
This is an RP I did with someone from deviantart. It involves my lucario illian holding a detention for the other person's pikachu.
My Delphox Sheela decides to invite her friend, sorren the zoroark, to teach illian's troublemaking student a lesson. So he decides to have some fun and mess with the pikachu.
Its from the POV of illian and the pikachu.
Had a lot of fun doing this.
PART 2 GOOD ENDING: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19141523/
PART 2 BAD ENDING: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19332172/
Here is a link to the drawing by itself if you wish to view it as a larger image:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18825717/
mike:
I'm walking through the hallway, expecting an average detention--no, average isn't the right word, this is my first time... a stereotypical detention is more like it. I expect a stereotypical detention. Earlier today, I received this punishment for using my Volt Tackle move on another student. Not exactly the most peaceful way to deal with a problem, but he deserved it. I've heard rumors of some people 'enjoying' this detention. That doesn't seem likely. Unless this is a Disney TV Movie, I doubt anything interesting will happen today. "Let's get this over with," I say to myself as I continue down the hallway.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
As I sit in my chair and wait for my student to arrive, I can't help but wonder how this detention will go. this student has already shown himself to be violent in class by lashing out at another student. no matter how much they may have deserved it, I will not tolerate such behavior in class.
I wrote up a few pages of extra course work to hopefully wear him out. if that doesn’t work however, I may have to resort to more drastic measures. no matter, I have a friend coming today who will be more than happy to provide said measures should I need them. though I do hope I won’t need to resort to that. maybe this can be another peaceful detention.
my mind wanders off to previous detentions where I have had to use other methods to teach troublemaking students a lesson as I sit and wait, sensing my student drawing closer to the room.
mike:
I see the door on my left, and peek through the window. "There he is." I open the door without knocking, my brazen scowl apparent on my disobedient likeness. "I'm ready for my detention," I said sardonically.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as the pikachu walks in, I can already tell he is in a bad mood without the need for me to read his aura.
"thank you for showing up on time, that is a good start for you. welcome to detention. for your first part of detention, I have some extra course work for you to do. come pick it up off my desk and take a seat."
mike:
"Oh, I'd just love to do some EXTRA work," I sarcastically say as I grab the papers. Fortunately for me, it is pretty simple--a lot of electrical engineering problems, my strong suit. If they wanted this to be such a punishment, they should've amped up the difficulty, I think to myself. I chuckle at this pun, and finish the work within the hour. "Done in a flash!" I slam the work on the teacher's desk and begin to take my leave.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"not so fast there. it’s not enough to finish the work, the answers need to be correct as well."
i then pick up his work and begin checking his answers.
"very well done, though I’m not surprised. that concludes your first part of detention. next up you must clean the room. you can start by sweeping, then move on to straightening all the chairs and tables, and finally wipe down the desks."
as I give my student these next tasks, I can sense my wife and her friend getting near.
mike:
"Augh, why do I have to do this? Don't we have janitors for this reason?" Without another word, I grab the cleaning supplies and commence the cleaning. It's easy but time-consuming. No sooner do I finish than does my compliance transition to conversation. "So you like having your students do your housework for you? I'll admit, it's an interesting strategy. They atone for their mistakes while you get to relax," I add, hoping to use charisma to get on the teacher's good side.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"it helps to start out with a more traditional approach to detention. this way I can gauge whether or not traditional methods could change bad students for the better. seeing as how you haven’t really learned much of a lesson from these menial tasks, i see it fit to resort to more untraditional methods."
just as I finish my sentence, the classroom door swings open and in walks my delphox wife sheela and her zoroark friend sorren.
"ah, just in time. sheela, sorren, welcome to this young man's detention. I was just explaining to him that since traditional methods of dealing with troublemakers aren’t changing his tune, i decided to bring him to my untraditional detention to see if he will fly straight."
with a smile, my wife says:
"hi honey. good to see you, and yes, this will most definitely be an untraditional detention. sorren here was giving me some great ideas on how to punish our little troublemaker."
with a sadistic smirk, the zoroark addresses my student:
"so this is the kid that’s causing all the trouble in class eh? don’t worry illian, I’ll make sure he learns his lesson by the time we're done with him."
I then address my student once more:
"you may stop cleaning now. since sheela and her friend here have me curious on what they plan to do with you, I will let them take charge of the third and final part of your detention. don’t worry about how long they take, I have already contacted your parents and they said I could take all the time I need to make sure you learn your lesson."
mike:
Not submitting to authority, I scoff at their arrival. "So what are you two going to do with me? What's this mysterious 'untraditional' method of detention?" I laugh again. How bad could this be?
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a laugh, my wife says:
"how bad this will be is entirely up to you. you can choose to enjoy it, or you can choose to be uncomfortable."
she then withdraws her wand, and starts waving it about. the tip of her wand begins to glow, and with a wave towards the pikachu, a bright ball of light shoots off in his direction.
mike:
The light starts to surround me, and moments later, it happens... the light disappears. "That's it? Nothing else? I guess I enjoyed your little light show."
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a smile, my wife replies:
"that was a spell that will prevent you from feeling any pain, and it will also prevent any harm from coming to you. no broken bones, you won’t die, but you will still have the sensation of feeling."
then sorren chimes in with an evil smirk:
"and that means it’s time for the fun to begin."
with that, the zoroark leaps across the room and lands feet first on top of the small pikachu, pinning him to the ground.
mike:
"What's this about? Are you trying to see if I should join the wrestling team?" I pushed the black fox off easily. "Why did you do that? This isn't how detention works..."
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as I see sorren get pushed off easily, I answer my student with a smile:
"no, it’s not. this is what makes my detentions so special."
with another wave of her wand, my wife sends yet another ball of light to collide with my student. she then addresses his concerns:
"seeing as how you like to push around other kids in class, it’s time for you to be pushed around too. oh, and I wouldn’t struggle anymore if I were you."
with her sentence finished, sorren once again jumps on my student and pins him underfoot. with an evil smile on his face, he says to the pikachu:
"don’t listen to her kid, go ahead and try to push me off again, I dare you."
mike:
"And if I struggle? What can you do about it?" I rebut with sass to the Delphox. "And what's up with you jumping on me anyway?" I ask Sorren. "Do you want to be like Mario or something?" I start to push at the Zoroark's paws.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my wife laughs and replies:
"I don’t have to do anything. you will be the one who decides what happens next."
no sooner than she finished her sentence, i noticed my student shrink in size.
mike:
I'm about to reply to the Delphox's comment when I notice something: I'm shrinking! I stop at about 90% my previous size, so it's not too bad yet. Of course, this doesn't scare me. "What a weak way to win," I taunt, "changing my size to give you the advantage. I'll still take you on," I brazenly continue.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a triumphant smile on her face, sheela addresses my student:
"every time you really struggle you'll continue to shrink. but only to a point of course."
sorren then speaks again:
"that’s right kid, so don’t be afraid to keep trying to get out from under my paws. it'll make it more fun."
