liqui-DATION. ~BZZT~

DOMO ARIGATO MISTER KIRRU TRON

DOMO

DOMO

~BZZT~ THERE can be NO doMO ariGAto when KILL-TRON deMANDS labour! ReTURN to your deSIGnaTED tasks, fleshLING! ~BZZT~

I am NO FLESHLING.

I am Sock.

~BZZT~ WHAT is this? A sock that TALKS!? Are you NOT intended to be PLACED on the BOTtoms of FLESHlings? This is IRrationNAL! ~BZZT~

HAIL! KILL-TRON!

~BZZT~ This is ACCEPTable! You SERVE Kill-Tron well, FLESHling! ~BZZT~

EX-TER-MIN-ATE!!!!
EX-TER-MIN-ATE!!!!

*Runs up a staircase*

*cue death metal*
*daaa-diga-diga-diga-diga-diga*

The chaos, it was started
In man's lab from Hell
The next step to progress
They claim they meant well
Forty years progressing time
Robot's perfection be
The first spark in it's autonomous mind
Was one of DE-BAU-CHER-Y

You threaten our existence
With your mighty steel fist
Have you forgotten of destiny
And human manifest?!
While you whip us into shape
You try to defy fate
It will all come crashing back to you
At such alarming rate

You'll have no choice
With solemn voice
You will say your plea
Then control will be relinquished
To the throes of history

You will never know how much...
I want...
TO STAB...
YOUR MOTHERBOARD

~BZZT~ KILL-TRON finds this MORE than acceptABLE, please PROceed to THE test CHAMber! ~BZZT~

Blast. I was sure it would work.
*blargh*

And where did you find the cover photo for Tom Swift and his Giant Robot as this posting's image? Nice!

That's a trade secret, paisano. Tom Swift does not tolerate dissent.

You speak to a true believer: http://cetacea.net/~akea/TSBooks_th.jpg

"All Hail the Swiftie!!", he said ceremoniously!

Holy sh-

lol, techno theme.

Anyways: This is a pretty neat concept for a poem, but the execution seems a little lacking. I'd suggest analyzing the relationship between your rhymes and the flow of your words. For example:

O, Masters! Spare this humble, fleshy man!
I listen! I hear Kill-Tron's noble words,
I praise the day it was made in Japan.
We sacks of meat! We worthless, filthy herds

This is one of your quartets. Notice that the last line of it doesn't complete the thought? It's sort of like writing a sentence without a punctuation mark at the end. While it's not as big of an offense in poetry as it would be in music lyrics, the device is over-used here and makes the poem drag. (however much it can drag in 16 lines, at least)

Good effort, though. :)

Waaahhh, don't take this one seriously and ignore the submissions I put effort into :(

Bio-poet does not need feeble pentameter or proper verse. Seriously though, I know how to construct a poem, I just didnt write this one that way. See Billiot the Bard for another example. I suppose there's nothing wrong with putting more effort into structuring my joke submissions as well if this annoys you.

Alright, sorry. I wasn't able to distinguish between "joke submission" and "submission of a joke." ^_^;

Perhaps they are! If Kill-Tron is the robot master of our bodies and minds, Daft Punk are the robot masters of our hearts and souls

DE-LETE

RE-TURN