he then laughs, most likely at the thought of seeing my student squirm underfoot and getting smaller.
with a curious look on my face, I then speak out:
"my my, what an interesting scenario. letting the student decide how much they get punished. learn their lesson quickly, and its over just as fast. refuse to fly straight, and the torment will continue. very amusing indeed."
mike:
"That's not fair! That's...that's torture!" I protest.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a smile still on his face sorren comforts the pikachu:
"its only torture if you don’t enjoy it, and if you feel any pain. since you don’t feel any pain right now, why not just have some fun down there kid."
he then brings one of his feet up to my student's face and proceeds to rub it.
mike:
"Ack! Get your paw off of me right now, you dog!" With a spark of fury, I use Thundershock on the big black fox. "That'll teach you to mess with me," I tell him, not realizing what I've done.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
I see sorren get pushed back a bit. as my student shrinks down another increment, he simply laughs in delight:
"these struggles are going to hurt you more than they'll hurt me kid. though feel free to keep it up. it only makes it easier for me to stomp on you."
with that, the zoroark moves closer and this time steps on the pikachu's tail, holding him firmly in place.
mike:
I yelp in a combination of surprise and shock as Sorren steps on my tail. I turn back and look up at the large Zoroark, and realize how much trouble I'm in. "You're so big..." I begin to speak. "It's...not fair!" I try to escape his mighty paw's grasp, but he's pinned me down. "I'm stuck!" I call out.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"life's not fair kid." sorren replies.
"especially not for troublemakers like you. and if you don’t like being stuck, go ahead and try to squirm out from under my foot. or better yet, why not use another move? ill ease of if you do."
a smile begins to form across the zoroark's face.
mike:
It's probably a trap, but I decide to go for it. After all, it's my only chance to get free. "I'll take you up on that offer," I respond before launching another Thundershock at my big adversary. "How's that for shocking?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren once again gets pushed back a bit.
as the pikachu shrinks another inch, my wife giggles a bit and says:
"oh it is definitely a trap. I can’t believe you would listen to this guy!"
sorren then addresses my wife with a sarcastic tone:
"what are you talking about sheela? I eased off didn’t I? now I never said I wouldn’t just get right back on top of him once I did....."
with a toothy grin on his face, the zoroark once again jumps right on top of my student and pins him underfoot with his stomach down and his limbs spread out.
sorren laughs and says:
"would you look at that? it’s a mini pikachu skin rug!"
mike:
I manage to let out a high-pitched shriek as the comparatively giant Sorren jumps on me. "I--I will not give up!" I sputter. Although, I don't know how, considering I'm getting squished and getting smaller. "This isn't working," I mutter. That is, how I'm going to leave this mess without being traumatized.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren goads him on:
"is that all you've got kid? I've met pichus with more fight than you!"
sorren laughs in delight. my wife then tries to warn my student once again:
"don’t let him get to you. remember, he WANTS you to squirm."
mike:
As I listen to the words of my captors, I realize Sheela may be right. Perhaps it's a ruse, but I feel that she's genuinely trying to protect me. Still under Sorren's paw, I ask her, "Why does he want that?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my wife replies:
"the more you squirm, the smaller you get."
with another evil grin, sorren adds:
"that, and i just LOVE messing with people."
with that, he rolls my student over and puts one paw on his stomach, and he starts rubbing the other all over the pikachu's face.
"admit it kid, the only reason you don’t struggle is cause you love being under my paws. though I can’t say I blame you. lots of people WISH they could get some quality time under them."
mike:
I am appalled at this assumption! "What makes you think I like this? This is torture!!" What could he mean by people WANTING to be under his paws?
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"I don’t know kid. you aren’t really trying to get out from under them. I think you're actually starting to like it down there." sorren says with an evil smile upon his face.
he then uses his paw to cover the pikachu's mouth.
"maybe this way you'll at least stop whining so much."
the zoroark lets out a laugh.
mike:
I try to speak, but I can't. This is blasphemy! This guy thinks I like his paws?! Impossible! But every time I struggle to get free, it just gets harder and harder... so I start to think of a plan. For now, I'll let them have their fun... then I'll be able to escape this nightmare once and for all!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my wife then laughs and interjects:
"sorren, did you at least wash your feet before doing that to him?"
with a sarcastically hurt tone, sorren replies:
"they're clean! see?"
the zoroark then lifts the paw on the pikachu's mouth up in the air and shows us its sole.
I then add with a laugh:
"though like my own paws, yours are covered in black fur, making it hard to tell if they are filthy."
sorren, still balancing on the pikachu's stomach, continues:
"well the bottom of the claws on my toes should be a bright, clean red."
mike:
The Zoroark apparently doesn't realize his mistake. It seems like my plan might work out faster than intended. With all my might--and I don't have too much at this point--I push away from Sorren's other paw while the two are distracted. "Yes!" I think to myself as I burst for the door. The only problem is; I can't see any door! Did it vanish or something? What's going on?
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
this time, as I see sorren get pushed back yet again, my student suddenly makes a darting move to get away from him. though just as quickly as he made his move, the pikachu suddenly stops in his tracks, freezing in one spot. he turns his head frantically as if searching for something.
the zoroark then lets out another evil cackle and in a mocking tone, he says:
"what's the matter kid? this is your big chance. make your daring getaway!"
as my student stays frozen in fear, he shrinks down another inch. sorren approaches him again and rests a foot atop his head, curling his toes comfortably around it's contour. with an evil smile, he says:
"seeing as how you don’t want to move I’ll just go back to using you as a rug."
the zoroark then pushes down, once again pinning the small pikachu underfoot. with his paw now covering most of my student's body, he says to him:
"you’re getting pretty small down there kid. pretty soon, I won’t be able to see you at all when you're under my paws."
mike:
"Mmph! I do want to move! I want to leave this nightmare!" I shout, but it comes out muffled and inaudible through the beast's paws. I want to push--to resist, to have a chance again--but it gets harder each time. The more I try, the harder it gets. But I will not give up. I'm going to win, no matter how small I have to get!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as I see my student trying to speak, I decide to chime in:
"it seems as though my student is trying to say something sorren. maybe you should lift your foot a bit to let him speak."
with an indifferent look on his face, sorren replies:
"sure, why not. go ahead kid, speak now, or forever have my paw on your face."
mike:
Am I grateful for Sorren lifting his paw off me? Not really, since he put it there to begin with. Still, I thank him before voicing my wish, gasping for air every so often, as I may not be able to again. "I want to leave this nightmare," I say weakly. "I hope this is all a bad dream," I say aloud, but it's really meant for me. "I'm going to close my eyes, and when I wake up, I don't want to see a paw!"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as my little student closes his eyes, I see a toothy grin begin to form on sorren's face. he then steps off of the tiny pikachu's body and proceeds to get on all fours. the zoroark then carefully stands over the pikachu's body, making sure not to touch him, and opens his mouth wide over my student's face. his teeth glisten with saliva as he silently waits for the pikachu to open his eyes.
mike:
With my eyes closed, I feel the weight of the paw being lifted, and smile. "Finally, it's over..." I say with my eyes closed. Of course, it all changes when I open them. Filling my vision now is not filled with a paw... but with something much more perilous! "What are you doing?" I scream at the sight of the fox's maw. At this size, it's more like a squeak than a scream. "What are you going to do with that...?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren laughs when my student yells in surprise at the sight of his maw staring him down.
"oh nothing. i just wanted to scare you."
my wife lets out a giggle. she then tries to comfort the miniature pikachu.
"you're so mean sorren, don’t worry kid. as long as you're not bothered by the sight of his mouth, and as long as you're not scared of being eaten, he won’t do anything."
the zoroark then gets very close to my student, showing off his maw as he gauges his reaction to it.
"hmmm.... now there's a thought.... are you afraid of my giant maw?"
he ends his sentence with a toothy grin.
mike:
I've made many excuses before, so I decide to take Sheela's offer. Hopefully this works! "I-'m not s-scared at all!" I try to be firm in my statement, but I doubt he'll take the bait. "It's, uh, totally doing nothing! You should just, er, remove your face from my sight!"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a sadistic smile on his face, the zoroark stood back up on two legs and puts his foot on the tiny pikachu to prevent him from moving.
"hey illian. did sheela ever tell you about the fun I had with my neighbor the other night? when i invaded his dream?"
I search my mind for such a story and come up blank.
"no, I don’t believe she has."
mike:
"You can invade dreams?" I inquire. "How does that work?" Perhaps if I can distract him, I can free myself once again. It's going to get harder each time, so I better make each attempt to escape count!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
the zoroark happily answers my student's question.
"it is essentially like an illusion i would make when someone is awake. like when you thought there was no door to escape. you saw only a wall, but it was just an illusion. the door was still there, but i obscured it from you. i figured out how to do that to someone while they sleep."
sorren smiled happily.
mike:
"That's... actually kinda cool." I start think of how this could be used. "You could make students think they have a ton of homework when they really don't, or fabricate grades on their tests...that's awesome!" Admittedly, I am a bit interested, but I'm still focused on distracting my captor.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren smiled in delight.
"well thanks kid. would you like to hear the story too? i was just planning on covering your face with my foot, but if you really want to hear it, I’ll keep my paw off your face."
mike:
"A story? Sounds interesting," I answer, nodding my free head.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my interest was most definitely piqued as well.
"I agree with my student sorren, please do tell." I say with a smile.
the zoroark keeps one foot on my student's lower body and begins his story.
"well, I invaded my neighbor's dream, and decided to mess with him a bit. I trapped him in an illusion that constantly changed form. I first had him believe he was being chased by a huge monster with glowing red eyes and sharp teeth."
mike:
"I wonder who that could've been," I say sarcastically, rolling my eyes.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sheela giggles at my student's comment.
"oooooooo he has you all figured out sorren."
I laugh a bit as well.
"it does sound pretty obvious as to who that monster really was, but I’ll wait until the story is over before I make any assumptions."
sorren continues his story.
"well it wasn't me actually. it was just part of the illusion. in order to lead my neighbor where I wanted him to go, I took on the form of a shadow instead. I would move just far enough in front of him that his curiosity would get the better of him and he would follow me. I would also talk to him in a surrounding voice to really stick the idea in his head that he is trapped."
I laugh once again.
"sounds like a horror movie to me."
mike:
"I agree with illian, that does sound pretty scary. Are you sure you're not just telling us the story of Paranormal Activity?" I ask with a cocky smirk.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren scoffs at the pikachu's comment.
"that hollywood magic stuff's got nothing on my illusions. anyway, I would also show him my eyes every now and then. from his point of view it would be a pair of floating blue eyes just staring at him through the darkness. to make him feel like he might escape his nightmare, I let him outwit the monster."
"then I decided to lead him to a giant version of his apartment. when he was thoroughly distracted, I came stomping in, and made him think I was going to smush him into the ground. though I only showed him my foot. the rest of me was hidden from view. I held my foot above him for a bit, and let him start running. I then slowly brought my foot down, trying to be careful not to actually step on him. he ended up tripping and I almost did flatten him, but I spread my toes apart, and barely missed him. can’t say the same for his flashlight though. that thing was as flat as a pancake, but that just helped me in scaring him more."
sorren laughed.
mike:
I gulp at his penultimate statement. "You broke a flashlight... while trying to avoid causing damage?" If he gets that big compared to me, I'm in trouble. "Anyway... why did you want to scare him like that?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
the zoroark laughed again.
"first off, I broke the flashlight because he tripped and dropped it, and it was smaller than an ant under my giant paw. secondly, I just like messing with people. it’s a lot of fun."
sorren giggled and continued his story.
"after almost flattening him under my paw, I decided to finally show myself to him. so I trapped him in what looked like a library, turned into a giant shadow right in front of his eyes, and started chasing him. I’d let him run, and then when he stopped to take a breather, I was right there next to him. each time he would get more and more scared and run faster and farther until finally I decided to show him his way out. up against a wall I projected an open door with his apartment visible through it. just as he thought he was home free, the door disappeared. he desperately tried to search the wall for it, and then I got to him. I had turned into the giant that almost squished him underfoot and picked him up with a giant hand. I then held him in front of my giant maw so he could see the true identity of his tormentor."
mike:
"Smaller than an ant, huh..." I don't know if I'll get that small, but the way things are going, I wouldn't be surprised if that happened later on today.
"So, you picked him up, and what did he see? Was it you?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
Sorren smiled.
“yes. It was me he saw. I revealed my true form free of any shadows. As I held him there, I complimented him on how well he did in my illusory prison, as well as his attempts at escaping me moments ago. I then told him that it was fun playing with him, but that it was time to end his nightmare.”
Mike:
"How did you end it?" I ask, curious. "Did you squeeze him between your hands and the sudden impact woke him up?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
With an evil smile on his face, sorren finishes the story.
“I held him over my open mouth for a couple of seconds so he could enjoy the view, and then I dropped him inside. He landed on my tongue and I snapped my jaws shut. I toyed with him a little longer in my mouth, and then I swallowed him whole.”
The zoroark licked his lips as he finished his story.
“he was a very delicious snack.”
Mike:
"That sounds pretty gruesome," I reply. The disgust is apparent on my face, and I turn towards Sheela. "What do you think of the story?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife giggled.
“it was an interesting story alright. I have to admit though, since I first heard it, I’ve been wondering what it must feel like to eat another person.”
I then voice my opinion as well.
“it was indeed a very entertaining tale. I too am curious about eating other people. What would they taste like?”
Sorren then addresses my student’s concern.
“gruesome as it sounds, that was just an illusion. It wasn’t real. Though it most certainly felt real for my neighbor.”
The zoroark then smiled his evil toothy grin again as he looked directly at the Pikachu stuck under his paw.
“you however are not an illusion. You are very much real…..”
My wife then stopped smiling and grew serious.
“sorren, don’t.”
Mike:
My disdain immediately shifts to concern. "'Don't' what? What's he going to do to me?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
Sorren laughs at my student’s concern. He then steps of off the tiny Pikachu and picks him up off the ground. He firmly holds him in both paws as he examines my student.
“hmmm….. you seem to be just small enough to fit in my mouth……”
Sorren lets out an evil laugh.
Sheela once again voices her concern.
“come on sorren, he doesn’t deserve that. He’s been really nice with us so far.”
Mike:
"No, stop! I assure you I'm too big for that! At least, I am for now. Uh...Sheela! Help! Do something!" I protest, trying to flee from the Zoroark's massive paws.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife tries to help my student.
“there’s not much I can do kid. Maybe try zapping him? He might let you go.”
Sorren laughs again.
“he doesn’t have the guts or the strength to do it. He had already flat out given up earlier, he’ll make a nice little snack right now.”
The zoroark then opens his mouth wide, his teeth dripping with saliva.
Mike:
"Okay...I'll try!" For such a small Pokémon, I'm able to create a relatively large lightning bolt, and I launch it into Sorren's open mouth! "That's what you get for trying to eat me!" As Sorren tries to recover from the electricity I just sent into his system, I take this moment to run away from him. I still can't see the door--maybe it's behind me but I don't have time to check--so I run towards Sheela instead. Hopefully, she'll protect me.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
As I see my student run towards my wife, I begin to notice him shrinking down another inch. Sorren recovers quickly and jumps into the air towards the Pikachu. He lands with his foot on top of my student’s tail, immobilizing him. The zoroark then brings down his other foot right on top of the tiny pikachu’s back, pinning him on his stomach, and almost completely covering him.
“nice try kid. That bolt of lightning had a nice zing to it.”
He laughs and curls his toes forward, making a comical looking row of prison bars in front of the Pikachu with his toeclaws.
Mike:
I notice that I shrink as I run towards Sheela, and I am confused. "Didn't you just tell me to zap him? Why did I shrink? That's not fair at all!" I can barely finish my sentence, because right after, Sorren pounces on me with what feels like the force of a filled backpack. Red stripes fill most of my vision, and I know instantly that I've been stomped again. "This...is too much..."
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
Sorren then steps off of the Pikachu and holds him up again.
“oh you’ll definitely fit inside my maw now.”
The zoroark once again opens his mouth up wide, his teeth glistening white and dripping with saliva.
My wife again tries to convince sorren not to stuff his mouth with my student.
“come on sorren, stop already. Isn’t stomping on him enough for you?”
Mike:
How am I going to get out of this situation? It's going to end up the same every time, unless... "Sheela, I have an idea! Raise your paw!" I send another lightning bolt Sorren's way, jump off, and make a mad dash for Sheela's paws. "Better stomped than eaten!" I declare. In a few seconds, I find myself under her paws. "Alright, Sheela, stomp down as hard as you can!"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
As sorren drops my student again, my wife lifts up her foot. As the Pikachu sprints towards her raised paw, he shrinks yet another inch. Once he gets under Sheela’s paw, she brings it down on top of him, completely covering him beneath it.
My wife giggles.
“fast thinking kid.”
Sorren laughs and begins to walk towards Sheela.
“it’s no use hiding kid. I’m coming for you.”
As he lifts up my wife’s paw, she scrunches her toes around the pikachu’s tail and holds him upside down.
“I won’t let you eat him sorren!”
The zoroark then smiles again.
“oh I’m done playing games with this kid. He’s my lunch now.”
He then opens his mouth wide, and puts my wife’s entire foot in his mouth.
“let go of my foot sorren!”
The zoroark presses his lips around Sheela’s foot, and slowly drags it out of his mouth. When it’s finally out, it is drenched in slimy saliva, and my student is no longer between her toes.
Mike:
The mouth of another Pokémon is a place I never wanted to visit, and one I hope to never visit again. The mouth of a Pokémon who is carrying out my detention is even less desirable. It's more wet than a pool, more slimy than oil, and more perilous than underneath their paws. "Let me out!" I try to say, but I doubt I'm heard through the thick skin of my captor. Instinctively, I think to use another move, but I'll just shrink down even more... I'll have to rely on Sheela. Wait a second... the Pokémon that is keeping me here now must also be the one to save me? What luck I have!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
“gah! Spit him out sorren!” my wife yells.
“oh my….” I say, wondering if my student really just became sorren’s lunch.
The zoroark then slowly starts to gently and playfully chew on the tiny Pikachu.
“mmmmm…… delicious.”
“I said spit him OUT sorren!” my wife yells again.
Sorren then begins speaking as casually as if he didn’t have another person in his mouth.
“aww, come on Sheela. You can just bring him back with your magic after I swallow him.”
As the zoroark’s mouth opens and closes, I can see small glimpses of yellow inside.
Mike:
The drenching saliva from Sorren's mouth cascades over me like a tidal wave. With every movement of his jaw I am swirled around more and more; I have no control over my body as it is pushed around by the mighty weight of the fox's thick, greasy tongue. I try to grab onto it--and succeed, but it is a very loose grip. With little effort, I may be swallowed in an instant. "I need help over here!" I shout during the short periods of time when his mouth is open, the only hope I have of surviving.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife stands up with a serious look on her face. She then draws her wand and sets its tip alight with a flame.
“he hasn’t been that bad with us, and I don’t want to see someone who doesn’t deserve to get eaten disappear as a lump down your gullet! Now spit him out this instant or ill shrink YOU down and let HIM eat you!”
Sorren reluctantly stops his chewing and sighs.
“fine. I’ll spit him out. You’re no fun.”
I laugh as I see the zoroark succumb to my wife’s demand.
“she can be pretty forceful sometimes. That’s why I pray that no student ever gets on her bad side, or she may be likely to eat them herself.”
The zoroark then spits out my student like a piece of used chewing gum, and he lands on the floor with a splat, drenched in slimy saliva.
Mike:
"Ugh...thanks, Sheela..." I say with what would be a smile, but is a frozen, stoic face after the near-death experience that just happened. Before trying to wrap my head around what's going on, I should ask her. It'll be faster that way. "Why are you...helping me?" I manage to ask the massive Delphox.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife giggles at my student’s bewilderment.
“because, I don’t think you’ve been so bad that you deserved to get eaten. Also, you seem like a good kid. Maybe just a little misguided is all.”
Sheela then sits back down and uses her wand to materialize a couple of towels. She uses one to clean her saliva soaked paw and with the other, she picks up the tiny Pikachu and dries him up as well.
“now I hope you have learned your lesson and you’ll stop fighting so much. Next time, no matter how much the other person deserves to get hit by a lightning bolt, just let one of us know and we’ll take care of it.”
Sorren then smiles and chimes in.
“yeah. Just let me know who’s bullying you and I’ll eat them for you, I don’t mind.“
He then gives my student a toothy grin.
My Delphox Sheela decides to invite her friend, sorren the zoroark, to teach illian's troublemaking student a lesson. So he decides to have some fun and mess with the pikachu.
Its from the POV of illian and the pikachu.
Had a lot of fun doing this.
PART 2 GOOD ENDING: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19141523/
PART 2 BAD ENDING: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19332172/
Here is a link to the drawing by itself if you wish to view it as a larger image:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18825717/
mike:
I'm walking through the hallway, expecting an average detention--no, average isn't the right word, this is my first time... a stereotypical detention is more like it. I expect a stereotypical detention. Earlier today, I received this punishment for using my Volt Tackle move on another student. Not exactly the most peaceful way to deal with a problem, but he deserved it. I've heard rumors of some people 'enjoying' this detention. That doesn't seem likely. Unless this is a Disney TV Movie, I doubt anything interesting will happen today. "Let's get this over with," I say to myself as I continue down the hallway.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
As I sit in my chair and wait for my student to arrive, I can't help but wonder how this detention will go. this student has already shown himself to be violent in class by lashing out at another student. no matter how much they may have deserved it, I will not tolerate such behavior in class.
I wrote up a few pages of extra course work to hopefully wear him out. if that doesn’t work however, I may have to resort to more drastic measures. no matter, I have a friend coming today who will be more than happy to provide said measures should I need them. though I do hope I won’t need to resort to that. maybe this can be another peaceful detention.
my mind wanders off to previous detentions where I have had to use other methods to teach troublemaking students a lesson as I sit and wait, sensing my student drawing closer to the room.
mike:
I see the door on my left, and peek through the window. "There he is." I open the door without knocking, my brazen scowl apparent on my disobedient likeness. "I'm ready for my detention," I said sardonically.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as the pikachu walks in, I can already tell he is in a bad mood without the need for me to read his aura.
"thank you for showing up on time, that is a good start for you. welcome to detention. for your first part of detention, I have some extra course work for you to do. come pick it up off my desk and take a seat."
mike:
"Oh, I'd just love to do some EXTRA work," I sarcastically say as I grab the papers. Fortunately for me, it is pretty simple--a lot of electrical engineering problems, my strong suit. If they wanted this to be such a punishment, they should've amped up the difficulty, I think to myself. I chuckle at this pun, and finish the work within the hour. "Done in a flash!" I slam the work on the teacher's desk and begin to take my leave.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"not so fast there. it’s not enough to finish the work, the answers need to be correct as well."
i then pick up his work and begin checking his answers.
"very well done, though I’m not surprised. that concludes your first part of detention. next up you must clean the room. you can start by sweeping, then move on to straightening all the chairs and tables, and finally wipe down the desks."
as I give my student these next tasks, I can sense my wife and her friend getting near.
mike:
"Augh, why do I have to do this? Don't we have janitors for this reason?" Without another word, I grab the cleaning supplies and commence the cleaning. It's easy but time-consuming. No sooner do I finish than does my compliance transition to conversation. "So you like having your students do your housework for you? I'll admit, it's an interesting strategy. They atone for their mistakes while you get to relax," I add, hoping to use charisma to get on the teacher's good side.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"it helps to start out with a more traditional approach to detention. this way I can gauge whether or not traditional methods could change bad students for the better. seeing as how you haven’t really learned much of a lesson from these menial tasks, i see it fit to resort to more untraditional methods."
just as I finish my sentence, the classroom door swings open and in walks my delphox wife sheela and her zoroark friend sorren.
"ah, just in time. sheela, sorren, welcome to this young man's detention. I was just explaining to him that since traditional methods of dealing with troublemakers aren’t changing his tune, i decided to bring him to my untraditional detention to see if he will fly straight."
with a smile, my wife says:
"hi honey. good to see you, and yes, this will most definitely be an untraditional detention. sorren here was giving me some great ideas on how to punish our little troublemaker."
with a sadistic smirk, the zoroark addresses my student:
"so this is the kid that’s causing all the trouble in class eh? don’t worry illian, I’ll make sure he learns his lesson by the time we're done with him."
I then address my student once more:
"you may stop cleaning now. since sheela and her friend here have me curious on what they plan to do with you, I will let them take charge of the third and final part of your detention. don’t worry about how long they take, I have already contacted your parents and they said I could take all the time I need to make sure you learn your lesson."
mike:
Not submitting to authority, I scoff at their arrival. "So what are you two going to do with me? What's this mysterious 'untraditional' method of detention?" I laugh again. How bad could this be?
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a laugh, my wife says:
"how bad this will be is entirely up to you. you can choose to enjoy it, or you can choose to be uncomfortable."
she then withdraws her wand, and starts waving it about. the tip of her wand begins to glow, and with a wave towards the pikachu, a bright ball of light shoots off in his direction.
mike:
The light starts to surround me, and moments later, it happens... the light disappears. "That's it? Nothing else? I guess I enjoyed your little light show."
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a smile, my wife replies:
"that was a spell that will prevent you from feeling any pain, and it will also prevent any harm from coming to you. no broken bones, you won’t die, but you will still have the sensation of feeling."
then sorren chimes in with an evil smirk:
"and that means it’s time for the fun to begin."
with that, the zoroark leaps across the room and lands feet first on top of the small pikachu, pinning him to the ground.
mike:
"What's this about? Are you trying to see if I should join the wrestling team?" I pushed the black fox off easily. "Why did you do that? This isn't how detention works..."
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as I see sorren get pushed off easily, I answer my student with a smile:
"no, it’s not. this is what makes my detentions so special."
with another wave of her wand, my wife sends yet another ball of light to collide with my student. she then addresses his concerns:
"seeing as how you like to push around other kids in class, it’s time for you to be pushed around too. oh, and I wouldn’t struggle anymore if I were you."
with her sentence finished, sorren once again jumps on my student and pins him underfoot. with an evil smile on his face, he says to the pikachu:
"don’t listen to her kid, go ahead and try to push me off again, I dare you."
mike:
"And if I struggle? What can you do about it?" I rebut with sass to the Delphox. "And what's up with you jumping on me anyway?" I ask Sorren. "Do you want to be like Mario or something?" I start to push at the Zoroark's paws.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my wife laughs and replies:
"I don’t have to do anything. you will be the one who decides what happens next."
no sooner than she finished her sentence, i noticed my student shrink in size.
mike:
I'm about to reply to the Delphox's comment when I notice something: I'm shrinking! I stop at about 90% my previous size, so it's not too bad yet. Of course, this doesn't scare me. "What a weak way to win," I taunt, "changing my size to give you the advantage. I'll still take you on," I brazenly continue.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a triumphant smile on her face, sheela addresses my student:
"every time you really struggle you'll continue to shrink. but only to a point of course."
sorren then speaks again:
"that’s right kid, so don’t be afraid to keep trying to get out from under my paws. it'll make it more fun."
he then laughs, most likely at the thought of seeing my student squirm underfoot and getting smaller.
with a curious look on my face, I then speak out:
"my my, what an interesting scenario. letting the student decide how much they get punished. learn their lesson quickly, and its over just as fast. refuse to fly straight, and the torment will continue. very amusing indeed."
mike:
"That's not fair! That's...that's torture!" I protest.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a smile still on his face sorren comforts the pikachu:
"its only torture if you don’t enjoy it, and if you feel any pain. since you don’t feel any pain right now, why not just have some fun down there kid."
he then brings one of his feet up to my student's face and proceeds to rub it.
mike:
"Ack! Get your paw off of me right now, you dog!" With a spark of fury, I use Thundershock on the big black fox. "That'll teach you to mess with me," I tell him, not realizing what I've done.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
I see sorren get pushed back a bit. as my student shrinks down another increment, he simply laughs in delight:
"these struggles are going to hurt you more than they'll hurt me kid. though feel free to keep it up. it only makes it easier for me to stomp on you."
with that, the zoroark moves closer and this time steps on the pikachu's tail, holding him firmly in place.
mike:
I yelp in a combination of surprise and shock as Sorren steps on my tail. I turn back and look up at the large Zoroark, and realize how much trouble I'm in. "You're so big..." I begin to speak. "It's...not fair!" I try to escape his mighty paw's grasp, but he's pinned me down. "I'm stuck!" I call out.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"life's not fair kid." sorren replies.
"especially not for troublemakers like you. and if you don’t like being stuck, go ahead and try to squirm out from under my foot. or better yet, why not use another move? ill ease of if you do."
a smile begins to form across the zoroark's face.
mike:
It's probably a trap, but I decide to go for it. After all, it's my only chance to get free. "I'll take you up on that offer," I respond before launching another Thundershock at my big adversary. "How's that for shocking?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren once again gets pushed back a bit.
as the pikachu shrinks another inch, my wife giggles a bit and says:
"oh it is definitely a trap. I can’t believe you would listen to this guy!"
sorren then addresses my wife with a sarcastic tone:
"what are you talking about sheela? I eased off didn’t I? now I never said I wouldn’t just get right back on top of him once I did....."
with a toothy grin on his face, the zoroark once again jumps right on top of my student and pins him underfoot with his stomach down and his limbs spread out.
sorren laughs and says:
"would you look at that? it’s a mini pikachu skin rug!"
mike:
I manage to let out a high-pitched shriek as the comparatively giant Sorren jumps on me. "I--I will not give up!" I sputter. Although, I don't know how, considering I'm getting squished and getting smaller. "This isn't working," I mutter. That is, how I'm going to leave this mess without being traumatized.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren goads him on:
"is that all you've got kid? I've met pichus with more fight than you!"
sorren laughs in delight. my wife then tries to warn my student once again:
"don’t let him get to you. remember, he WANTS you to squirm."
mike:
As I listen to the words of my captors, I realize Sheela may be right. Perhaps it's a ruse, but I feel that she's genuinely trying to protect me. Still under Sorren's paw, I ask her, "Why does he want that?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my wife replies:
"the more you squirm, the smaller you get."
with another evil grin, sorren adds:
"that, and i just LOVE messing with people."
with that, he rolls my student over and puts one paw on his stomach, and he starts rubbing the other all over the pikachu's face.
"admit it kid, the only reason you don’t struggle is cause you love being under my paws. though I can’t say I blame you. lots of people WISH they could get some quality time under them."
mike:
I am appalled at this assumption! "What makes you think I like this? This is torture!!" What could he mean by people WANTING to be under his paws?
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
"I don’t know kid. you aren’t really trying to get out from under them. I think you're actually starting to like it down there." sorren says with an evil smile upon his face.
he then uses his paw to cover the pikachu's mouth.
"maybe this way you'll at least stop whining so much."
the zoroark lets out a laugh.
mike:
I try to speak, but I can't. This is blasphemy! This guy thinks I like his paws?! Impossible! But every time I struggle to get free, it just gets harder and harder... so I start to think of a plan. For now, I'll let them have their fun... then I'll be able to escape this nightmare once and for all!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my wife then laughs and interjects:
"sorren, did you at least wash your feet before doing that to him?"
with a sarcastically hurt tone, sorren replies:
"they're clean! see?"
the zoroark then lifts the paw on the pikachu's mouth up in the air and shows us its sole.
I then add with a laugh:
"though like my own paws, yours are covered in black fur, making it hard to tell if they are filthy."
sorren, still balancing on the pikachu's stomach, continues:
"well the bottom of the claws on my toes should be a bright, clean red."
mike:
The Zoroark apparently doesn't realize his mistake. It seems like my plan might work out faster than intended. With all my might--and I don't have too much at this point--I push away from Sorren's other paw while the two are distracted. "Yes!" I think to myself as I burst for the door. The only problem is; I can't see any door! Did it vanish or something? What's going on?
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
this time, as I see sorren get pushed back yet again, my student suddenly makes a darting move to get away from him. though just as quickly as he made his move, the pikachu suddenly stops in his tracks, freezing in one spot. he turns his head frantically as if searching for something.
the zoroark then lets out another evil cackle and in a mocking tone, he says:
"what's the matter kid? this is your big chance. make your daring getaway!"
as my student stays frozen in fear, he shrinks down another inch. sorren approaches him again and rests a foot atop his head, curling his toes comfortably around it's contour. with an evil smile, he says:
"seeing as how you don’t want to move I’ll just go back to using you as a rug."
the zoroark then pushes down, once again pinning the small pikachu underfoot. with his paw now covering most of my student's body, he says to him:
"you’re getting pretty small down there kid. pretty soon, I won’t be able to see you at all when you're under my paws."
mike:
"Mmph! I do want to move! I want to leave this nightmare!" I shout, but it comes out muffled and inaudible through the beast's paws. I want to push--to resist, to have a chance again--but it gets harder each time. The more I try, the harder it gets. But I will not give up. I'm going to win, no matter how small I have to get!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as I see my student trying to speak, I decide to chime in:
"it seems as though my student is trying to say something sorren. maybe you should lift your foot a bit to let him speak."
with an indifferent look on his face, sorren replies:
"sure, why not. go ahead kid, speak now, or forever have my paw on your face."
mike:
Am I grateful for Sorren lifting his paw off me? Not really, since he put it there to begin with. Still, I thank him before voicing my wish, gasping for air every so often, as I may not be able to again. "I want to leave this nightmare," I say weakly. "I hope this is all a bad dream," I say aloud, but it's really meant for me. "I'm going to close my eyes, and when I wake up, I don't want to see a paw!"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
as my little student closes his eyes, I see a toothy grin begin to form on sorren's face. he then steps off of the tiny pikachu's body and proceeds to get on all fours. the zoroark then carefully stands over the pikachu's body, making sure not to touch him, and opens his mouth wide over my student's face. his teeth glisten with saliva as he silently waits for the pikachu to open his eyes.
mike:
With my eyes closed, I feel the weight of the paw being lifted, and smile. "Finally, it's over..." I say with my eyes closed. Of course, it all changes when I open them. Filling my vision now is not filled with a paw... but with something much more perilous! "What are you doing?" I scream at the sight of the fox's maw. At this size, it's more like a squeak than a scream. "What are you going to do with that...?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren laughs when my student yells in surprise at the sight of his maw staring him down.
"oh nothing. i just wanted to scare you."
my wife lets out a giggle. she then tries to comfort the miniature pikachu.
"you're so mean sorren, don’t worry kid. as long as you're not bothered by the sight of his mouth, and as long as you're not scared of being eaten, he won’t do anything."
the zoroark then gets very close to my student, showing off his maw as he gauges his reaction to it.
"hmmm.... now there's a thought.... are you afraid of my giant maw?"
he ends his sentence with a toothy grin.
mike:
I've made many excuses before, so I decide to take Sheela's offer. Hopefully this works! "I-'m not s-scared at all!" I try to be firm in my statement, but I doubt he'll take the bait. "It's, uh, totally doing nothing! You should just, er, remove your face from my sight!"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
with a sadistic smile on his face, the zoroark stood back up on two legs and puts his foot on the tiny pikachu to prevent him from moving.
"hey illian. did sheela ever tell you about the fun I had with my neighbor the other night? when i invaded his dream?"
I search my mind for such a story and come up blank.
"no, I don’t believe she has."
mike:
"You can invade dreams?" I inquire. "How does that work?" Perhaps if I can distract him, I can free myself once again. It's going to get harder each time, so I better make each attempt to escape count!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
the zoroark happily answers my student's question.
"it is essentially like an illusion i would make when someone is awake. like when you thought there was no door to escape. you saw only a wall, but it was just an illusion. the door was still there, but i obscured it from you. i figured out how to do that to someone while they sleep."
sorren smiled happily.
mike:
"That's... actually kinda cool." I start think of how this could be used. "You could make students think they have a ton of homework when they really don't, or fabricate grades on their tests...that's awesome!" Admittedly, I am a bit interested, but I'm still focused on distracting my captor.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren smiled in delight.
"well thanks kid. would you like to hear the story too? i was just planning on covering your face with my foot, but if you really want to hear it, I’ll keep my paw off your face."
mike:
"A story? Sounds interesting," I answer, nodding my free head.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
my interest was most definitely piqued as well.
"I agree with my student sorren, please do tell." I say with a smile.
the zoroark keeps one foot on my student's lower body and begins his story.
"well, I invaded my neighbor's dream, and decided to mess with him a bit. I trapped him in an illusion that constantly changed form. I first had him believe he was being chased by a huge monster with glowing red eyes and sharp teeth."
mike:
"I wonder who that could've been," I say sarcastically, rolling my eyes.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sheela giggles at my student's comment.
"oooooooo he has you all figured out sorren."
I laugh a bit as well.
"it does sound pretty obvious as to who that monster really was, but I’ll wait until the story is over before I make any assumptions."
sorren continues his story.
"well it wasn't me actually. it was just part of the illusion. in order to lead my neighbor where I wanted him to go, I took on the form of a shadow instead. I would move just far enough in front of him that his curiosity would get the better of him and he would follow me. I would also talk to him in a surrounding voice to really stick the idea in his head that he is trapped."
I laugh once again.
"sounds like a horror movie to me."
mike:
"I agree with illian, that does sound pretty scary. Are you sure you're not just telling us the story of Paranormal Activity?" I ask with a cocky smirk.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
sorren scoffs at the pikachu's comment.
"that hollywood magic stuff's got nothing on my illusions. anyway, I would also show him my eyes every now and then. from his point of view it would be a pair of floating blue eyes just staring at him through the darkness. to make him feel like he might escape his nightmare, I let him outwit the monster."
"then I decided to lead him to a giant version of his apartment. when he was thoroughly distracted, I came stomping in, and made him think I was going to smush him into the ground. though I only showed him my foot. the rest of me was hidden from view. I held my foot above him for a bit, and let him start running. I then slowly brought my foot down, trying to be careful not to actually step on him. he ended up tripping and I almost did flatten him, but I spread my toes apart, and barely missed him. can’t say the same for his flashlight though. that thing was as flat as a pancake, but that just helped me in scaring him more."
sorren laughed.
mike:
I gulp at his penultimate statement. "You broke a flashlight... while trying to avoid causing damage?" If he gets that big compared to me, I'm in trouble. "Anyway... why did you want to scare him like that?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
the zoroark laughed again.
"first off, I broke the flashlight because he tripped and dropped it, and it was smaller than an ant under my giant paw. secondly, I just like messing with people. it’s a lot of fun."
sorren giggled and continued his story.
"after almost flattening him under my paw, I decided to finally show myself to him. so I trapped him in what looked like a library, turned into a giant shadow right in front of his eyes, and started chasing him. I’d let him run, and then when he stopped to take a breather, I was right there next to him. each time he would get more and more scared and run faster and farther until finally I decided to show him his way out. up against a wall I projected an open door with his apartment visible through it. just as he thought he was home free, the door disappeared. he desperately tried to search the wall for it, and then I got to him. I had turned into the giant that almost squished him underfoot and picked him up with a giant hand. I then held him in front of my giant maw so he could see the true identity of his tormentor."
mike:
"Smaller than an ant, huh..." I don't know if I'll get that small, but the way things are going, I wouldn't be surprised if that happened later on today.
"So, you picked him up, and what did he see? Was it you?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
Sorren smiled.
“yes. It was me he saw. I revealed my true form free of any shadows. As I held him there, I complimented him on how well he did in my illusory prison, as well as his attempts at escaping me moments ago. I then told him that it was fun playing with him, but that it was time to end his nightmare.”
Mike:
"How did you end it?" I ask, curious. "Did you squeeze him between your hands and the sudden impact woke him up?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
With an evil smile on his face, sorren finishes the story.
“I held him over my open mouth for a couple of seconds so he could enjoy the view, and then I dropped him inside. He landed on my tongue and I snapped my jaws shut. I toyed with him a little longer in my mouth, and then I swallowed him whole.”
The zoroark licked his lips as he finished his story.
“he was a very delicious snack.”
Mike:
"That sounds pretty gruesome," I reply. The disgust is apparent on my face, and I turn towards Sheela. "What do you think of the story?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife giggled.
“it was an interesting story alright. I have to admit though, since I first heard it, I’ve been wondering what it must feel like to eat another person.”
I then voice my opinion as well.
“it was indeed a very entertaining tale. I too am curious about eating other people. What would they taste like?”
Sorren then addresses my student’s concern.
“gruesome as it sounds, that was just an illusion. It wasn’t real. Though it most certainly felt real for my neighbor.”
The zoroark then smiled his evil toothy grin again as he looked directly at the Pikachu stuck under his paw.
“you however are not an illusion. You are very much real…..”
My wife then stopped smiling and grew serious.
“sorren, don’t.”
Mike:
My disdain immediately shifts to concern. "'Don't' what? What's he going to do to me?"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
Sorren laughs at my student’s concern. He then steps of off the tiny Pikachu and picks him up off the ground. He firmly holds him in both paws as he examines my student.
“hmmm….. you seem to be just small enough to fit in my mouth……”
Sorren lets out an evil laugh.
Sheela once again voices her concern.
“come on sorren, he doesn’t deserve that. He’s been really nice with us so far.”
Mike:
"No, stop! I assure you I'm too big for that! At least, I am for now. Uh...Sheela! Help! Do something!" I protest, trying to flee from the Zoroark's massive paws.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife tries to help my student.
“there’s not much I can do kid. Maybe try zapping him? He might let you go.”
Sorren laughs again.
“he doesn’t have the guts or the strength to do it. He had already flat out given up earlier, he’ll make a nice little snack right now.”
The zoroark then opens his mouth wide, his teeth dripping with saliva.
Mike:
"Okay...I'll try!" For such a small Pokémon, I'm able to create a relatively large lightning bolt, and I launch it into Sorren's open mouth! "That's what you get for trying to eat me!" As Sorren tries to recover from the electricity I just sent into his system, I take this moment to run away from him. I still can't see the door--maybe it's behind me but I don't have time to check--so I run towards Sheela instead. Hopefully, she'll protect me.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
As I see my student run towards my wife, I begin to notice him shrinking down another inch. Sorren recovers quickly and jumps into the air towards the Pikachu. He lands with his foot on top of my student’s tail, immobilizing him. The zoroark then brings down his other foot right on top of the tiny pikachu’s back, pinning him on his stomach, and almost completely covering him.
“nice try kid. That bolt of lightning had a nice zing to it.”
He laughs and curls his toes forward, making a comical looking row of prison bars in front of the Pikachu with his toeclaws.
Mike:
I notice that I shrink as I run towards Sheela, and I am confused. "Didn't you just tell me to zap him? Why did I shrink? That's not fair at all!" I can barely finish my sentence, because right after, Sorren pounces on me with what feels like the force of a filled backpack. Red stripes fill most of my vision, and I know instantly that I've been stomped again. "This...is too much..."
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
Sorren then steps off of the Pikachu and holds him up again.
“oh you’ll definitely fit inside my maw now.”
The zoroark once again opens his mouth up wide, his teeth glistening white and dripping with saliva.
My wife again tries to convince sorren not to stuff his mouth with my student.
“come on sorren, stop already. Isn’t stomping on him enough for you?”
Mike:
How am I going to get out of this situation? It's going to end up the same every time, unless... "Sheela, I have an idea! Raise your paw!" I send another lightning bolt Sorren's way, jump off, and make a mad dash for Sheela's paws. "Better stomped than eaten!" I declare. In a few seconds, I find myself under her paws. "Alright, Sheela, stomp down as hard as you can!"
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
As sorren drops my student again, my wife lifts up her foot. As the Pikachu sprints towards her raised paw, he shrinks yet another inch. Once he gets under Sheela’s paw, she brings it down on top of him, completely covering him beneath it.
My wife giggles.
“fast thinking kid.”
Sorren laughs and begins to walk towards Sheela.
“it’s no use hiding kid. I’m coming for you.”
As he lifts up my wife’s paw, she scrunches her toes around the pikachu’s tail and holds him upside down.
“I won’t let you eat him sorren!”
The zoroark then smiles again.
“oh I’m done playing games with this kid. He’s my lunch now.”
He then opens his mouth wide, and puts my wife’s entire foot in his mouth.
“let go of my foot sorren!”
The zoroark presses his lips around Sheela’s foot, and slowly drags it out of his mouth. When it’s finally out, it is drenched in slimy saliva, and my student is no longer between her toes.
Mike:
The mouth of another Pokémon is a place I never wanted to visit, and one I hope to never visit again. The mouth of a Pokémon who is carrying out my detention is even less desirable. It's more wet than a pool, more slimy than oil, and more perilous than underneath their paws. "Let me out!" I try to say, but I doubt I'm heard through the thick skin of my captor. Instinctively, I think to use another move, but I'll just shrink down even more... I'll have to rely on Sheela. Wait a second... the Pokémon that is keeping me here now must also be the one to save me? What luck I have!
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
“gah! Spit him out sorren!” my wife yells.
“oh my….” I say, wondering if my student really just became sorren’s lunch.
The zoroark then slowly starts to gently and playfully chew on the tiny Pikachu.
“mmmmm…… delicious.”
“I said spit him OUT sorren!” my wife yells again.
Sorren then begins speaking as casually as if he didn’t have another person in his mouth.
“aww, come on Sheela. You can just bring him back with your magic after I swallow him.”
As the zoroark’s mouth opens and closes, I can see small glimpses of yellow inside.
Mike:
The drenching saliva from Sorren's mouth cascades over me like a tidal wave. With every movement of his jaw I am swirled around more and more; I have no control over my body as it is pushed around by the mighty weight of the fox's thick, greasy tongue. I try to grab onto it--and succeed, but it is a very loose grip. With little effort, I may be swallowed in an instant. "I need help over here!" I shout during the short periods of time when his mouth is open, the only hope I have of surviving.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife stands up with a serious look on her face. She then draws her wand and sets its tip alight with a flame.
“he hasn’t been that bad with us, and I don’t want to see someone who doesn’t deserve to get eaten disappear as a lump down your gullet! Now spit him out this instant or ill shrink YOU down and let HIM eat you!”
Sorren reluctantly stops his chewing and sighs.
“fine. I’ll spit him out. You’re no fun.”
I laugh as I see the zoroark succumb to my wife’s demand.
“she can be pretty forceful sometimes. That’s why I pray that no student ever gets on her bad side, or she may be likely to eat them herself.”
The zoroark then spits out my student like a piece of used chewing gum, and he lands on the floor with a splat, drenched in slimy saliva.
Mike:
"Ugh...thanks, Sheela..." I say with what would be a smile, but is a frozen, stoic face after the near-death experience that just happened. Before trying to wrap my head around what's going on, I should ask her. It'll be faster that way. "Why are you...helping me?" I manage to ask the massive Delphox.
xxxxyyyyzzzz:
My wife giggles at my student’s bewilderment.
“because, I don’t think you’ve been so bad that you deserved to get eaten. Also, you seem like a good kid. Maybe just a little misguided is all.”
Sheela then sits back down and uses her wand to materialize a couple of towels. She uses one to clean her saliva soaked paw and with the other, she picks up the tiny Pikachu and dries him up as well.
“now I hope you have learned your lesson and you’ll stop fighting so much. Next time, no matter how much the other person deserves to get hit by a lightning bolt, just let one of us know and we’ll take care of it.”
Sorren then smiles and chimes in.
“yeah. Just let me know who’s bullying you and I’ll eat them for you, I don’t mind.“
He then gives my student a toothy grin.
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